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    Posted: 06 November 2004 at 3:15pm
  • First to FIVE explained votes wins (explanations to be judged by me), 5-0 is a KO
  • No minimum, and a maximum of 16 bars
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  • BLIND DROPS - all verses to be PMed to me once complete. Please INDICATE CLEARLY what parts of the PM should NOT be included in what is pasted into the battle and what should. Also do any formatting such as bold, links etc BEFORE sending it to me, I won't do any of that for you. You may re-submit your verse as many times as you wish before the deadline. Battles will be posted as soon as both verses are in.
  • Deadline: Friday 12th November - midnight GMT (GMT is forum time + 5, check in your profile to see what you have the time set to so you know when you have to send your verse by). NO EXCEPTIONS.

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  • . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
    They just said that FUCKIN' with me
    They didn't mean it
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 November 2004 at 8:03pm
    Good Luck Homie. We've battled more rounds than boxing matches...
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 November 2004 at 4:11pm

    Yep yep good look too..

    This gonna be another 1 ov them wars

    peace .:ILL-starr:.

     











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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 November 2004 at 12:15pm

    King Jehu

    Illa gives presents in a gift bag, cause he can't rap
    you ain't gangsta cause you got braids and your pants sag
    You're the little kid who must have been fucked my Michael hardest
    Psycho artist, you strike no targets, all you do is recycle garbage     *
    Illa couldn't see me or the finals if he had ten eyes
    he's a truck driver, for the third time, he's out in the semis
    I'm gone to the finals, it's on to the title
    And no-showing like Devan and Raptor will prove you're non-suicidal
    The bitch is too high in the rankings, so I must beat him down
    Cause I ain't hear a voice this annoying since Krusty the clown
    trust me, I'm down to pound you till you're underground
    Just cause your wordplay's deep IN shit, doesn't mean you're profound:
    Illa doesn't spit, he swallows, shits it out then posts it
    He knows this: with 10 STD's he couldn't be most sick
    Increase the heat dosage, he'll be darker when he's roasted
    He'll get as far now as mail sent without postage
    With the heat dispersed, I'll be the last vet standing when I beat the worst
    You said you beat me? swallow your Candy bars and eat your words
    You're lucky that Kasper dude no-showed in the site war
    my opponent bit, but you must have 3 jaws, the way you bite more
    You ain't complex, everybody gets you, pussy... like dyke whores
    and if lyrics were money, you're type's poor, so you might afford
    A dictionary, thesaurus, a bible and notepad
    Prewrite biblical, lyrical personals and STILL flow bad
    He says he's straight but he gropes fags, I'm heavyweight and he's low fat
    It takes balls to battle me, so no-show and come back when they grow back
    I'd push ILLA in the snake pit, but I'ma grab him instead...
    Shove sharp punches in your mouth and pull them out the back of your head
    Kill this fag in his bed, it's a nightly wack rapper holocaust
    Cause when you land in a falling dream, you die... and you've already fallen off...
    this is starting to look like LMS, cause when you fuck with me, you get killed, man
    cause the last time you beat me, XXplosive was still banned!


    * he was keying with me, Orion, Frank, Clipz, XRayotic and XR8D on msn, and he used the same shit in the battle vs JC mess.

    ILLA

    Jehu...

    Im takin a' 1000 pieces of ya jaw, Title lost! cus 'stars' is what u saw*
    Imma stamp ya rep,UR makin it to the finals? cus i tread ya corpse on the steps

    .:Time to step up:.

    Findin out Hangin's betta at SEX... got this nigga unsteady*
    Now the faggot wrigglin around balls (bowls), like fuckin spaghetti
    punchin ya lunch in'... makin u SICK...  then u throwin up MY words
    Im focused makin' u blurred.. text too hot.. blastin-key-waves 'ya heard?!'
    Im in a ILLA zone, each letter is mine-text, u start 'trippin'... U blown!
    Kickin ya dome, puttin ya ass on Unfamilar Grounds... like i 'lifted ya home'
    When he talks he actually kums in his mouth, Puttin' his gums on his blouse
    Headbuttin' his bowels' droppin jehu like a jock cockin' his TOWEL (ouch)
    Now im stretchin' ya limits, renegades consist ov gimics
    Only NOISE u could ever make is a RACKET like tennis (lmfao)
    Hittin' this herb wid an 'L' like i blazed him wid weed*
    Demolished, Destroyed, Degarded and Deceased
    Rippin da open mic pussy,  In 'fields' he dunno what to do.. run or try push me?!
    Im blastin try duck me? only way u escapin is if the dick-ryders try fuck ME!

     .:OK OK:.

    CHOKIN HIM wid a dog chain ya kno BRACIN his HEALTH/
    Wrote this in the DARK! if all fails ill TAKE-HIM wid STEALTH//
    RIPPIN ya EARS off so the CROWN-FALLS/
    Ya DOWNFALL my DEMISE emptyin his pockets WHILE his face takin a HANDFULL//
    BREAKIN his ERRORS im SHREADIN his SKRIPT/
    Readin his verse 'STRIAGHT'...its NOT BAD FO A BITCH//
    DAMN im takin it ALL like 'NINO BROWN' im new jackin'/*
    Still packin'... da biggest punch like GENIE in ALADDIN//
    APPROACHIN u as 'VELMA' jus spunkin' on ya glasses/*
    Composin FIRE! like I did homework fo a pyromaniac's classes// (WOW)
    U can act supreme grippin ya keys but forever u wont be any 'ant-on-me'/*
    Cus im takin hostage to all MICS an puttin' BEATS in A and E//
    HEY... 'uhej gink' flippin him backside like he on the keyboard/(look)
    Ur KEYS are LOW like a '10ft TALL TYPIST' u fuckin weirdo//
    Readin ya shit 'screen-dumpin'.. not savin shit jus BLASTIN my MONITOR/
     Jehu fo losin my respect.. takin ya head.. is only way to honour ya//

    .:ILL-STARR:.

    *orion took his title
    *hangin beat him in a sex fetish battle
    *i roll l's fo my weed
    *wesley snipes in new jack city
    *he wears glasses as uve probably seen in his avi
    *anthony my name



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    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
    They just said that FUCKIN' with me
    They didn't mean it
    Nah . . .
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 November 2004 at 12:38pm

    ok ok , nice battle

     

    jehu - best bar

    You're the little kid who must have been fucked my Michael hardest
    Psycho artist, you strike no targets, all you do is recycle garbage    

    that was hot, had all tha element in, multis personal, flow, stood out most, great verse, lot of multis in everyline almost, good amount of personals but kept it simple at tha same time, great structure all tha way an always got good flow to it, had punches comin thick an fast.

    KING JEHU - 8/10

    ILLA - best bar

    CHOKIN HIM wid a dog chain ya kno BRACIN his HEALTH/
    Wrote this in the DARK! if all fails ill TAKE-HIM wid STEALTH//

    thought that was hot, also got all tha needed elements, ur verse was good too, nice ryhmes, nice punches, lots of personals which is always good, tha flow was a bit off at stages an i personaly dont like tha breaks wiv "turn tha heat up" an shit like that, puts tha rythm off we u readin it. nice wordplay at times could have been better

    ILLA - 7/10

    MVGT JEHU

     

     







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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 November 2004 at 5:09pm

    chea i gotta give this to Jehu... this is one of the more impressive verses ive seen from Jehu.... punches werent extremely creative.. but were good and on point

    Illa couldn't see me or the finals if he had ten eyes
    he's a truck driver, for the third time, he's out in the semis

    my fav line of the battle.....

    illa... pretty ill.. the wordplay n all that was aight.. not bad at all.. but inconsistent at best... and some of the wordplay isnt exactly played or weak.. but ive seen it all before and it wasnt really structured to land like i like to see...

    sorry illa.. but this goes to Jehu...

    good job to both... 2-0 jehu i believe

     

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 November 2004 at 9:56am

    Never seen Illa before but he ripped this.

    Jehu..

    Nice verse but a few punchlines were played expecially the Intro. Punchlines were nice Personals were dope..Flow was tight..multis werehot this was a Hot verse.

    You're the little kid who must have been fucked my Michael hardest
    Psycho artist, you strike no targets, all you do is recycle garbage     *

    the punch with a personal just Ripped at him hard

    Illa..

    Dope..first 2 lines got me hooked on ut verse came at him hard through out man..humorous Punchlines flow was dope and personals were nice u had many creative lines...Dope verse

    Intro..Illa
    Flow..Jehu
    Creative..Illa
    Punchlines..Illa
    Multis..Jehu
    humor..Illa
    personals..Jehu
    Fillers..Jehu
    Consistancy..Illa
    Outro..Jehu

    Vote-Illa

    He took this imo

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 November 2004 at 12:22pm
    this is the way i c it, i feel that jehu came with harder punches and personals illas wordplay was better but jehus verse was more organized and i showed hese been battling more as his flow was on point
    vote jehu
    the punching machine

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 November 2004 at 12:42pm

    Intro ~ Illa
    Flow ~ Jehu
    Creative ~ Illa
    Punchlines ~ Illa
    Multis ~ Jehu
    Humor ~ Illa
    Vocab ~ Illa
    Personals ~ Jehu
    Outro ~ Jehu

    I personal think you both came nice... jehu had a tight flow... some nice punches... to be honest... nothing really stood out though... seen alot better... Illa came nice wit punches... some multis just wernt working... some hott wordplay... its closer than it looks in the Catorgries... but ima have to give this too

    Illa



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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 November 2004 at 5:25pm

    Intro: ILLA
    Flow: Jehu
    Creativeness: ILLA
    Punches: ILLA
    Personals: Jehu
    Multies: Jehu
    Outro: Jehu
    VOTE: ILLA

    I bassically had to compare punches to personals...that was hard cos both were very effective and hard hitting...but I chose ILLA, because his punches seemed to be more appealing than Jehu's personals in my eyes... I didn't see much multies from ILLA, but his punches made up for that, big time...I liked Jehu's flow...but I'ma have to go wit' ILLA for better punches.

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 November 2004 at 6:30pm
    Flow, multis, personals... no one mentioned wordplay... at all. Davesanity only comes to this site to vote for illa. Can we get some real voters up in this bitch? Illa, I'm pretty sure you'll agree these votes are bullshit if they're ignoring something we both do so well. Anyway, some VOTES!
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 November 2004 at 6:44pm

    some people are retarded, its not that hard to see... ILLA had nice wordplay and decent personals, i guess... punches were hard but not landing nice... wasnt what i expected but was ok...
    jehu, though, was on point the whole time, had better flow, multi's, personal, wordplay, punches, enjoyability... it was all there... in my eyes this was a one sided battle.

    vote: king jehu

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 November 2004 at 6:46pm

    Clipz, Frank, BlaZiiN and Scorpia all mentioned wordplay... as did ^ 2s... but that was after your post...

    4-3 to the Renegade...

    Uppin'...

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 November 2004 at 8:03pm

    Originally posted by -Onion- -Onion- wrote:

    Clipz, Frank, BlaZiiN and Scorpia all mentioned wordplay... as did ^ 2s

    yes... and all but one of the people who mentioned wordplay voted for me, and clipz said illa had better wordplay in this battle, which is proved wrong by all the others who mentioned it...

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 November 2004 at 8:10pm

    Clipz is sick.

    NOXIOUS!!! DNA!!!!!!!!

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 November 2004 at 10:47am
    damn jehu chill... leave dave.. his vote was as genuine as frank whites... i mean i dont even kno this shadow cat and he voted fo me... in a battle like this when the spits are both hot it comes down to what people like... and sum peeps like mine and sum peeps liked yours thats how it goes..

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 November 2004 at 2:46pm

    Yo, stop being a little bitch Jehu and just take the vote... I voted on what I saw and what verse I liked better... you dont like it? ...Well, I personally dont give a fuck.

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 November 2004 at 3:29pm

    Man you are so gay.

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 November 2004 at 4:06pm
    Why are ppl hating on me cos I voted for ILLA? Fuck off...dayum.
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 November 2004 at 8:21pm
    Davesanity, Shut the fuck up, you wack fuck...

    Illa, well said. I'm glad you didn't respond negatively. I respect that. These little pussy bitches are quick to start talking shit back to me. Dave, people hate on you cause you don't know what you talk about when u vote most times... and your votes are a bit shady.
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