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DressToKill 
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 Topic: Anarkey - Untouchable (Snippet)Posted: 09 December 2017 at 3:36am |
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Here's a snippet of a track I'm working on, let me know what you think https://soundcloud.com/user-206308494/anarkey-untouchable-snippet |
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The original comeback kid
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Cheeseburger Eddie
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Posted: 10 December 2017 at 4:06am |
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I'd lose the yo in the beginning but maybe that's just me.
Obviously the start and end to the verse was some awesome flow. I thought the middle dragged though. The flow wasn't nearly as interesting and the rhyme schemes came off as overly simplistic when in contrast to the start and end of the verse. Not saying you need the onslaught the whole way through, a break so the listener can get their bearings and really pick out a few lines is great I just think it could be elevated a bit. I dig it though.
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Posted: 10 December 2017 at 11:24am |
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Thanks cheeseburger, you dropping any audios soon? I thought I remembered you being an audio head? Big thanks for the feed
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