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AshleyKaos
Standard Member Joined: 11 October 2013 Status: Offline Points: 2511 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 28-63-3 Form: LWLLNQ |
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Posted: 22 September 2020 at 4:35pm |
In a good position currently They mad takin swag to personally Spit fire sherlock homes way im inflictin 3rd degree Beast on the mic the rest all worse than me Bet it plus any reimbursement fee's Gun for that title feel the urgency Flow dope fuck it who aint heard of me Still im venom in your veins like poison Flowin smooth im Vicks Ointment Boss bitch meet only by appointment Im the great white in this ocean These hoes must be jokin Its Vietnam this the art of war Killed it now they wantin' more Been through it all like my heart feel sore Excuse the attitude better than i was before Writin' in the sand like it washed ashore Im queen now dont try no more Cause damage like the eye of the storm Like New Orleans in my purest form Leave scenes Katrina victims forlorn Bitch please did this since i been born Bounce back like elastic my bars put em' in caskets Rivals leagues behind the distance seems drastic Alpha dog like a Masstiff, spittin AMMO BLASTIN Checks im cashin, its like i got tunnel vision Got it out the mud yahll aint fuckin with it Clout always come before the riches First string they sittin on the benches Over throw kingdoms like some Hench Men Vibe cryptic bringing a death sentence My success rate always been extensive Just for breathin' i deserve a pension Comin for me then im gettin' vicious Goin savage yea this shits explicit AK back bearing gifts like its Christmas So epic i must be a christian Real shit no superstition Thought that i was going to place second Not even if they preyed for it like im the reverend Living proof appearance can be very deceptive White bitch and im lit in this session Bank on me this a good investment They got my name on they lips Victoria Secret They cant hide they jealous im the reason Chop them up get left in pieces I am to the rap game like messiah is to Jesus |
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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME
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Crimson Juice
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Firstly good to read your back around Ash, yeah this flowed well overall a little
basic in rhyme scheme i thought, but that ain't a problem or a negative as i still liked the selfhype-ness displayed within, i do have one gripe and it is a little one at that, the elastic band bounce back part, i believe using the word rebound would of been a better choice of wording as bounce back implies elastic has a form/ shape which it doesn't really, just me being petty here, all i all i enjoyed it,nice verse lady..peace. |
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