Battlefield: [Audio] Ch3kk Vs L.P [1-0]

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    Posted: 10 July 2017 at 2:53am
3 min
On beat
No 3 pg expo.
Diss track with chorus and has to have replay value - this is a battle based on all around skill.
due sunday by midnight


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Extended till tomorrow per request.
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https://soundcloud.com/ch3kk-g/settle-down-lp-diss 

Only 1 expo. He dropped a track called Christmas Lunch he got great feedback on it. He likes food. 
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https://soundcloud.com/user37035975/more-than-bullets

had some issues mixing. someone will be re-mixing it for me Friday. you may need to turn your volume up a bit for now.
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ignore the volume comment. for some reason the volume is drastically different when its embedded vs when I play straight out of soundcloud.
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Yo..

Checkk - aggression and flow were present and in full force so props on that. I really liked your beat selection as well, it fit really well into the battle theme. The one thing sonically that your track lacked was true distinction between the hook and the track, I found it hard to pick your hook out. Punchline wise you really need work, you got all the tools to bring a mean diss but your own is the weakest element of your game. Either way flow was good as well as aggression so in terms of LA standards you just re wrote Ether

L.P.- I thought you started off really nice with the hook, you sounded strong on it which can be your weak point. Unfortunately your verses lacked the aggression that check brought. This is basically a battle of flow and Checkk out flowed you and showed more aggression. My suggestion would be to work on your voice clarity and overall aggression.

I believe Checkk took this pretty easily, in audio battles it seems we vote on flow/aggression so for that reason I'm going to vote Checkk.

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