Battlefield: Beans Vs Blood Eclipse

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    Posted: 06 September 2019 at 5:19pm
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Beans?? I don't know much about you, but I'll gash you open like opening a KOO tin with a knife


The pen i write with has Led, this lad into a slaughter, the foreign ammo
In my Russian revolver enables me to draw first blood like John Rambo,
In other words the clip will ghost this buster without any Box office numbers.
His lyrics ain't got no feel in em, so punch for punch I'll box off his numb bars.
Boy lyrically i bring terror to Mics but sometimes I'm extra nice with combo's tougher than Mike’s.
So the minute that bell rings, you'll get snuffed with a right.
Nikka the difference between you and i in this light beef is that you marketable and I’m remarkable.
Either way We’re nothing alike,
and you act the way you do because your mother’s a dyke.
I know dudes in the slammer who used to give your father pipe,
Like bend over bitch, stop moving and quit crying!!!!!!!!
So its ah parent(apparent) that you destined to be a hoe,
when it comes to exquisite rhyming I'm extraordinary.
Bro you should switch your name from Beans to lingerie
cause where(wear) you at, you a down (w)right misfit
and I'm lyrically gifted even Darwin knows I'm a Mad scientist,
me and the mic have a beautiful chemistry in the lab therefore(the four) the weaponry i wield will put this bitch in a bag like a poodle owned by a rich white hag.[URL= ][/URL]
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Blood eclipse


Peeped your OM “chopstick Business” ...




Listen faggot...
Gotta knife so sharp, way it cuts your head off’s amazing
Then I’m bagging up Blood quicker than any Red Cross Donations
I’m relaxed eatin Sushi... you ain’t defined as a threat
& the only “Chop Stick Business” you in’ll be removing those from the side of your head
I beefed w/Neek & the best of’em, kid get ya rank up
Leave ya teeth on the street - you think Snitching is Gangsta
No DJ’ll rep you! Your bars are hardly a worry
Flame’ll have you beat on sight! & this ain’t the start of his tourney
Fuck this dweeb, Beans bout to rip’em wit clout
Cos I’m trying to delete his goofy ass along with that faggot Missions account
This woman can’t hang, hit’em w/a hook & a left
Then roll up to Blood Pad..& Stab this pussy to death
Get out a line man? I’ll have your back touchdown when the heaters enter
Plus the way I don’t move when you snap could rival the Steelers center

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Blood Eclipse;

I wasn't feeling your opener. The Pen/Led play had potential (Even though Pencils have led not pens) but it didn't really work although it did have a nice flow.
Again wasnt feeling the second bar, Ghost Buster didn't really hit. The self hype Tyson play in the third was wack. The only punch in the fourth was calling his mother a Dyke which was elementary and unnecessary. Fifth bar was an utter mess, the Ah Parent play didn't work and didn't need an expo. Same goes for the rest, messy. The flow in your first two bars was alright but you lost your way after that. Overall not the best piece but you had some good ideas for plays but just need to work on expanding those concepts and finding a fit.

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Opener was aaight, flowed nice and hit with the Red Cross jab. Second wasn't bad, the Chop Stick play was okay but wasnt solid. Third bar was hella stretched but the tourney play was okay. Fourth bar was decent, punch hit. The rest wasnt great, flow was out and nothing stood out. Overall a few decent punches but a choppy flow.

Vote; Beans.

Beans opener was the best of the battle and also had another decent hit with the deleting accounts jab.
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Blood Eclipse.

This wasn't a bad verse as persay, but it did lack in power in the punch
department, you showed the aggression but the punches were more of
jabs really,you had a wealth of info here to come at Beans, shit there's
even photos if you just did some homework that you could have used,
i feel you dropped the ball somewhat here, and dont get me twisted the
verse was all right on the whole, it's biggest problem was it came off as
indirect, and not that well aimed, except for mentioning he's alias once
maybe twice but its too generic.



Beans.

I really liked your first 2 bars, especially bar 2 as you tied in a concept to
his OM that made the punch land cleanly and hard, because sushi is eaten
with chopsticks although you took your foot off the peddle somewhat, (as
this guy can throw hard punches), you would on the norm lace the whole
verse with punches, but here you did have a few jabs popping, the DJ Flame
reference throw me some untill id rembered his up an coming tourney, (at
first I thought you was implying there one in the same, like a double acco-
untant.. lol.)

^^Or at least I think I got that right



Vote....Beans... peace.


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before you can dare make an entrance".
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