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Calibra
Standard Member Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
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Posted: 28 November 2008 at 7:00pm |
Thought I'd try something different here, will either go down well or get mad hate It's like a random twisted version of Smoothe Da Hustler - Broken Language
For those who ain't dropped a diss... this is your Heaven!
Fuck intro bars!
The toilet cleaner, the little boy deciever The Scrabble game most amazing points achiever The blatant cheater, the pavement eater The prank phone call main reciever The 999 dialler, the rhyme biter Ya favourite comic book crime fighter The time reciter, mind depriver The couch potato, Lazy Boy chair recliner The hope deflater, the poker player The hand written suicide note displayer The day waster, addicted to Space Invaders The handy man, fix ya fence and gate replacer The random shit talker, sleep walker The man who wants to lick ya feet stalker The freak drawer, diseased pauper The white outline on the street chalker The beat hater, the free meat taster The asthmatic that needs a seat raper The Checkers player, the record fader The serial killer, slit ya throat next-door-neighbour The coffin filler, robbin' dinner The line up "He did it" man pointin' fingers The grand winner, genorous man, land giver The come out the closet boy band singer Ya dream man, always givin' feedback The man that always hides behind a Scream mask The white rapper, "I can type faster" The Back to the Future 1980's time traveler The money stacker, the funny cracker The animated Bugs Bunny catcher "I bet I can eat my curry faster" 19 year old virgin honey smasher The mind blower, knife thrower Twisted Pornographic site owner The smart "Meaning of Life" knower The blind folder, the eye opener The "Will Rap for Food" sign holder The death wisher, Virginia Tech killer The neck slitter, the friend binner The head spinner, Russian Roulette winner Able bodied long distant sprinter The cheating Paralympic swimmer Set lies and traps, my thighs are fat Askin' "Can I get some large fries with that" The frequent flier, shirt and tie wearer The knife barer, the desperate house wife scarer The pond hopper, shop robber Concept clocker... bomb shell dropper! Edited by Calibra - 28 November 2008 at 7:01pm |
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Calibra
Standard Member Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
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Uppin' for some feed.
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-Orion-
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Great idea, great execution... Eminem (when he was good) sorta lyricism... I mean it gets samey, but that's kinda the point... bar-for-bar, it's on-point... I like it
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Matt The Ripper
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I like it on the basis that It's something different from the norm., and obviously that was the point as that's what you said you were doing.
Well done, Cal! 8.8/10 |
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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Calibra
Standard Member Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
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Nice to see you O, thanks for that bro.
Matt, pleasure as usual, yeah I heard the song and had never seen stuff like that so thought I'd give it a go.
Thanks for the comments lads.
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Calibra
Standard Member Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
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Bump
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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
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Different than the usual. Would be interesting to hear it in audio. Some very good phrases here, like "coffin filler" and "'will rap for food' sign holder."
Love it. |
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Insert something rappy here
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CHAIN
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The blind folder, the eye opener
The "Will Rap for Food" sign holder The death wisher, Virginia Tech killer The neck slitter vicious, another entertaining read,keep this shit up, man
u already know how i feel about this piece, so i'ma leave it at that ...one
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Cuba
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Hadn't heard the track before, quite coolio...has a kinda old school flavour, anyways...
LMAO @ The toilet cleaner, the little boy deceiver...what the fuck kinda start is that?!
This was at times fucking random (the feet licker stalker or whatever, the fuck?!)...but was actually savage, followed the flow and like Winston said...was on point...and you had some really stylin' parts in this, some of the ideas you same out with were sick and I liked how you had some cultural references in there as well, very intelligant...some funny lines too, like how you mixed it up...
Couple of my favourites:
The hand written suicide note displayer The day waster, addicted to Space Invaders The smart "Meaning of Life" knower The blind folder, the eye opener The "Will Rap for Food" sign holder The head spinner, Russian Roulette winner
^^ That was ridic
Fresh stuff man...better than some of those classics Scooter has selected for sure (but that aint saying much!!)
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Calibra
Standard Member Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
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Lmfao! Thanks Cu, I hadn't heard the track till recently, really liked it though. Real old school! Haha
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I-SEE-GRIPS
Standard Member Joined: 19 May 2008 Location: South London Status: Offline Points: 1214 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 12-23-0 Form: LLWLLL |
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Easy to read and flow through
Some real nice lines
Some choppy ones, which were just fitting nonsense it seemed
But overall I did enjoy this work
Cool
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sparta
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this is mental...loved it all the way through, the suicide note and paralympic lines were the highlights...really impressed by this
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I-kontinue
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lmao @ will rap for food sign holder... that caught me off guard... good shit throughout
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Swift Styles
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wow yo this is dope!
for real for real, prolly best ive seen in awhile. Concepts jumpin everywhere, sty;e was sweet and everyline filled with humor. Good shit dude! |
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Schematic
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Cried a tear, Most of the lines were meant for me. The best critic verse
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http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/rapper-t-vs-schematic-horrorcore-02_topic45919.html
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Lord Puente
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Bro. Stop bribing up old shit for no reason. I’ve seen you doing this a lot since you’ve returned.
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Slip
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Maybe some old shit will inspire some new shit activities at a all time low and this is the first time I seen this verse and it's dope as fuk
, just sayin |
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See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego
inner demon violent beast so warn the mother fucking people |
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spume corrupt
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Just found this absolute banger lying around collecting dust
Calibra gotta be worth a push forward cos anybody read this surely gonna be inspired to write something LA had some amazing writers over the years |
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