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 “Six is a number perfect in itself, not because God created all things in six days; rather, the convert is true God created all things in six days because the number is perfect.” Saint Augustine (The City of God)

CHAIN

The pen and pad that's my kitchen ware
Michelin starred from the start of this fiscal year (Damn)
It's the bar brigadier brought it since Britney Spears..
Charted, I charred it, i'm charged up like 'bitch come here!' (Yeah)
Rap sheet reads like a burgeoning film career
Visuals, visuals never been middle tier (No)
Lyrical miracle that is not CHAIN
CHAIN and the wordplay are Arthur and Guinevere (Bro)
Artist or engineer, maybe he's both
Foes know he blew up like Marjory Simpsons hair (Whoa)
God, they are softer than cartilage and pinky swears (Gross)
The throne they are watching to me is a swivel chair (Ho)
The flow brings the pain of orphan and widow tears (Cold)
Cry me a river, i'm waiting in my fishing gear (Y
o)
Can you not see that i'm Pac and a grizzly bear.. Mixed
Can you not see that i'm OM's most popular trillionaire, bitch

NIGMA
 
Come with them putaso’s..
Every cross thrown leave you babies with a snot nose
I’m beyond dope, smoke a genie in a bong toke
Punches y’all are chucking aren’t touching us..
Y’all fornicate with testicles? Ya fucking nuts
Not tough enough to beat us, each divine redeemers
Fly with speeds and twice the heat of the brightest meteor
Combined the typa demons you should keep undercover
To make the people yell “OHHHHH” like they speaking in colours
Tryna reach my level? Left you with your fellow slaves
I train tethered to the ocean’s floor and echo waves
Get no pain laying in desert terrain till I’m set ablaze
Since I meditate in trees so dense they deflect the rays
Perspectives change in shade, it’s an introspective state
I Father devils like Deckard Cain, a decrepit angel, so pucker up
These uppercuts cause sweat to spray when they wreck your face
Send you to the depths of space to lay in your resting place
It’s respect by nature

ILL SCRIPTUREZ

Rappin' to the dead cuz I mummify verses
Summertime grind is how I summarize workin'
On my mother I'll remove ya fuckin' eyes, certain
Claimin' American but a Russian spy lurkin'
I don't put the gun aside, Cal-cutta guys turban
Haven't had a day that didn't justify bourbon
Concentrated genocide you can trust that I'm German
Only snaps on my beat is the crunch of my vermin
iLL with a blade is a butterfly surgeon
Open up ya chest like pumpkin pie dessert 'n
Come alive in churches & uncover my purpose
Summoned by the pure words uttered by a virgin
Pluperfect pictures no Shutterfly to discover I'm perfect
Gutter rhymes will have ya Hummer ride swervin'
Like you're drunk then drive to other side
You fuckin' die ya lover cries cuz every punch of mine's hurtin'

EXO

As the clock ticks with promises
I know I can stick with dominance
I'm the prominent Romulus your time is up
But the problem is my mind is fucked
Robbing kids for lines and such
I'm talking white girl, cus your rhymes just suck
Tom Brady bitches who's vaginas are tucked
The Raider in this collab & it's fine with us
Bless the sky with Duzt- More skill than Lebrons hands
So i'm heaven sent further than water beyond land
Smarter than a bong pass, no I haven't gone mad
Just flowing with each of my comrades
No congrats to dumb rats, in the wrong taps
Chasing the wrong cheese over some dumb crap
I'm just wondering where the gun at
Cus I got more dirt on me than a mud flap

KI

That Vet assigned to bust, your times resigned to clutch
Find the much fired of us line up, mind the midas touch
Sign that fucks were given, shook a kid, took the rhythm
Hook the bitten, shut the lid, sit and look at riddum
Fucking wid 'em? Cos this free might see ISIS through
Light this doob? Now i'm high free, fight this newb
Right it's true, Keeks has highly spiked its doom
Lighter tunes? If I was you, I'd have ID Crisis 2
Why's this news? It's passion, hence I ask where ya' passion went?
So just imagine tense where Keeks hasn't sensed-
Tension, with you all sat on the fence, passin 'friends'
In callout, threads need uppin' like I have ass fashion sense
*PAUSE*
Think this is all I can? Man, I STILL hoard parts
Have 'em callin' DAMN like it's the Billboard Charts
Ill thoughts dart with will that could fill four carts
Your Gilmour smarts can swing, but my skill swords hearts


DTK

You can polish a verse but i'm bombing you nerds with competent words
Plotting a curse on pompous conserved, ominous sirs i'm a monster with verbs
No justice league, Im busting seams on anyone that fucks with me
They run and scream as I kill young emcees that I punch and knee on any rugged beat
No mumble rap I'm fucking done with that...I arrive like a thunder clap
You can stay dumping gats, i'll punch and slap your tounge and back until your mother fucking lungs collapse
I'm a sewage pipe, the putrid type I come through at night like a human plight
a prototype of woodys neighbour Sid if he decied to go ham,spit raps and produce em right
I strong arm lames and plotting to bomb strays in a hot spot in pompei...
And my aim is long range so you know aint got the answers like Kayne talking to the don sway!
You're overated, i'm underplayed... theres no debate that... my lungs are made
Of cobra venom so I love to slay... any damn rapper that spits something lame
Preforming precision incisions on any spitter im hitting with reckless conditions
Step to my writtens you'll get left with some missing, next to kin and mess in the kitchen
I bench press a millions different setences, and when my pen flexes it's penmanship
I'm like the Kendrick of the internet leaving a big mess of evidence whenever you step to this



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Nobody feeding this??? Let me kick it off.

Chain
Its your usual swagger here. I like the use of multi in this because its a shorter verse, helped it flow smoothly. This was my favorite part of your verse. it was strung together so effortlessly.

CHAIN and the wordplay are Arthur and Guinevere (Bro)
Artist or engineer, maybe he's both
Foes know he blew up like Marjory Simpsons hair (Whoa)
God, they are softer than cartilage and pinky swears (Gross)
The throne they are watching to me is a swivel chair

Nigma
What I like most is your use of vocabulary in this. One line in particular(speaking in colours) might have went over my head a bit so that was my only fall out with your verse. My favorite section was:

I’m beyond dope, smoke a genie in a bong toke
Punches y’all are chucking aren’t touching us..
Y’all fornicate with testicles? Ya fucking nuts

ILL
Buddy...your verse was flames. The wordplay and the smoothness of the flow here is immaculate. And the rhyme scheme you chose to go with was dope. I would quote your entire verse honestly but i was most fond of


Haven't had a day that didn't justify bourbon
Concentrated genocide you can trust that I'm German
Only snaps on my beat is the crunch of my vermin
iLL with a blade is a butterfly surgeon

Exo
to me your verse was the one with its chest poked out. You flowed as if you are the old head in the game and letting these young thunder cats know you can still flow with the best of them. There was nothing hard hitting but then again, it didnt have to be. My favorite bar was

Tom Brady bitches who's vaginas tucked
The Raider in this collab & it's fine with us
Bless the sky with Duzt-

Ki
I like the aggression in your verse. its almost like you still have something to prove but you're definitely one of the more established vets, at the same time its a good trait to still have. Your stand out for me was

Right it's true, Keeks has highly spiked its doom
Lighter tunes? If I was you, I'd have ID Crisis 2

D2K
You came with the longer bars with tons packed into it. I like the aggression in this as well. My only downfall is actually the length of the lines. I think the shorter bars from every one else threw me off once i got to yours. But your verse was dope to close out everyone else's as well. You were the 6 god for this

Step to my writtens you'll get left with some missing next to kin and mess in the kitchen
I bench press millions of different sentences and when my pen flexes it's penmanship

Nice collab fellas Clap


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Yell OHHH/Yellow

Thanks for the breakdown bro, it's a long ass collab, don't expect much feed tbh. I'm sure people are reading it and that's all that matters.

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Guy! Thanks man..

Nigma, I agree!
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The pen and pad that's my kitchen ware 
Michelin starred from the start of this fiscal year (Damn) 
Ha! I swear the only reason I understood this whole bar was from watching kitchen Nightmares. This was dope

It's the bar brigadier brought it since Britney Spears.. 
Charted, I charred it, i'm charged up like 'bitch come here!' (Yeah) 
lol...diggin the add ons at the end of every bar

Rap sheet reads like a burgeoning film career 
Visuals, visuals never been middle tier (No) 
Lyrical miracle that is not CHAIN 
CHAIN and the wordplay are Arthur and Guinevere (Bro) 
This verse would sound chunky in audio

Artist or engineer, maybe he's both
Foes know he blew up like Marjory Simpsons hair (Whoa) 
God, they are softer than cartilage and pinky swears (Gross) 
lmao @ pinky swear

The throne they are watching to me is a swivel chair (Ho) 
The flow brings the pain of orphan and widow tears (Cold) 
Cry me a river, i'm waiting in my fishing gear (Yo) 
Can you not see that i'm Pac and a grizzly bear.. Mixed 
Can you not see that i'm OM's most popular trillionaire, bitch
Clap I see what you did here. Gotta admit I like the fact you are dabbling in fresh ways to convey your raw talent for ruggedness. 

NIGMA
 
Come with them putaso’s..
Every cross thrown leave you babies with a snot nose
I’m beyond dope, smoke a genie in a bong toke<----- Ha!! Dope!
Punches y’all are chucking aren’t touching us..
Y’all fornicate with testicles? Ya fucking nuts
^^ This whole segment was butter smooth

Not tough enough to beat us, each divine redeemers
Fly with speeds and twice the heat of the brightest meteor
That second line was tight^^

Combined the typa demons you should keep undercover
To make the people yell “OHHHHH” like they speaking in colours

Tryna reach my level? Left you with your fellow slaves
I train tethered to the ocean’s floor and echo waves
Get no pain laying in desert terrain till I’m set ablaze
Since I meditate in trees so dense they deflect the rays
Perspectives change in shade, it’s an introspective state<-----Nasty!
This segment was sharp my dude^

I Father devils like Deckard Cain, a decrepit angel, so pucker up
These uppercuts cause sweat to spray when they wreck your face
Send you to the depths of space to lay in your resting place
Ha! Ha! Yup!! Again the connections was on point...flow raw.
It’s respect by nature
Yesssirrr!! Nice drop bro!

ILL SCRIPTUREZ

Rappin' to the dead cuz I mummify verses
Summertime grind is how I summarize workin'
On my mother I'll remove ya fuckin' eyes, certain
Claimin' American but a Russian spy lurkin'
^^^ LOL!!!!  Priceless!!

I don't put the gun aside, Cal-cutta guys turban
Haven't had a day that didn't justify bourbon <-----That was just sick how it came off

Concentrated genocide you can trust that I'm German
Only snaps on my beat is the crunch of my vermin
iLL with a blade is a butterfly surgeon 
Great skill with the word placement^^
Open up ya chest like pumpkin pie dessert 'n
Come alive in churches & uncover my purpose 
Summoned by the pure words uttered by a virgin<---lmao!! Love this line!
Pluperfect pictures no Shutterfly to discover I'm perfect
Gutter rhymes will have ya Hummer ride swervin'
Like you're drunk then drive to other side 
You fuckin' die ya lover cries cuz every punch of mine's hurtin'
Thumbs Up

EXO

As the clock ticks with promises
I know I can stick with dominance
Way to come out the gate chunkin'em!

I'm the prominent Romulus your time is up 
But the problem is my mind is fucked 
Robbing kids for lines and such
I'm talking white girl, cus your rhymes just suck 
Tom Brady bitches who's vaginas are tucked 
The Raider in this collab & it's fine with us 
I see you got on another level with the short bar skill.I gotta show love for the effortless way you show up. Indeed a Monster

Bless the sky with Duzt- More skill than Lebrons hands 
So i'm heaven sent further than water beyond land <---Haaa ! Nice!
Smarter than a bong pass, no I haven't gone mad
Just flowing with each of my comrades
No congrats to dumb rats, in the wrong taps
Chasing the wrong cheese over some dumb crap 
I'm just wondering where the gun at
Cus I got more dirt on me than a mud flap
Very slick bro. The way you wrote it out forces the mind to pick up the pace which adds the extra entertainment value.Clap





Gotta Feed the rest later when I get off work


KI

That Vet assigned to bust, your times resigned to clutch
Find the much fired of us line up, mind the midas touch
Sign that fucks were given, shook a kid, took the rhythm
Hook the bitten, shut the lid, sit and look at riddum
Fucking wid 'em? Cos this free might see ISIS through
Light this doob? Now i'm high free, fight this newb
Right it's true, Keeks has highly spiked its doom
Lighter tunes? If I was you, I'd have ID Crisis 2
Why's this news? It's passion, hence I ask where ya' passion went?
So just imagine tense where Keeks hasn't sensed-
Tension, with you all sat on the fence, passin 'friends'
In callout, threads need uppin' like I have ass fashion sense 
*PAUSE*
Think this is all I can? Man, I STILL hoard parts 
Have 'em callin' DAMN like it's the Billboard Charts 
Ill thoughts dart with will that could fill four carts 
Your Gilmour smarts can swing, but my skill swords hearts

DTK 

You can polish a verse but i'm bombing you nerds with competent words
Plotting a curse on pompous conserved, ominous sirs i'm a monster with verbs
No justice league, Im busting seams on anyone that fucks with me
They run and scream as I kill young emcees that I punch and knee on any rugged beat
No mumble rap I'm fucking done with that...I arrive like a thunder clap
You can stay dumping gats, i'll punch and slap your tounge and back until your mother fucking lungs collapse
I'm a sewage pipe, the putrid type I come through at night like a human plight
a prototype of woodys neighbour Sid if he decied to go ham,spit raps and produce em right
I strong arm lames and plotting to bomb strays in a hot spot in pompei...
And my aim is long range so you know aint got the answers like Kayne talking to the don sway!
You're overated, i'm underplayed... theres no debate that... my lungs are made
Of cobra venom so I love to slay... any damn rapper that spits something lame
Preforming precision incisions on any spitter im hitting with reckless conditions
Step to my writtens you'll get left with some missing, next to kin and mess in the kitchen
I bench press a millions different setences, and when my pen flexes it's penmanship
I'm like the Kendrick of the internet leaving a big mess of evidence whenever you step to this

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KI

That Vet assigned to bust, your times resigned to clutch
Find the much fired of us line up, mind the midas touch
You have become quite the wordsmith bro. Wordplacement is razor sharp right here.

Sign that fucks were given, shook a kid, took the rhythm
Hook the bitten, shut the lid, sit and look at riddum
Fucking wid 'em? Cos this free might see ISIS through
Light this doob? Now i'm high free, fight this newb
Ha ha!! I can picture you movin your hands in cadence with this nasty segment right here. Why cuz I'm spitting it over and I can't help but to be like bing...bing....Bing! Nice

Right it's true, Keeks has highly spiked its doom
Lighter tunes? If I was you, I'd have ID Crisis 2
Why's this news? It's passion, hence I ask where ya' passion went?
So just imagine tense where Keeks hasn't sensed-
Tension, with you all sat on the fence, passin 'friends'
In callout, threads need uppin' like I have ass fashion sense 
*PAUSE*
Think this is all I can? Man, I STILL hoard parts 
Have 'em callin' DAMN like it's the Billboard Charts 
Ill thoughts dart with will that could fill four carts 
Your Gilmour smarts can swing, but my skill swords hearts
Clap Very enetertaining and awsome flow. Nice bars n transitions. Props!

DTK 

You can polish a verse but i'm bombing you nerds with competent words
Plotting a curse on pompous conserved, ominous sirs i'm a monster with verbs
STOP!!.....Out the gate this was clean as hell ha!

No justice league, Im busting seams on anyone that fucks with me
They run and scream as I kill young emcees that I punch and knee on any rugged beat
No mumble rap I'm fucking done with that...I arrive like a thunder clap
You can stay dumping gats, i'll punch and slap your tounge and back until your mother fucking lungs collapse
yessiiirr!

I'm a sewage pipe, the putrid type I come through at night like a human plight
a prototype of woodys neighbour Sid if he decied to go ham,spit raps and produce em right
I strong arm lames and plotting to bomb strays in a hot spot in pompei...
And my aim is long range so you know aint got the answers like Kayne talking to the don sway!
You're overated, i'm underplayed... theres no debate that... my lungs are made
Of cobra venom so I love to slay... any damn rapper that spits something lame
Preforming precision incisions on any spitter im hitting with reckless conditions
Step to my writtens you'll get left with some missing, next to kin and mess in the kitchen
I bench press a millions different setences, and when my pen flexes it's penmanship
I'm like the Kendrick of the internet leaving a big mess of evidence whenever you step to this

Man!! I was just reminded why DTK is such a killer. Rhymes back to back to back. Talkin that shit! "Youre overrated, I'm Underplayed" Lmao.....dope!. This was a crispy collab yall. Sorry it took me so long to finish the feed. 

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