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    Posted: 20 October 2005 at 2:52pm

iiiite, Quick Breifing...A couple of you already know...My Grandma Has Cancer of the Bone..She cant Move..She just lays Staring at the ceiling day in day out..She can hardly Talk Cos of the Morphene...yet its 'illegal' to pull the plug Shits stupid...U get arrested for putting somebody through Pain..Yet a hospital can Keep somebody living who's got no chance and is basically already dead...Ne ways My Granma'  (shes Moms, Grandma..But i still call her mine instead of Great Grandma) Ne ways My Grandma Was like my Moms, Mom and Dad together As she never knew her dad untill 2 yrs ago..and her mom was never there...So my grandma Was everything 2 her...She gave her a Name, she called my mom her ''Angel From god'' cos without my mom she wudda died years ago. So my moms abit of a Mess..So i wrote this Dedication 2 my Grandma.

-Ps. Anybody uses this as Personals Then thats wrong Serious..I mean its all good if i diss'd ur Family in a battle but i leave Personal Shit out Such as family Cos its wrong...So Be Eazy with this shit

Beat- Mellow Madness- Will you Remember me?


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Track- Angel From God

-Hook-

I Will Remember You..
Will you Remember me?...

Verse One

Now Imma Be Honest, I Didnt Really Know-You..
Cant Explain the Trouble, Writing this i Would-Go-through..
But Imma Show-You, The Effection You Deserve..
Even Though Your Gone, you have a Presence on this Earth..
I Cudnt Measure-what-your-worth, To Our Whole-Family..
Didnt See you much, But you watched us Grow-Gradually..
Its a Tragedy, To Watch You Drift-Away..
You Effected our Lives, With your History..
You-Lived-for-the-day, Always With the High-hopes..
even When You Life was on a Line like a Tite-Rope..
But I know, Death wasnt Fair-For-You..
My Mom was There-for-you, She Really Cared-to-you
Cos Im Aware-that-you..Build her strong Till-This-Day..
but watchin her cry, Cos She Feels-This-Way..
Wish i Could Heal-this-pain, Cos You Were Her Rock..
this is a Dedication, By Your  ''Angel From God''..

--Hook-- x2
I Will remember You...
Will You Remember me??...

Verse Two.

A Strong Individual, Is my Best Description..
Anyone with a Problem, You were there To Listen..
Made Fair Decision..You Were Loved by Most..
So on the Day that u go, I shall Raise the Toast..
Dedicated to the Host Of The Resting Place..
You Gave my Mom hope, she was blessed With Faith..
Which made her Feel Special,Only you Could Do That..
A mother and a Father, How Can Somebody Lose-that..
Even Try to Get-Through-That, I Can Sense the Pain..
The Emotional Flashback, Commence the Brain..
Wish They Went-Away, An i Could Change-this...
I gotta Let it go on, its just the way that Fate-is..
I Just Gotta Face-it, An Angel Is Lost..
A Saviour in Life, I See your Face-on-the-cross..
An Now That ur Gone..I grew stronger in love..
Cos I Know An Angel's Watching my Back from above..

--Hook-- x2
I Will remember You...
Will You Remember me??...

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Dedicated to the Host Of The Resting Place..
You Gave my Mom hope, she was blessed With Faith..

I Just Gotta Face-it, An Angel Is Lost..
A Saviour in Life, I See your Face-on-the-cross..

Damn .. now thats some deep personal shit right there .. the two bars i pointed out .. just wow .. lots of emotion, lots of love... this is more than a "piece" in open mic. good shit







I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...
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thnx man..I got feed on another Site..By sum Fuckin Dick, Sayin pure shit About her but its all good..i aint bothered with sum net geek whos online more than aol.

Shud be recorded as soon as my mic is bk home

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Shit's deep... I remember droppin' a piece where I had to tell the story beforehand too... family shit, my "Last Words" shit... won me the Topical Title that did, woooooooop

Enough about me (no, really)

This was nice, loved it from the jump off, how u hit the straight fact, u ain't really know her, then the affection you deserve/presence on this earth couplet, two sick bars there, measure your worth, grow gradually... lol I'm quotin' more or less everything... Tight rope ehh, it's ok I guess but a punchline in this, I dunno... Built her up/watch her cry is crazy deep. Good hook. Second verse is less gripping but it just glides along from line to line... you get the general feel of what you sayin', there to listen was cool, cross bit was cool, I think the "mother and a father" shit coulda been reworded a lil better tho... but yea that's it, this is heat

Bone cancer... I mean damn, that's awful seriously... Youthanasia laws are always under dispute, it is what it is... How old is she? Anyway good shit, and I hope the inevitable is as easy to take as possible... nd soon - not in a bad way obviously - but more for her sake as well as all y'all's just so it's done and u have closure

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Thnx man, Appriciated. Shes 91 So shes Lived long..I sora hope she goes quickly so she aint in pain.

Thnx for the feed..i'll probly re-word a few lines while recording.

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i really loved this, it shows that emotions bring out the best writen lyrics in people as long as you let it, was really strong to me, came across powerfull, but was also emotional at the same time, which is a really hard combination to get, well done babes :)
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briggz u da man

this is what hiphop music is supposed to be
the outlet to convey ur emotions

i could feel ur hurt
i could feel ur uncertainty

this was nice.

keep droppin' some fresh songs
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Thnx for the feed Appriciated..

Drop a link if u want my feed on anything

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