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    Posted: 07 May 2008 at 12:56pm
I was comparin my flow to a girl like I call my flow my girl hopefully y'all know what i was talkin bout
 
This is what y'all wanted a person that gotta nice flow n tight rhymes
well y'all im here n what I be writin can definetly keep hip hop alive
n all these emcees want my flow you can tell just look at there eyes
its like my flow is a girl wit big tits slim hips thick lips n nice thighs
they eyes be wide open lookin like they're gonna pop out the sockets
they jaws won't connect back to the mouth so they put it in there pockets
the rappers blast full speed like rockets to tryin get her to stop quick
so they can study her girl out n see just what this girl likes(Mcs studyin my flow)
so they can get her as her own n away from her man The ghost ice(Take my style away)
only I knows what she likes im the only one that can put the clothes on her(put the punclines or metaphors n the verse)
cause I knew her for a while or relationship straight it got no turns or corners
 
 
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flow was cool enuff, length of lines and all that, but i dont think it will rank any higher than ama tho im no judge.
my suggestion is work on coming up with some unique plays and better metaphors.
although good flow wise, the content is basic bro
keep up
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Aight thats why I came to the spit for a rank so I could see what I need to improve on thanks anyone else got more
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Yea this was pretty basic so untill i see anything else from you im gonna rank you Novice. Show me that you can drop something a little more complex and you'll get a rank bump quick...stay up fam

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Cool aight
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