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    Posted: 20 October 2014 at 9:55pm
5 bars each(10 per team)
Due by Friday mid night EST
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2014 at 8:11pm
G'luck ya jumped up noobs.......

Odds against us, but as the bell sounds theres questions about ya game,
The only time they say Beans team well rounded, they talking about his frame,
Beans talks like his Wesson pops and leaves bullets flying
The only time Beans' Wesson pops, is when he's deep frying,
He no archemdis, n Jay still not screamed Eureka tryin to clock his penis
The reason beans don't often stare at defeat, bodymass block his sneakers,
Jay and B? I guess they were destined to be gone and done
More like Jay and Beyoncé the way we got them On The Run,
Half the time Jay don't rhyme, but he sure know how to act though
Tag teamed Junior Shade, but he still the only j in beans shadow,
Fuck being a general, we shoot quick like the Taliban
Y'all are mellow, slow shit down like Gav and Dan,
He claims Jay killin it on other sites, i ain't believing any of it
Only time Jay killin bitches, when he gets a match on Plenty of Fish,
Were TI, Foxx, and JT, Winners that can't do wrong
Y'all are similar, but take out Foxx you two Dead and Gone,
Like a Jurassic park plot twist, controversial and kinda raw,
Beans couldn't face losing ,so in one move he brought back a dinosaur,
L.A know We got BJ Penned, the only bithes empire strike is their mrs
Not talkin B&J Phish food, how we leave these fags sleeping with the fishes!



Expo's
Wessons an oil/smiff n wesson
bonny and clyde/on the run
plenty of fish is a dating site, beans been biggin jay up
Song collab w/p
Flossaurus came back from the dead to give him the win over Gen.
bj penned/ bj penn
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2014 at 11:43pm
Sorry to free post, but Beans/Jay need an extension for legitimate reasons, so new deadline is Saturday, midnight EST. FYI mods, don't move to NML.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 October 2014 at 1:03am
Smh at these guys wit tough talk... Sit down faggots



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Clint east woods is known for movie like the good the bad the ugly and hang'em high/Brigadier is above general/ conceit-tsunami see quote

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Take a death, my punches 'pound rut', he can't face the text
If he ever 'pull up BARZ wit weight?' It'll 'collapse & break his neck!'
B a 'gun slinger' get'n money, u equal to a broke newbie
So wen Rut gets 'bad & ugly?-I hang'em high'.. 'Eastwood cud make sequels to those movies!'
My swings precise, punches pump kid till he dead & bleed
Rut cant 'show a GENeral punch' if 'that guy hit him in the face!' so it's 'something we'll never see!'
Plus he won't conceit over us! I Punch in waves so U'll have to drip dry son
This assault n battery BARZ you can't Sue na'mean, but I'll flip ya body like u got hit by one!(tsunami)
When the lead burst? U dead first! I killed this dude for fun
My buck shots over power general like a brigadier... While hunting seasons his excuse to shoot a gun!(brig uh deer)
General got smashed by me, then tried to get at my team
Surprised you didn’t shit your pants, the way you couldn’t handle Beans
I’ll run laps around Rutter, he’d be on the block hurtin, n weezin
leave Best struggling on the corner more than Richard Sherman this season
Gen lost last time, got kicked out his house, now he’s known to run
Soo its gotta be tough for you to box, knowing you’re going home to one
Rutter gets smothered with haymakers, this gay faker doesnt murk
Closest he’s been to laying hands…. was getting prayed for in church





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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 October 2014 at 12:21am
upping for votes guys.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 November 2014 at 7:36pm
That was a good battle

Rutter & general:
You verse was pretty good you had some solid punches but some punches didn't land and were a little soft the flow was smooth but at some points the bars were too choppy you could work more on your wording besides I felt like you were generic in your verse You didn't go that personal in your punches

Beans & jay:
You had a very good verse solid punches you landed most of em the flow was smoother than your opponents and I really liked the multis you got there and you went more personal than general and rutter which got you the win in my opinion

Good battle y'all did good job
Vote goes to beans and jay
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 November 2014 at 6:07pm
Good stuff Clap

Both verses flowed well I found, but I felt Beans and Jay's verse was just a bit punchie'r tbh.

MVGT - Beans & Jay

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 November 2014 at 6:49pm
D-Nos you need to elaborate on your vote for it to be counted.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 November 2014 at 7:19pm
Maybe I have no right to vote on this one because there are lots of referances to other emcees and what not, but reading through the two verse's Beans & Jay's just hits harder (to me the outsider listener/reader) bars like:

"Take a death, my punches 'pound rut', he can't face the text
If he ever 'pull up BARZ wit weight?' It'll 'collapse & break his neck!
"

&

"General got smashed by me, then tried to get at my team
Surprised you didn’t shit your pants, the way you couldn’t handle Beans
"

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Rutter & General's verse was humourus with bars like:

"Odds against us, but as the bell sounds theres questions about ya game,
The only time they say Beans team well rounded, they talking about his frame,
"

&

"He no archemdis, n Jay still not screamed Eureka tryin to clock his penis
The reason beans don't often stare at defeat, bodymass block his sneakers,
"

But for myself this verse was not as aggresive as Beans & Jay's..

PS: Honestly tho dont mind if my vote aint counted as u kno Im new here and may be missing somthing. Just my opinion Smile
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 November 2014 at 1:36am
2-0 jay & Beans
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 November 2014 at 6:07pm
Take a death, my punches 'pound rut', he can't face the text
If he ever 'pull up BARZ wit weight?' It'll 'collapse & break his neck!'
B a 'gun slinger' get'n money, u equal to a broke newbie
So wen Rut gets 'bad & ugly?-I hang'em high'.. 'Eastwood cud make sequels to those movies!'
My swings precise, punches pump kid till he dead & bleed
Rut cant 'show a GENeral punch' if 'that guy hit him in the face!' so it's 'something we'll never see!'
Plus he won't conceit over us! I Punch in waves so U'll have to drip dry son
This assault n battery BARZ you can't Sue na'mean, but I'll flip ya body like u got hit by one!(tsunami)
When the lead burst? U dead first! I killed this dude for fun
My buck shots over power general like a brigadier... While hunting seasons his excuse to shoot a gun!(brig uh deer)
General got smashed by me, then tried to get at my team
Surprised you didn’t shit your pants, the way you couldn’t handle Beans
I’ll run laps around Rutter, he’d be on the block hurtin, n weezin
leave Best struggling on the corner more than Richard Sherman this season
Gen lost last time, got kicked out his house, now he’s known to run
Soo its gotta be tough for you to box, knowing you’re going home to one
Rutter gets smothered with haymakers, this gay faker doesnt murk
Closest he’s been to laying hands…. was getting prayed for in church

Beans/Jay: The quote in the beginning set off the onslaught off punches and personals. every single punch landed imo which is dangerous for anyone to keep up with unless they dropped a perfect rebuttal. fav bar was the eastwood bar. strong drop

Odds against us, but as the bell sounds theres questions about ya game,
The only time they say Beans team well rounded, they talking about his frame,
Beans talks like his Wesson pops and leaves bullets flying
The only time Beans' Wesson pops, is when he's deep frying,
He no archemdis, n Jay still not screamed Eureka tryin to clock his penis
The reason beans don't often stare at defeat, bodymass block his sneakers,
Jay and B? I guess they were destined to be gone and done
More like Jay and Beyoncé the way we got them On The Run,
Half the time Jay don't rhyme, but he sure know how to act though
Tag teamed Junior Shade, but he still the only j in beans shadow,
Fuck being a general, we shoot quick like the Taliban
Y'all are mellow, slow shit down like Gav and Dan,
He claims Jay killin it on other sites, i ain't believing any of it
Only time Jay killin bitches, when he gets a match on Plenty of Fish,
Were TI, Foxx, and JT, Winners that can't do wrong
Y'all are similar, but take out Foxx you two Dead and Gone,
Like a Jurassic park plot twist, controversial and kinda raw,
Beans couldn't face losing ,so in one move he brought back a dinosaur,
L.A know We got BJ Penned, the only bithes empire strike is their mrs
Not talkin B&J Phish food, how we leave these fags sleeping with the fishes!

Rutter/General:Your drop was solid..not strong because of the inconsistency. Some punches were hard and some were passive. the hardest bar in your drop was the wesson bar imo.

MVGT: Beans & Jay due consistency and better punches.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 November 2014 at 4:51am
J & Beans get the KO
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