Open Mic: "2 Kings" - Trizzy Tre ft Manc |
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Trizzy Tre
Superior Member Joined: 28 March 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5101 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 30-7-1 Form: WLWLWW |
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Posted: 11 April 2014 at 3:22pm |
“Remember the conduct of each depends the fate of all…” - Alexander The Great I Rage war with force slaying all enemies crafting a masterpiece… That’s on some vengeance shit, to immobilize their army and finish off our nemesis! End drama by obliterating their infantry n slit ya queens throat perhaps… “Has God forgotten all I have done for him?” - King Louis XIV {Manc} Loyalty is paramount - to thrive is to be trusted “A Traitor is everyone who does not agree with me…” - King George III ******************************************************************** |
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nomedic
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ey thanks for another classic shit what the f are you guys on, liked how the quotes fell in place with the bars ya'll put both of you had mad internals ,and superb multiple rhymes to witness such a polished collab is just inspiring yal set that bar high
Trizz you had an aggressive theme right there on some brutal twisted dictatorship diction it was just top class and flow was dope as hell Manc your rhymes are smooth and flow top notch , guess thats what erbody expects from you mad nice man for such a flow to incorporate a horror like theme and a majestic ego shit Good work ya'll |
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IZIAH
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Fucking sick guys, i thought this was a very good piece. Flow was top for manc, and tre you had an agressive aproach for this. But both were ill. Keep it up yall. Ps- when did u start gettin along? Lol
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~Insight The Inspired~
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Trizzy Tre
Superior Member Joined: 28 March 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5101 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 30-7-1 Form: WLWLWW |
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Thanks for the looks fellas.
Yo IZ as far as me and Manc are concerned all that old beef is deaded. Although that beef led to some great diss verses. lol
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Brotha Goose
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This was dope fellas, really cool concept and I enjoyed the
Contrasting styles. The quotes y'all threw in their gaves this Piece a little something extra, a sense of real meaning if you will. TRIZZ.... "Battlefields a mess! Seek n destroy for joy, eternally conquer for centuries… A Rulers legacy is on his throne alone so theirs becomes a distant memory!" -Not sure if this was meant as a metaphor to describe LA, but I enjoyed it. "Envision this kingdom luring Gods to combat; deflecting bolts of lightning right from Zeus… Timing all our moves strategically destroying define intervention then hang’em by a noose!" -Thought the Zeus reference was cool, as well as the symbolism behind it. -Great verse here Triz, not only the technical aspects, but also the ideals and symbolism throughout. MANC.... "Survival is vital, it's my title that will breed fear, my people need me dearly, with me near the 'fear' is weak here," -This was smooth my dude and hard af. "Thou shall bow down in my presence or forever live infested with uncensored memories of heads he severed from their dead kids" -Sickness....that is all lol Luved the neat and compact lines here, you managed a shorter bar approach without losing yur usual finesse. Wording was smooth af, yur concepts dope as well as the execution. Solid collab here fellas, gud shit |
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Trizzy Tre
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Props on the indepth feed BG. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Trizzy Tre
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uppin for some feed fellas...
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Smoothtung
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TRIZ - these bars were crazy. Factually I’mma monster wit a Crown down to clash with any horseman left.. Use the Art of War to ensure conflict is nonsense even if our motto is wisdom… Then what’s left to prove? Burn our rivals homes where most their peasants’ live? That’s on some vengeance shit, to immobilize their army and finish off our nemesis! MANC - your verse was superbly written.. some dope bars but every word was placed perfectly so i'd quote the whole thing. stay up bitches. |
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Though you never even had the chance to witness it |
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XLNC
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Now First Ur drops make us Newbee's learn so Thnk u for this amazing OM
Tre-U had a depth and the aggression to make that emotion feel so basically ur verse was manipulative which is a plus point so if the story is about sympathy ur verse can make empathy out of it.For this to get really deep i have to go scuba divin and i don't have the gear so just makin some points out -: *Ur hardcore bro Manc-:U kno wat i'mma say so Bang!Bang! Ur the MANc!MANc! Keep writin folks and distribute knowledge to us |
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Elite
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TT - multies & lyrics and flow were sooo good. It's always good to see a drop like this from you. This was def a good move for you to collab with manc and use a topic like this. Stay up.
Manc - What do I have to say, honestly? Just an all around amazing verse from the both of you. Hope to see a 2nd collab from you 2 again soon. Stay up. Stay up guys and keep doing the shit your doing, cause your on the right track.
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Manc
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The feedback is greatly appreciated guys - very much so.
All credit to Trizz for this idea & for sprucing it up with the quotes & shit. Can imagine it surprised a few people considering mine and Trizzys colourful beefs. S'all well that ends well |
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Titu
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Good shit,fellas. Trizz zz zz: very agressive. Loved the fluidity of the verse. Self hypes are usually boring cuz they are easy to write: it needs some extraordinary skills to make them interesting. So writing a good self hype is more difficult tbh. And you did a good job here. These bars were standouts for me... Factually I’mma monster wit a Crown down to clash with any horseman left.. My sword protects the thin line between the road for Glory or certain death! ^^ 2nd line was dope as fuck imo... Battlefields a mess! Seek n destroy for joy, eternally conquer for centuries… A Rulers legacy is on his throne alone so theirs becomes a distant memory! Envision this kingdom luring Gods to combat; deflecting bolts of lightning right from Zeus… Timing all our moves strategically destroying define intervention then hang’em by a noose! Manc- Besides those dope concepts, your vocablary was crazy bro. The near rhymes were perfect. carried out atrocities, got off on screams of rivals, evil resides deep in these eyes, I'm often seen as spiteful, ^^ flow.. Damn survival is vital, it's my title that will breed fear, my people need me dearly, with me near the 'fear' is weak here, revered by masses classed as being members of this kingdom, with an ego thats distended when contenders are contingent, Good shit brothers. Always good to see ya guys dropping verses. Thea is always something new to learn from..Lots of props on this.. |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Exoduzt
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first off I loved the opening quote. It's nice to see you 2 collabing for real
Triz: Your opening bar drew me rite in. I feel you are highly underestimated when it come to flow. I honestly feel when you want to you have one of the better flows on the site. "Seek n destroy for joy, eternally conquer for centuries… "Raise my fist in victory, rose from the ashes no scratches only burnt armor… End drama by obliterating their infantry n slit ya queens throat perhaps… Manc: I personally liked the way your opening bar was set up. I liked how you changed the rhyme scheme on it. It was quite refreshing. "revered by masses classed as being members of this kingdom, with an ego thats distended when contenders are contingent,respect remains commanded, though 'unselfish' is a great trait, yet traitors will be dealt with & the haters face a grave fait, "make way for he who knows best.. he who's brave & strong cements us" for to 'go against' will no less be who faces consequences "----damn at the flow Manc. Especially that last bar and line. I reread it a few times just because it rolled rite off my tongue. "thou shall bow down in my presence or forever live infested with uncensored memories of heads he severed from their dead kids"----I loved the imagery in this. It was dark and brutal and rite up my alley hahaVery dope collab guys. Yall should do more work together |
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Kiki Spirez
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This was unlikely! Haha.
Glad it happened though. Both were near flawless. Triz, liked the attitude in your bars. Having bars is one thing, but you imagine the tone behind them, that takes real skill. Raise my fist in victory, rose from the ashes no scratches only burnt armor… Like this. Manc my man, you came with a more philosophical feel, and it complimented Triz's well. However, that last bar was both crazy and fucking heartless haha |
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CHAIN
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Yoooo...
I don't know about this, that lil' beef y'all had got a little too real for comfort but alright. lol I guess it's love. Peace to y'all. Back to the om. Somethings just deserve to be labeled classic off GP. First off, being on my phone makes my quote game flabby. Trizzy killed everything between the tradition/ and the armor bar. Very fluid and expressive, lol Your most well rounded verse ever IMHO. That was a body. Manc is low key unfuckwithable on the techinical side of things. You're LI and all that but you know...That was crazy. I hate being on my own dick but this looks like something I could've dropped in my prime. Shit was perfect to me. lol Multis all over the place but there's no emphasis on them, the shit just flows. to both of y'all |
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Trizzy Tre
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Hey I'm always down for a worthly beef and get some hot verses down. But that shit is all in the past. Deaded. It was an intense time in LA. lol Thanks for the great feed fellas and for a really in-depth breakdown. Yea i figured dudes would be shocked about this..lol all good tho. Glad ya'll was feelin this as some classic shit. Respect. |
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Elite
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Just got here in Feb so dont mind me.
There was a Trizzy Tre and Manc beef I missed?? Dammit.
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Trizzy Tre
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Yea man. But shit is documented in the hitory of LA, I aint about to rehash it now... Thanks for the looks bruh.. |
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Elite
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haha no prob. This piece was ill btw.
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Elite
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For what it's worth, I have a beef/problem with someone here too, but shit isn't worth much of my time, i would imagine that was partially your situation, too.
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