Open Mic: A short UK drill rap-themed Wagwaan diss

Hmmm, OK i'm going to be honest here, this was very basic in rhyme
scheme, on reading i got visions of a kids in a school yard in the way
of dissing, i get your coming from a drill angle, but even them guys
are not this basic, and the gay-ish in text (OM's/Disses/Battle) is a
no no and should be avoided at all cost, it doesn't sit well with a re-
ader...lol...and this is me just being a prick here, but in the UK ER is
called AE, (accident & emergency), insignificant really but verses are
about details, if the WOW effect is to be reached little things like this
matter, but as a tongue in cheek piece it was decent....peace.

Mitch.Wagwaan wrote: I am dumb, I do drink cum. Smear it? Nahh plaster it on. One inch long? That's being generous son, Don't eat beans, just inhale up my buns, Tweak on hash? With what cash ya Broke, Just like your whole verse, ya lifes a joke, Come round your ends? Ain't you country folk? Sit your ass down, you lost two battles, dont sulk.

Glad you found it funny, When you come at me with a joke of a diss it's only fair to crack a joke back.

Rule #1 of Dissing someone,

Make the other person look silly, not yourself.

How can you ever expect to elevate with the quality of these drops? You’re strictly here to post verses that are absolutely atrocious and expect people to praise you for posting garbage. LA doesn’t roll like that. 10/10 times you’re going to be told it’s shit, if it’s shit. If you contributed outside of being a fuck boy and posting dumb shit, people would give you the guidance you desperately need. We don’t baby people here and stroke weak egos. We keep it a buck regardless if you post some dumb shit you wrote at 3AM or the best crafted verse you ever did. This type of shit is never going to help your cause.

The flow is ok, could use some more finesse. The diss itself is very basic, try to make these statements into actual punches or something more clever. Dont mistake this feed for hate, I dont know you.