General Board: All in the Mind

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   ok, folks, you've all been waiting for this and here it is! lol, jk. ok, this is the final product of a short film i made for my Film Studies course finals. it was a group project. I came up with the monologue and was the Director of Photography (camera guy). The casts were friends of one of my classmate so don't expect any Deniro type performance lmao. let me know what yall think. 

https://vimeo.com/218246804

i tried to embed it but its vimeo, so i dont' think i'm able to do it. but thats the link.

Edited by Nigma - 20 May 2017 at 4:35am

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Sammy Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 24 October 2015 Status: Offline Points: 1697 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-1 Form: LNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Sammy Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: All in the Mind Posted: 20 May 2017 at 4:15am
	ok, folks, you've all been waiting for this and here it is! lol, jk. ok, this is the final product of a short film i made for my Film Studies course finals. it was a group project. I came up with the monologue and was the Director of Photography (camera guy). The casts were friends of one of my classmate so don't expect any Deniro type performance lmao. let me know what yall think. https://vimeo.com/218246804 i tried to embed it but its vimeo, so i dont' think i'm able to do it. but thats the link. Edited by Nigma - 20 May 2017 at 4:35am


Neek Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3324 Audio Rank: #7 Stats: 2-0-1 Form: WNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Neek Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 May 2017 at 4:33am
	this was pretty dope sammy. the voice-over work was a bit iffy, felt real monotone. I liked the camera work, the concept and the black and white feel. also poland spring is my second favorite water.
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Sammy Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 24 October 2015 Status: Offline Points: 1697 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-1 Form: LNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Sammy Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 May 2017 at 7:57pm
	dasani or die, son!! and thanks, Neek, 'preciate it bro. the theme was noir lol. to get the style down i watched that movie Rounders, with matt damon. dope movie, if u havent seen it yet


Neek Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3324 Audio Rank: #7 Stats: 2-0-1 Form: WNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Neek Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 May 2017 at 7:58pm
	many times bro.
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Rude Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 03 February 2014 Status: Offline Points: 230 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-2-0 Form: LWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Rude Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 May 2017 at 9:46pm
	Ha I was gonna say I liked the noir theme. Solid camera work, some of the audio was a bit hard to hear, but I completely understand that 1. without the right equipment (boom mics and etc.) and 2. these are fellow classmates friends vs actors with good voice projection. Overall though I thought it was clean and dope.
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DressToKill Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6701 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote DressToKill Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 May 2017 at 9:56pm
	I dig it bro, I agree with Neek though you need to bring more emotion to the vocal aspect of the film. The actual camera angles and shit were on it felt legit. Nice work


Sammy Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 24 October 2015 Status: Offline Points: 1697 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-1 Form: LNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Sammy Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 May 2017 at 4:03am
	Rude, DTK, ur both awesome. i def want to shoot another short now!


Crimson Juice Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 2091 Crew: Alter Egos Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-8-0 Form: WLLLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Crimson Juice Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 May 2017 at 7:08am
	Damn that was solid for a short,liked the fact it was done in black/white,plus the music in the background with the horn gave this on the whole a ripe ambience,you did well i liked it,you picked a solid subject to film too,a classic that never gets old,(a card game), plus the guy who feels different,and it was narrated and put together well also,the only fault i could find was the focus in parts was slightly slow (and i mean slightly) zooming in,(when focusing on the cards),but to be honest it ended up adding character to the short for me,gave it a sense of realism,and Rude nailed it with the noir theme/vibe,in fact it reminded me of the video game LA Noir,ripe work Sammy,real nice..peace.
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