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Joined: 11 January 2018
Location: South Africa
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Points: 6
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    Posted: 11 January 2018 at 10:51pm
I remember High school, smoking dope with the dudes
Nothing But a High fool, Fluent to be smooth
I never meant to be cruel I seek to reach Goals and Dreams need to be pursued
My Nigga!!! I'm just trying to stay cool
Chilling - Eagerly - spitting - like someone - that has nothing - to lose
Truly to be true, truthfully, I only speak truth
Quick get me to the dentist Dude
I see fresh youth - I have a loose tooth
"Sit Down - Open Wide:" - its surgery time in the booth
Spitting - like I be killing - patiently - waiting - for you to slip up - My Nigga!! - I guarantee you - be the on that's stepping
While I'm flipping, one line - one hit - type rhymes - as if I'm hitting a one hit pipe
I feel energetic - like a never-ending - EverReady - battery - forever I be ready
Stop Flapping at the mouth
my paws are from the south
but I'm not left handed - IL hand it back to you in a package
Merry Christmas and have a happy new year - put in your order
Il send a parcel to your faggots
How serious do you think i am  in this business
I'm writing shit down, documenting your movements
From pen to pages - Sherlock Holmes
super detective, you can call me inspector gadget
I've had it - with your detrimental hypnotic flows not to mention
your Mr. mime mimics - ain't got no time for your gimmicks
you will find that constantly I consciously stay on topic
I still like you tho, to spite your monotonous flow
i apologize, I'm just being honest
exercising my civil right, what ever freedom of speech
presumably is, never looking for trouble
the meditation is humble - so don't mumble when you crumble
underground hip hop i stay patriotic - I might fumble
a verse but my words make up for the Losses
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