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    Posted: 15 July 2017 at 12:35am





dizz, you all right? you look kinda.. alt right


smash him to bit fragments, LA's punching on a bitch faggot
call it law of attraction, cos your face is a damn fist magnet!
listen maggot, you look like a little man who fits gay sweathers
yet 'sport in a black wife beater', like signing Floyd Mayweather!
yall think Day's better? hell no, he still yearn to molest tight things
with those deformed hands, he's compelled to grotesque writing!
you're an obsessed type dizz, man you really play with the stark
sunglasses inside like true badass, obviously not afraid of the dark!
cosplay for retards? only thing missing was you bringing a horde
of nerds slinging some swords, shouting; Hail Dizzle, 

The King of the Dorks!


The King of the Dorks!
The King of the Dorks!
The King of the Dorks!
The King of the Dorks!
The King of the Dorks!


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Lmao there was definitely a couple nice lines in this. 
I dug the Mayweather/Wife Beater play. Creative.

Had a laugh at the King of the Dorks closer and 'Close out' lmao. 

Solid drop for the Roast. Glad everyone has been getting involved in the BL4 activities. 


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"listen maggot, you look like a little man who fits gay sweathers
yet 'sport in a black wife beater', like signing Floyd Mayweather!
yall think Day's better? hell no, he still yearn to molest tight things
with those deformed hands, he's compelled to grotesque writing!"
 
Best lines here, good shit con

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Quote mash him to bit fragments, LA's punching on a bitch faggot
call it law of attraction, cos your face is a damn fist magnet!


Pretty good punch here. I feel like the wording could have been harsher though. Or maybe you could have mentioned something about magnetism in the set-up. It makes the second bar come off as statementish otherwise. Overall though, this gets brownie points for having a hot flow, despite being a decent punch at best. Really hot flow tho for a battle verse.

Quote listen maggot, you look like a little man who fits gay sweathers
yet 'sport in a black wife beater', like signing Floyd Mayweather!


This was hella nicer. The best punches are those that utilize the set-up instead of filler/punch, filler/punch. It's what separates the "impressive" from the "OH SHIT!"

Quote yall think Day's better? hell no, he still yearn to molest tight things
with those deformed hands, he's compelled to grotesque writing!


This looks like something Rutter would write lmao. These bars are so much better than that first one though. Introduce one way the play would work, introduce the other way the play would work, hit him with the punch. Like I said, I noticed that RKB does this a lot too. It's a nice formula.

you're an obsessed type dizz, man you really play with the stark
sunglasses inside like true badass, obviously not afraid of the dark!

Quote Wasn't feeling this one. This is more suited towards an OM diss verse where I feel the rest of it was geared towards a battle verse. The punch is simply mocking him rather than exposing him or anything. I guess the best way to put it into words is that it's subjective instead of objective. We can see that he has gross hands (your previous bar), that he's wearing a wife beater (bar before that,) that he's wearing a crown (RKB's hilarious Rap Royalty bar), and that there's a calendar in front of him (my mediocre "date/date" play bar). These punches work because we can clearly see what's going on. We don't know if Dizzle's afraid of the dark.

[Quote] cosplay for retards? only thing missing was you bringing a horde

of nerds slinging some swords, shouting; Hail Dizzle, 


This feels more of an Open Mic type bar. I'd say you're definitely a contender to face the BR winner. Two people that posted a diss weren't competing for the match. I haven't read Ridley's verse yet, but I'd say he'll give you a run for your money. I don't personally feel his style but I'm not judging either lol.

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The hour is upon us, it's bananas
Born alone, die alone, no matter who your man is
Hope he live long enough to tell it to his grandkids
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