Open Mic: Blabber Jabber

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   Im a blabber jabber ready to punch on these bitches with a lyrical hammer
my grammer is sicker than a 4 month old that shitted in his pampers

whats the matter? cant handle a fucknut that does too much chatter?

Drink a mad hatter, it might calm your nerves and soothe your bladder

Thinking is scattered, so high my lyrics are filled with comical laughter

you see the pattern? Im a whack ass hoe with illogical swagger

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daydizzle89 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote daydizzle89 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Blabber Jabber Posted: 23 July 2014 at 3:57pm
	Im a blabber jabber ready to punch on these bitches with a lyrical hammer my grammer is sicker than a 4 month old that shitted in his pampers whats the matter? cant handle a fucknut that does too much chatter? Drink a mad hatter, it might calm your nerves and soothe your bladder Thinking is scattered, so high my lyrics are filled with comical laughter you see the pattern? Im a whack ass hoe with illogical swagger

Elite Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 16 February 2014 Location: US Status: Offline Points: 3340 Crew: eNtiTy Audio Rank: #3 Stats: 5-0-0 Form: WWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Elite Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 23 July 2014 at 10:34pm
	This was really short but it also did show off a little skill. I see you can use basic end multies like "Soothe your bladder" and "Too much chatter", "Comical laughter" and "(Il)Logical swagger". You're flow was decent, but again I would definitely hit up the Elevation Center, you got some potential I see and learning some tips could make you real good. Stay up

nigerchu Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 27 April 2014 Status: Offline Points: 682 Crew: Hunger Games Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-6-0 Form: LLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote nigerchu Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 23 July 2014 at 10:39pm
	Okay, I can't really give proper feed on an OM this short but I think you got the basics. You show off some multis, flow was good and I can't say anything more. As E said, you should check out the Elevation Centre and learn a lot from it. Stay up. Peace.
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