Audio Battle Archive: [Audio] Rapper T vs Ashleykaos (3-0)

Dream vs Nightmare
16 bars
Beat of choice
2 weeks

https://soundcloud.com/ashleykaos/nightmares

Sorry ! :/

afterdeath you're going to have to expand on that vote for it to count.

Rapper T- You did well but your flow was off at sometimes. I can tell you were reading and that you didn't rehearse/know your material so your delivery would be cleaner. Also in terms of mixing your voices was muffled and muddy imo. but from the parts I did understand you stuck to subject of having dreams of success. Also the beat selection was on point. good drop!

Ash- Your subject matter was your strongest asset in this battle. The singing in the beginning worked out for this type of track. The beat selection was good also. But you stopped pretty abruptly. When ending verses about anything you end with something deep or hard hitting, you lacked that in this one. I can hear the improvement from your earlier work but theres always room to grow. I heard your words a bit clearer than T's. Once your delivery and your words become more articulate you will be good.

Close battle due alot variables but I'm slightly leaning towards Rapper T. Ash keep elevating this only makes you better. MVGT Rapper T

Topically, you both played the easy route with such a broad and diverse topic that could have been monumentally approached.

I would say that dream would be dqed... that was way more than ten bars

Yet it seems that miss Ashley may not have enough

Dream, your style of delivery does not fit your voice, you got lyrics, but if you don't deliver them, they lose their strength. Half way through you did that high pitch ending every line the same pitch and cut off, that is so annoying love, never do that again. You lose your listener.

Ashley love, your accent and voice sound so off, there is potential because you understand how to ride a beat even if you don't get it every line. But that nasal rapping will break you if you do not learn how to breathe and speak up. If that's the rap persona you choose then ok, but master that mama. Say the same line over and over, recording, until you find YOUR voice.

I honestly don't know rich way to vote, based off y lyrics alone, I'd go with dream.

There is no hate or malice or rude intention in what I say... I just speak my mind. I would hope that I would have the same respect returned. Either way, all love. Stay up

Rapper T - The good first; Your lyrics were decent as far as topic of dream and achieving that dream. As for the audio itself, your flow was on and off. I thought your delivery and presence with rapping can be better as well. There were times it seemed like you were just forcing the words to come out and I can definitely tell as a listener. Towards the back half of it, there were times that your vocals were lower than the music, low enough to the point it was very hard to make out what you were spitting. Other than that I thought you did good with the writing aspect of it, just have to work more on your delivery and the audio side of things.