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    Posted: 22 September 2020 at 4:35pm

  
I am gettin to this currency 
In a good position currently 
They mad takin swag to personally
Spit fire sherlock homes way im inflictin 3rd degree
Beast on the mic the rest all worse than me 
Bet it plus any reimbursement fee's 
Gun for that title feel the urgency
Flow dope fuck it who aint heard of me 
Still im venom in your veins like poison 
Flowin smooth im Vicks Ointment 
Boss bitch meet only by appointment 
Im the great white in this ocean 
These hoes must be jokin 
Its Vietnam this the art of war 
Killed it now they wantin' more 
Been through it all like my heart feel sore 
Excuse the attitude better than i was before
Writin' in the sand like it washed ashore 
Im queen now dont try no more 
Cause damage like the eye of the storm
Like New Orleans in my purest form 
Leave scenes Katrina victims forlorn 
Bitch please did this since i been born 
Bounce back like elastic  my bars put em' in caskets 
Rivals leagues behind the distance seems drastic 
Alpha dog like a Masstiff, spittin AMMO BLASTIN
Checks im cashin, its like i got tunnel vision
Got it out the mud yahll aint fuckin with it 
Clout always come before the riches 
First string they sittin on the benches 
Over throw kingdoms like some Hench Men 
Vibe cryptic bringing a death sentence 
My success rate always been extensive 
Just for breathin' i deserve a pension 
Comin for me then im gettin' vicious 
Goin savage yea this shits explicit 
AK back bearing gifts like its Christmas 
So epic i must be a christian 
Real shit no superstition 
Thought that i was going to place second 
Not even if they preyed for it like im the reverend 
Living proof appearance can be very deceptive 
White bitch and im lit in this session 
Bank on me this a good investment 
They got my name on they lips Victoria Secret 
They cant hide they jealous  im the reason 
Chop them up get left in pieces 
I am to the rap game like messiah is to Jesus
  


NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME
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Firstly good to read your back around Ash, yeah this flowed well overall a little
basic in rhyme scheme i thought, but that ain't a problem or a negative as i still
liked the selfhype-ness displayed within, i do have one gripe and it is a little one
at that, the elastic band bounce back part, i believe using the word rebound would
of been a better choice of wording as bounce back implies elastic has a form/
shape which it doesn't really, just me being petty here, all i all i enjoyed it,nice verse
lady..peace.
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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