Text Battle Archive: Beans & Jay vs The GENeral&Rutter Knows Best (3-0) |
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Beans
Superior Member Joined: 12 October 2013 Location: MA Status: Offline Points: 6718 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 95-24-5 Form: WWWWWW |
Topic: Beans & Jay vs The GENeral&Rutter Knows Best (3-0) Posted: 20 October 2014 at 9:55pm |
5 bars each(10 per team)
Due by Friday mid night EST Rest is house G'luck fellas |
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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Rutter knows best
Senior Moderator Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4529 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 24 October 2014 at 8:11pm |
G'luck ya jumped up noobs.......
Odds against us, but as the bell sounds theres questions about ya game, The only time they say Beans team well rounded, they talking about his frame, Beans talks like his Wesson pops and leaves bullets flying The only time Beans' Wesson pops, is when he's deep frying, He no archemdis, n Jay still not screamed Eureka tryin to clock his penis The reason beans don't often stare at defeat, bodymass block his sneakers, Jay and B? I guess they were destined to be gone and done More like Jay and Beyoncé the way we got them On The Run, Half the time Jay don't rhyme, but he sure know how to act though Tag teamed Junior Shade, but he still the only j in beans shadow, Fuck being a general, we shoot quick like the Taliban Y'all are mellow, slow shit down like Gav and Dan, He claims Jay killin it on other sites, i ain't believing any of it Only time Jay killin bitches, when he gets a match on Plenty of Fish, Were TI, Foxx, and JT, Winners that can't do wrong Y'all are similar, but take out Foxx you two Dead and Gone, Like a Jurassic park plot twist, controversial and kinda raw, Beans couldn't face losing ,so in one move he brought back a dinosaur, L.A know We got BJ Penned, the only bithes empire strike is their mrs Not talkin B&J Phish food, how we leave these fags sleeping with the fishes! Expo's Wessons an oil/smiff n wesson bonny and clyde/on the run plenty of fish is a dating site, beans been biggin jay up Song collab w/p Flossaurus came back from the dead to give him the win over Gen. bj penned/ bj penn |
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#bananas
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The GENeral
Groupie Joined: 05 October 2014 Location: California Status: Offline Points: 148 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WWLLWL |
Posted: 24 October 2014 at 11:43pm |
Sorry to free post, but Beans/Jay need an extension for legitimate reasons, so new deadline is Saturday, midnight EST. FYI mods, don't move to NML.
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"I hate you Lux, I hate you Lux." -Hollow Da Don
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Beans
Superior Member Joined: 12 October 2013 Location: MA Status: Offline Points: 6718 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 95-24-5 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 26 October 2014 at 1:03am |
Smh at these guys wit tough talk... Sit down faggots
General & RnB Clint east woods is known for movie like the good the bad the ugly and hang'em high/Brigadier is above general/ conceit-tsunami see quote
Take a death, my punches 'pound rut', he can't face the text If he ever 'pull up BARZ wit weight?' It'll 'collapse & break his neck!' B a 'gun slinger' get'n money, u equal to a broke newbie So wen Rut gets 'bad & ugly?-I hang'em high'.. 'Eastwood cud make sequels to those movies!' My swings precise, punches pump kid till he dead & bleed Rut cant 'show a GENeral punch' if 'that guy hit him in the face!' so it's 'something we'll never see!' Plus he won't conceit over us! I Punch in waves so U'll have to drip dry son This assault n battery BARZ you can't Sue na'mean, but I'll flip ya body like u got hit by one!(tsunami) When the lead burst? U dead first! I killed this dude for fun My buck shots over power general like a brigadier... While hunting seasons his excuse to shoot a gun!(brig uh deer) General got smashed by me, then tried to get at my team Surprised you didn’t shit your pants, the way you couldn’t handle Beans I’ll run laps around Rutter, he’d be on the block hurtin, n weezin leave Best struggling on the corner more than Richard Sherman this season Gen lost last time, got kicked out his house, now he’s known to run Soo its gotta be tough for you to box, knowing you’re going home to one Rutter gets smothered with haymakers, this gay faker doesnt murk Closest he’s been to laying hands…. was getting prayed for in church |
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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Rutter knows best
Senior Moderator Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4529 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 28 October 2014 at 12:21am |
upping for votes guys.
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#bananas
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sage
Groupie Joined: 17 October 2014 Status: Offline Points: 90 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-6-0 Form: WLLLLL |
Posted: 01 November 2014 at 7:36pm |
That was a good battle
Rutter & general: You verse was pretty good you had some solid punches but some punches didn't land and were a little soft the flow was smooth but at some points the bars were too choppy you could work more on your wording besides I felt like you were generic in your verse You didn't go that personal in your punches Beans & jay: You had a very good verse solid punches you landed most of em the flow was smoother than your opponents and I really liked the multis you got there and you went more personal than general and rutter which got you the win in my opinion Good battle y'all did good job Vote goes to beans and jay |
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D-NoS
Groupie Joined: 10 October 2014 Location: UK-Wales Status: Offline Points: 207 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-6-0 Form: LLLLLL |
Posted: 02 November 2014 at 6:07pm |
Good stuff
Both verses flowed well I found, but I felt Beans and Jay's verse was just a bit punchie'r tbh. MVGT - Beans & Jay |
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
Posted: 02 November 2014 at 6:49pm |
D-Nos you need to elaborate on your vote for it to be counted.
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D-NoS
Groupie Joined: 10 October 2014 Location: UK-Wales Status: Offline Points: 207 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-6-0 Form: LLLLLL |
Posted: 02 November 2014 at 7:19pm |
Maybe I have no right to vote on this one because there are lots of referances to other emcees and what not, but reading through the two verse's Beans & Jay's just hits harder (to me the outsider listener/reader) bars like:
"Take a death, my punches 'pound rut', he can't face the text If he ever 'pull up BARZ wit weight?' It'll 'collapse & break his neck!" & "General got smashed by me, then tried to get at my team Surprised you didn’t shit your pants, the way you couldn’t handle Beans" --- Rutter & General's verse was humourus with bars like: "Odds against us, but as the bell sounds theres questions about ya game, The only time they say Beans team well rounded, they talking about his frame," & "He no archemdis, n Jay still not screamed Eureka tryin to clock his penis The reason beans don't often stare at defeat, bodymass block his sneakers," But for myself this verse was not as aggresive as Beans & Jay's.. PS: Honestly tho dont mind if my vote aint counted as u kno Im new here and may be missing somthing. Just my opinion |
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JBrenn
Superior Member Joined: 03 May 2006 Status: Offline Points: 3757 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-26-0 Form: WWLWWW |
Posted: 22 November 2014 at 1:36am |
2-0 jay & Beans
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D.Von Doom
Standard Member Joined: 18 June 2014 Status: Offline Points: 1534 Audio Rank: #1 Stats: 15-4-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 27 November 2014 at 6:07pm |
Take a death, my punches 'pound rut', he can't face the text
If he ever 'pull up BARZ wit weight?' It'll 'collapse & break his neck!' B a 'gun slinger' get'n money, u equal to a broke newbie So wen Rut gets 'bad & ugly?-I hang'em high'.. 'Eastwood cud make sequels to those movies!' My swings precise, punches pump kid till he dead & bleed Rut cant 'show a GENeral punch' if 'that guy hit him in the face!' so it's 'something we'll never see!' Plus he won't conceit over us! I Punch in waves so U'll have to drip dry son This assault n battery BARZ you can't Sue na'mean, but I'll flip ya body like u got hit by one!(tsunami) When the lead burst? U dead first! I killed this dude for fun My buck shots over power general like a brigadier... While hunting seasons his excuse to shoot a gun!(brig uh deer) General got smashed by me, then tried to get at my team Surprised you didn’t shit your pants, the way you couldn’t handle Beans I’ll run laps around Rutter, he’d be on the block hurtin, n weezin leave Best struggling on the corner more than Richard Sherman this season Gen lost last time, got kicked out his house, now he’s known to run Soo its gotta be tough for you to box, knowing you’re going home to one Rutter gets smothered with haymakers, this gay faker doesnt murk Closest he’s been to laying hands…. was getting prayed for in church Beans/Jay: The quote in the beginning set off the onslaught off punches and personals. every single punch landed imo which is dangerous for anyone to keep up with unless they dropped a perfect rebuttal. fav bar was the eastwood bar. strong drop Odds against us, but as the bell sounds theres questions about ya game, The only time they say Beans team well rounded, they talking about his frame, Beans talks like his Wesson pops and leaves bullets flying The only time Beans' Wesson pops, is when he's deep frying, He no archemdis, n Jay still not screamed Eureka tryin to clock his penis The reason beans don't often stare at defeat, bodymass block his sneakers, Jay and B? I guess they were destined to be gone and done More like Jay and Beyoncé the way we got them On The Run, Half the time Jay don't rhyme, but he sure know how to act though Tag teamed Junior Shade, but he still the only j in beans shadow, Fuck being a general, we shoot quick like the Taliban Y'all are mellow, slow shit down like Gav and Dan, He claims Jay killin it on other sites, i ain't believing any of it Only time Jay killin bitches, when he gets a match on Plenty of Fish, Were TI, Foxx, and JT, Winners that can't do wrong Y'all are similar, but take out Foxx you two Dead and Gone, Like a Jurassic park plot twist, controversial and kinda raw, Beans couldn't face losing ,so in one move he brought back a dinosaur, L.A know We got BJ Penned, the only bithes empire strike is their mrs Not talkin B&J Phish food, how we leave these fags sleeping with the fishes! Rutter/General:Your drop was solid..not strong because of the inconsistency. Some punches were hard and some were passive. the hardest bar in your drop was the wesson bar imo. MVGT: Beans & Jay due consistency and better punches. |
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
Posted: 29 November 2014 at 4:51am |
J & Beans get the KO
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