Open Mic: A Close Circle (32 Bars)

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    Posted: 04 June 2009 at 3:43pm
Only a rhymer??


Let’em know the difference…


Focusing on goals is a stepping stone to figures
That statement makes sense but u never know with niggas
Especially the broke ones, the cheddar’s so delicious
The end results are drama in this terror dome of lizards
Episodes of stress they won’t, let it go, they bicker
Stethoscopin’ convos like they checking posts on Twitter
Dead a good relationship to sweat a hoe that’s thicker
Exes expose them on the net uploading pictures
Prolly’ lost their pride to the bread they owe to bitches
In a barrel full of crabs that peddle poems for riches
We’re not gonna make it, won’t bet my dough on this shit
Leave the flow, even though my breath control is vicious
Finding out it’s hopeless, a heavy load delivered
Godly ‘cause the things made of flesh and bone would give up
The restless souls, the quitters from Mexico to Switzer-
-Land that know the Street Life like Reggie Noble’s nigga
That road is too slippery and as wet as open blisters
Cheating on your life as u text her only sister
Death is closing in with its pedal flo’ ed to get ya
The weather’s colder where the weapon holders slither
Vets too old to party still stressing over liquor
Tryna out thug me like: “yes, I pulled them triggers”
Polluted ass wisdom, they fed the homies litter
Telling us the watches will let us know who’s richer
Ready fo’ a stick up, so give the loot to these…
Little dudes on E making Lexus owners quiver
Respect the code or bring some extra soldiers with ya
Even divas scheming will threaten blokes with scissors
Fresh in Polo denim with the leather coated zippers
Heaven on heels, no sex befo’ they trick ya
This is real talk and I bet my scrolls are sicker
Street actualities with metapho’s like GZA


diddy bop with me now....



Edited by CHAIN - 04 June 2009 at 3:43pm
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Vets too old to party still stressing over liquor
Tryna out thug me like: “yes, I pulled them triggers”
Polluted ass wisdom, they fed the homies litter
Telling us the watches will let us know who’s richer

Highlight IMO ^^^^

Sick shit as per

Btw, i was reading this while listening to this, and the beat maybe made it even sicker, i don't know.. lol

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CSKBkXPP7TU
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Illin' on 'em again, mayng!

L.A. wake up, god damnit!

Shit is dope right here! Real recognise real... that's what's up!

Keep 'em comin', Chizzle
Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth


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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Point Blank Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 June 2009 at 9:05pm
Leave the flow, even though my breath control is vicious

Cheating on your life as u text her only sister
Death is closing in with its pedal flo’ ed to get ya
The weather’s colder where the weapon holders slither


Lol, man...the life/death thing was just sick^.... proves your not just a rhymer lol.This is the best drop ive seen from in a long time. The rhymescheme just makes me wanna start writin...we need to get back on the collabs.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote I-SEE-GRIPS Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 June 2009 at 10:53pm
That was a blinding read Chain
Can always rely on you for that
Second time I read it I was really feeling the way this piece flowed
Peace
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Immense.






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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Calibra Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 June 2009 at 2:28am
Too sick, like you need to prove anything though lol
This is why I told you to drop this solo, dopeness!
 
New Era... Hollllaaaa!!
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This is actually ridiculous
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Exoduzt Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 June 2009 at 6:35pm
classic classic shit man...your word usage is absolutely crazy...I cant believe you said as wet as open blisters...everyone of your drops is so damn creative...damn man...sick as fuckin usual

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Classic
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ya sick drop as usual from chain
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Agreed.






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yea i likes dem Clap
U already know...
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