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SELF ACTIVATE
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Posted: 06 September 2018 at 10:22am |
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I pop fools wit the Rugar, crew full of shootas
My G's all ape and we move like a Unit Don't be goofy and confuse it, my goons too ruthless Boot ya in the mouth banana clip'll leave ya toothless You losers getting zooted off a nickel in a toothpick While my niggas blowing Snoop Gorilla Glue inside of Cubans The booth is gettin humid ... ain't no stompin out the flames My boo's ass is stoopid - she got Donkey of the Day Shout out to Charlemagne; I've been knighted by the Gods Ciroc is the name, Diddy boppin in the rain Empire State of Mind - I am Kong rockin Js With Beyoncé on the stage and we never 'On The Run' But stay on a Rampage for them Jacksons gettin paid I'm Goodall day if the cash and Mary Jane is blue Bombay She Baloo me fa the chain, King Louie and champagne I knew she wanted fame, shot a movie and explained Bared necessities of life - popped dat coochie in da frame Uncle Luke her wit the gang? Dude you gotta be insane? Cos I'm too damn fly ... to do a choochoo train I ain't tryna catch a case like my nigga Pac did Or be locked in a cage like a gotdamn chimp I'm a Ceasar on these streets - a Sultan to the sheiks And all a Genies is a flawless ass freak On sum Abu Dhabi sheets (a-ladd-in the East) But I represent the West, where monkeys get greased For beatin on they chest - we'll empty out the clip And leave em sunken with the fishes For tryna throw a wrench - we ain't wit the monkey business "You Mighty Joe, huh?" You might need jo gun Cos the youngins going bongo From McNola slums to jungles of Chicago - M'Baku Edited by Crimson Juice - 07 September 2018 at 2:12pm |
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'While my niggas blowing Snoop Gorilla Glue inside of Cubans
The booth is gettin humid ... ain't no stompin out the flames My boo's ass is stoopid - she got Donkey of the Day' yo man, when a theme pops in your head. . you just take that shit and run away with it lol. effortless read, man, you need to transfer some of these drops to audio fam
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Yeah, this is the flexin' Self that we all fuck with heavy. The sound of the strung together multi is nice. The bounce to the flow and delivery gotta Dre swing.
That closin' bar was toooooo tough. Keepin' with the Ape theme and the metas/wordplay in there are real dope
The second line was nice as it tied into the first line. I thought the other ones were a little loose as they worked but the content up to this point as been so strong, this seemed like a lul.
Closer brought back the heat. When you get an idea or theme for a topical or a flex jawn you carry it like no body else.
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Senior Moderator Wiggle wiggle said the bun that jiggle Joined: 03 April 2009 Location: Your kitchen Status: Offline Points: 10000102 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-4-0 Form: WWLWLW |
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Yo that donkey of the day bar thoughhhhhhhhh
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#Bananas
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I was actually gonna post this in the crew forum so everyone could jump on it with a different animal theme/scheme. But I got sleepy and forgetful and ended up just posting it here instead.
Anywho, good looking on the read, feed, and breakdown, fellas. Much appreciated. Respect. |
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Edit: could a mod please change the word "bogo" in my closer to "bongo"
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Crimson Juice
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SELF I'll hit this up when i get back from physio,damn i've got to catch a train
then start swinging my crutches half way across the city,i fucking hate these crutches too..(sorry aboutt the rant dude)..peace. Ps...done the correction,was that bothering you?..lol. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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good to see you in a more playful mode after the intensifying diss rounds
thw whole thing was nice and apeshit nuts, no quotes mentioned no quotes forgotten
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how do you always come with rhymes. Normally i'd read a piece and be like...ohhhh i would do if you could've done this!
your work are usually that refined that i can't really do shit like that lol. This is tight man. YOu certainly have a gift for these type of swag and flow piece because it seems so easy for you. Sir, rhyming is your forte. Then the wordplays to boot ha! The god of all text wordplay to me is dynamix but with pieces such as this and sunrise meditation, you're in the clouds also my dude. btw, fucks wit the Sun Wukong reference! i grew up on Journey to the West! |
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RosenBoss
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Holy shit! The word play on this was fire. I don't think there is anything you could have done differently to make this drop any byeer than it is. I can't even pick a favorite line, I choose all of them because it flowed so we'll together and the theme truly carried throughout. Damn! How do you even come up with this shit?
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Crimson Juice
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Damn i really liked the sprite you kicked this off with,on some G swagger there,
This piece was brimming with testosterone too,defiantly came off as aggressive and mean,you had a ripe everything within here really,metaphors/concepts/vibe/ rhyme scheme shit even flow,and the title ties in well with the main concept,class display of your pen game,ive read this twice now,and the 2nd time round i was try- ing to find a flaw to at least list a con from all these pro's,and i couldn't (except for the correction i made on your request) find one,RIPE verse....peace. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
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Honestly
This shit was absolute fire start to finish I’m not even in here to critique this masterclass I’m am merely here to acknowledge the fact you went fucking Bonobo on this scat You had monkey on lockdowns like some kind of modern day Tripitaka.... |
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I had to explain some of the wordplay to a homie from Africa on another site due to a few subtle cultural differences. Anyway, I'm sure all the heads on here caught most of, if not all of it, but in the off-chance not everyone did ... what the hell. Check it. Also, thanks for all the feed. Respect.
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