1-2 Punch League: Beans vs Ridley Scott - Play off R1 |
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Rutter knows best 
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 Topic: Beans vs Ridley Scott - Play off R1Posted: 05 January 2017 at 10:40pm |
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Ridley Squat
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Posted: 09 January 2017 at 12:01am |
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Every verse this cunt writes starts: "Listen..." or "See..." n that literally makes me go head-palm a wall
But without that reference to Hearing or Sight, then I fear his bars might have no sense in at all |
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Beans
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Posted: 09 January 2017 at 12:26pm |
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My bars are too savage, no way this dump can manage
His body's be "lost in the woods" after I get the dub wit damage |
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Posted: 09 January 2017 at 10:54pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Ridley- you personally attacked Beans. You threw a nice little jab. I get the reference and it was pretty clever. Flow was a little elongated but i still got the punch and it worked out pretty well. Wordplay was good also. simple yet creative enough to land Beans - IDK, Not a fan of this bar. It was generic and didnt land for me. I get what you were trying to imply but it didnt have explanation to it. I wish it was a little more direct and punchy. Overall - Ridley gets the W For me |
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Posted: 09 January 2017 at 11:16pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Ridley clever wordplay here I think,the personal/punch was directed well and also landing too,plus i liked the concept aswell,although on the Long side as bars go,it didn't effect it to much on the whole really,again you brought that certain swag you have with the humour element,which only aided the punch overall,the other bonus was that it read well also.. Beans I liked the the wordplay here,and I also liked the concept is was a current 1 too,but it didn't have any real relevance to Ridley for me,it seemed very loose and generic to be truthful,I couldn't make a connection,so I even revisited that post to try and get (pardon the pun) a sense of where you was coming from,I thought it might of been down to some feed he may of left,but there was nothing to link his alias or a post to that OM,the only other thing left was the thug element or g raps slant you brought with the only relevance being just that.. Vote..Ridley..peace. |
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Posted: 09 January 2017 at 11:57pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. As said before, rid, you came personal, and whilst the punch was quite abstract and a slight stretch, it was creative and original. Beans, I like that you condensed your bar, and it wasnt a bad punch, but it was slightly generic and didnt get me thinking like rids did. Mvgt rids |
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Posted: 10 January 2017 at 12:23am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Eids - I gotta say it felt very long winded for what it was. The little senses play was ok but just didn't need half the words. Beans - i thought it was all tied in nicely and much smoother than usual. I liked the execution obviously it lacked in a direct personal but the l/a related reference decent/ Vbeans I thought he had the overall better punch
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Posted: 10 January 2017 at 2:12am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Ridley, I enjoyed your bars, they were clever. But not the hardest hit. I def like them tho none the less. For such long lines tho, I wish you'd incorporate more internal rhymes, or some decent multis. Beaner, your flow was clean, nice rhymes in them as well. I like this hit, it landed. But imo this would have been a haymaker had it been dropped against s dubb instead. None the less, it was a nice diss, came together well, but not a haymaker. Mvgt bean burrito |
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Posted: 10 January 2017 at 5:18am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Ridley: I got to say this was an okay bar, but it was a bit too stretched for me...... It was an alright personal, but nothing really eye popping material..... You had a great set up with the whole listen, see. and making no sense, the wordplay was good..... I just feel the punch would have landed harder if the bar wasn't so stretched, but still a decent overall punch...... Beans: I actually really enjoyed this bar..... The flow was on point.... I also like the referrence you used with my open mic, good set up and delivery there..... What I mostly enjoyed was the fact that this bar was short and direct to the point...... I also feel that it was a solid landing, a good punch....... Vote- Beans Reason- I feel his bar was more to the point which landed his punch better..... He had a harder delivery and didn't stretch his punch like Ridley did........ good battle both of you though.....
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1-2 Punch League= 0-3 Regular Text= 0-1 Alias= 0-1 Topical= 1-0 Horrorcore= 1-0 Overall= 3-5 |
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Posted: 10 January 2017 at 10:48pm |
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Sorry it's late lads
I owe this one an opinion Looks like a close one, only scanned the votes brief so not sure who's up here Weighing this up now between various other expectations Back soon |
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Posted: 10 January 2017 at 11:12pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Wrinkly First thing I thought was "risky opening words" I mean you say every! But go first! It's too flippable considering he hasn't started yet...So that has a weakness as a Vanguard Bar seemed very strtch mate I dig stretch but I like something to make it flow fluid Concept was flawed by its inherent weakness and relied on beans starting how you claimed he does He didn't?....You warned him not too? Been Indirect.. But not any less than Rid to be fair You both tried to be original here, steering away from predictable stereo type numbers I thought you took this with the better executioner of lines, I did appreciate the wordplay of both writers But the best out of these two misses was beans, just preference regarding overall delivery Vote Beans |
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Posted: 11 January 2017 at 12:29am |
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voting closed beans wins 4-3
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