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Sick-Witted 
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 Topic: An Overseas Flow From Me...Posted: 28 January 2012 at 7:22pm |
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Waddup peoples, it's been a long time...
But I'm overseas at the moment, repping for Team America,
So it is, what it is, anyways, check it out...
(written to Lil Wayne's "Drop the World" instrumental)
I’ma Soldier Up and fight Cause I got, something to prove And so what if I die I aint got, nothing to lose There aint a 9 to 5 or child & wife That suffers if I deuce Yeah I got a few brothers and a couple sisters too And I love ‘em, but the truth Is none of ‘em, can do A thing for me But pray for me and wonder what I’m doing Cause I’m overseas fightin’ And oh, it seems like it’s Never gonna end Cause these cobras keep rising So I hold my heat high and Load to re-mind them Their death is in my grip And approaching me might get Them rodents deep-fried an If you don’t believe, try it Cause I Live Life Loud And I won’t just be silenced Yeah, I’m here to bring the noise To you terror raising boys And to tear away your voice Until your barricade’s destroyed Cause you hide behind fear And you’re speaking with violence But I am not scared So keep this in mind cause If we meet in this life I’ma reach down and I’m… **“Gonna pick the world up and I’ma drop it on your fucking head!"** Edited by Sick-Witted - 28 January 2012 at 7:28pm |
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I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it |
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Posted: 28 January 2012 at 7:29pm |
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just like ya name sick-witted.. this was sick piece overall.. simple and effective.. and as a reader it kept me going.. flow and rhyming was sick on the whole piece.. everything was kept to the point.. I like how u put the personal feelings there..
overall dope drop..
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Posted: 28 January 2012 at 8:11pm |
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Damn fam, I got chillbumps reading that shit. The heart and anger shined through in this and daaaaammmn at that closer, lol - that shit went HARD.
stay strong and keep hittin the keys!
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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 12:18am |
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Thats was dope as hell.
Like J said that last couple of bars was fire. Hope to see more from you
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Posted: 30 January 2012 at 12:50pm |
...sick is the king of multis...i'll just watch the throne, lol
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Posted: 30 January 2012 at 1:09pm |
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that shyt was real nice fam....im glad you could stop by every once ina while to drop sum jewlz on niggas
Sass
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Sick-Witted
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Posted: 31 January 2012 at 2:55pm |
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thanx for the feed yall., I do what I can... |
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I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it |
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Posted: 31 January 2012 at 3:05pm |
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Enjoyed the drop Sick
Def had a certain something special |
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Posted: 03 February 2012 at 9:55am |
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Dope Sick.....hands down
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Posted: 09 February 2012 at 2:17pm |
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this is some powerful stuff
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- Grimy Gómez
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Posted: 18 February 2012 at 6:25pm |
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Yea man - you did that beat some fuckin justice there yano. I actually played the instru from YouTube as I read this to get a proper feel for it - and it seemed to go really well with it. Was a couple of bits that threw me off but for the most part - it went along perfectly.
Lyric wise - again - dope. First 4 bars were as tight as they could be. Worded perfectly and made sense along with the scheme you used. Over-seas fighting/Cobras keep rising/load to remind em .............. that whole set was fuckin eyebrow raising material for sure Sick. The the part from 'away your voice' - to the end - finished this off great. Dope drop again Sick |
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Posted: 23 February 2012 at 3:36am |
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flow and rhymes is always sick, cant wait to hear more on audio. and thats some real shit.. stay safe. |
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Posted: 23 February 2012 at 12:40pm |
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waddup Stalin....I'm good out here....
holding it down/
with the A-R on gate guard, controlling the crowd
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