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The Law 
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504  Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
 Topic: CFC Quarter Finals: Point Blank vs ArthurPosted: 13 January 2014 at 9:38pm |
 Quarter Finals - 8 Emcees 7 Bars/14 lines per battler Due Jan 19, 2014 by 11:59 Est Time First to 5 (No 3-0 KO) Crew Votes Allowed Verses are to be sent to me No Free-posting or talking in your battle thread (Verses and Votes ONLY!!) If there is a problem, pm myself or a mod Failure to abide by the rules will result in warning and disqualification! - Graphics made by J-Brenn.
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 18 January 2014 at 4:15pm |
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Point Blank -Rechart (reach-Art)/ bar chart -He posts an explanation for every bar but most just say 'self-explanatory' i.e. they're pointless -He supports Arsenal - an Arsenal fan is called a 'Gunner' -Word is him and Law are gonna go for the tag titles and he'd join VM if they won. Hope Solo is the keeper for US women's football team I'm so far above you son, coming at Blank's a bad decision Cos my 'bars' you'll be "struggling to reach Art" like baffled statisticians I'll smash this bastards writtens - he bout to face a Tsar with greater bars So his winning streak will be 'Point-less' like half his explanations are Claims he's hard but we'll never see this fag on P's level The only time I've seen a 'Deadly Art attack' was on the Halloween special So why battle a devil as if you were ever prepared? I'll stop this 'gunner in his tracks' like scenes from Tienenman square You're struggling for form so I don't need to drop my best to stop you It's like you're passing wind after dinner the way Beans got the better of you! And this kid wants titles so he's tryna join my teams contingent Cos this pussys got 'no Hope Solo' like the U.S when their keepers injured Yea people thought this'd be tight but dumping this chump is easy He studied my tutorials to 'take a Point', but still won't fucking beat me |
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 18 January 2014 at 4:16pm |
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Arthur Squashin These Foes, P a leader? Please, this bitch Praised Me for Droppin His Bro Art Stoppin This Show, cos you couldn't be Hot Point if you was Washin' My Clothes. Takin My Time Dude, Breaking Point till he turns to the members of Maior To Cry To Leave Blades Up Inside You, watch Art toss Blank Around like Annihilations From Ryu! (Blanka Round) See Blank Tryin But Floppin, stop invitin' me to your crew I ain't joinin' so ya Might As Well Drop It! You'll Die From A Stoppage, needed 2 more leaders cos you lack Power Point like a broken Microsoft Office. Art Spittin Mental, for your Words to be Straight you need to write Bars With A Stencil Sparrin Eventful, only time they consider Point with Art is when they Sharpen Their Pencil. I'm That Better, punk askin for extensions cos of exams? Nah its cos you know i Rap Fresher Art the Cash Getter, cos I be Droppin Points worse than Moyes' Reign at Manchester! Art bring Mad Scripture, Point your so washed up not even your Crew Mate wants to Tag Wit Ya Make you Sad Mister? And when they shout Vis You All Suck! They're not referrin' to TV's with Bad Picture. (Visual) I bring Rare Stanzas, so like your name just Point me to the next round as i Tear Past Ya Sick like i Shared Cancer, cos by the end, Art all over Blank like i started with a Bare Canvas. Expos: 1.he praised my bar when i beat wreckless who's part of his crew - http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/wreckless-vs-arthur_topic28464_post308944.html. Hotpoint make washing machines. 2. Self explanatory. 3. He has sent me 2 pm's asking me to join his crew. He made law and fuckoff leaders of vis maior. Subject - Yo Sent - 25 August 2013 at 10:17pm Sent by: Point Blank Group - Site Moderator Yo Add Buddy Delete Reply "What's up bro? Just a quick message to say I'm impressed by your drops man, you got skills and your style fits in well here. If you plan on staying active, I was wondering if you wanna join my crew? I've collected a nice bunch of writers and you'd fit right in. I don't think you can PM me back until you have 40 posts but let me know when you do Stay up" Subject - Yo Sent - 14 November 2013 at 9:52pm Sent by: Point Blank Group - Site Moderator Yo Add Buddy Delete Reply "What's up bro. A couple of the dudes in VM mentioned that you were thinking of joining a crew. I've been away for a month working but I'm back now and I'm gonna get the crew back up and running again. If you're still interested let me know and you're in, the boys are keen to have you with us" 4. Self explanatory 5. He pm'd me asking for an extension: Subject - Yo Sent - Yesterday at 12:06am Sent by: Point Blank Group - Site Moderator Yo Add Buddy Delete Reply "What's up bro, looks like we got eachother next round of the tourny, I'm looking forward to it. I just wanna ask, if the deadline for the battle is before 21st January, would you be cool if we extended it by a few days? I've got 3 exams in uni between now and then so I won't really have time to write a verse but I'm free come the 21st. Obviously there'll be no problem if the deadline is later but I just wanna clarify that you'd be cool extended it should I need to. Cheers" 6. The Law asked me to Tag with him to challenge the champs. 7. Self explanatory |
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BiGGz
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Joined: 02 January 2014 Location: 207/617 Status: Offline Points: 293 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-1-2 Form: WLWNN |
Posted: 19 January 2014 at 2:38am |
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i Jus Did a Huge Break Down on Cuba Vs KiKi So Imma Keep This Simple. Lol
Point I Dug How Direct You Were With Your Punches. Opened Up Strong, You Brought Alot of Different Looks For Flips. You Have an Interesting Inner Scheme, Like in Your Second Bar. i Feel Like You Like Real Sting In Alot of Your Punches. They Were Good Connections, Just Nothing Really Wow'd Me After Your Opener, Until Your Last 2 Bars That Had The UGGH Feel to Em. Great Way to Close Out. Arthur Honestly.. You Outclassed Him in Almost Every Aspect This Battle. Wordplay/Nameplay Flips Killed Em. That Closer Bar Is Nice. Your Punches Had Nice Consistently Strong Sting. Clean Transitions Too. The Way You Flipped Your Own Name As Punches Against Him Was Dope. and Personals, Personals, Personals. God Damn. Personals Galore, All Well Executed, and Tied In Perfectly to Your Punches. Flow Stayed Consistent Through Out Aswell. MVGT Arthur In a Decent Battle. But The Levels of Personals, and Execution of Those Personals. Was Jus Too Much For Blanks Verse, Even Tho' He Had Some Good Plays, and Punches. Jus Feel Arthur Outshined Him Easily.
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Manc
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Joined: 02 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 7032 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 82-4-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 19 January 2014 at 6:52pm |
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Ain't voting due to mine & PBs history. But afterwards, I'll drop feed if that's cool
Good luck to both |
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Point Blank
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Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
Posted: 19 January 2014 at 6:58pm |
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The past is the past man, I dont mind at all if you vote
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Rameez
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Joined: 31 July 2007 Location: Brampton, CDN Status: Offline Points: 3922 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 22-40-4 Form: NWWWWW |
Posted: 20 January 2014 at 5:23am |
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PB 1st bar: good concept, nice nameplay and wordplay, punches landed well too 2nd bar: this work well coz he did post alot of self-explanatory that were irrelevant 3rd bar: good play and punch 4rth bar: weak overall.. though the personal was there.. punchline didn't seems hard 5th bar: this was ok, had a humor to it.. the battle with bean hasn't been completely voted at the moment.. 6th: average hit with nice nameplay.. closer: lol funny hit there.. nicely ended Arthur 1st bar: this was ok play here. punchline didn't seem hard 2nd: this was cool play... punch wasn't hard enough 3rd: nice personal and nameplay.. landed nicely 4th: looks like the idea need to be more elaborated 5th: not feeling the punch here 6th: punchline seem indirect like it wasn't being aimed at pb closer: this was good concept of art on blank canvas.. nice closer Overall: I think PB had the upper hand here. He came with more personals punches than arthur. Arthur had more of genric punches which were also good with nameplay but needed more personals to win this battle. And those expso were way too long, it's makes the verse look weak also. It's like saying you need alot of references just to make a small little verse. And as a reader I don't need alot of info to get a punch.. it can be written in one sentence for reference and we can get the idea. Vote: Point Blank for better punches. |
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Flossaurus
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Joined: 04 November 2013 Location: WithYourMother Status: Offline Points: 1222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 22-9-0 Form: LWWWWW |
Posted: 20 January 2014 at 5:51am |
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Aight PB did his thing here.good personals throughout and decent concepts.
The struggling to reach Art bar was a miss imo. He already is Art so it doesn't Really word right and doesn't translate into an actual diss. Also saw you had A lot of 'point' plays which were a little off as well, wouldve liked to see more on Dissing Art then self playin Point. Or put them both into a punch "I've reached my Breaking Point, so I'm breakin Art like......" just my opinion here. Art -Shit man, you basically flipped his verse without seein his verse. Those PMs Honestly killed it, and you put it in ya bars perfectly. I'm a huge fan of wordplay And your shit was on point, no pun. But I can't give much critique, good drop..... MVGT - Arthur, he went harder hitting personals and wordplay. IMO |
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Allow me to retort, you cowards is just learnin the shit we been teachin
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JBrenn
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Joined: 03 May 2006 Status: Offline Points: 3757 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-26-0 Form: WWLWWW |
Posted: 20 January 2014 at 7:22am |
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PB-you had some good punches i think some of them were more a less jabs here and there.. like the gunner personal missed for me and the closer was weak as well... but most of the other bars were direct hits... can't say this is the best verse I've seen from you but it was a good jump back into your old battling days... nice drop. Fav PB LINE: "I'll smash this bastards writtens - he bout to face a Tsar with greater bars So his winning streak will be 'Point-less' like half his explanations are" Art- you brought the fire as usual but some of your bars were misses for me as well... the manchester bar ended weaker than i would have liked. your closer was also your weakest bar(not saying it wasn't good just was the weakest) Thats like saying that bar was the weakest man in the strong man competition still had ko power.... over all very very solid verse you brought way better personals. Arts best bar: Art bring Mad Scripture, Point your so washed up not even your Crew Mate wants to Tag Wit Ya Make you Sad Mister? And when they shout Vis You All Suck! They're not referrin' to TV's with Bad Picture. (Visual) MVGT- Arthur |
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Kiki Spirez
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Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 20 January 2014 at 11:39am |
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Point- I'm so far above you son, coming at Blank's a bad decision
Cos my 'bars' you'll be "struggling to reach Art" like baffled statisticians 8/10 for this, good flow, liked the punch, original to me anyway. I'll smash this bastards writtens - he bout to face a Tsar with greater bars So his winning streak will be 'Point-less' like half his explanations are 7/10 for this, nothing killer, but it was direct and it had solid multis to set up. Claims he's hard but we'll never see this fag on P's level The only time I've seen a 'Deadly Art attack' was on the Halloween special 5/10 for this, wasn't awful, just seen a lot of art attack punches. So why battle a devil as if you were ever prepared? I'll stop this 'gunner in his tracks' like scenes from Tienenman square 7/10 for this, good use of social info, and a nice reference to boot. You're struggling for form so I don't need to drop my best to stop you It's like you're passing wind after dinner the way Beans got the better of you! 5/10 for this, was a miss for me, weak punch, sloppy rhyming at the end of the lines. And this kid wants titles so he's tryna join my teams contingent Cos this pussys got 'no Hope Solo' like the U.S when their keepers injured 6/10 for this, random reference, but it worked and flowed nicely. Yea people thought this'd be tight but dumping this chump is easy He studied my tutorials to 'take a Point', but still won't fucking beat me 7/10 for this, nothing haymaker, however the flow was on point, and it was great clownin'. 45/70. Arthur- Squashin These Foes, P a leader? Please, this bitch Praised Me for Droppin His Bro Art Stoppin This Show, cos you couldn't be Hot Point if you was Washin' My Clothes. 7/10 for this, a good start, flow nice, personally not seen it before. Takin My Time Dude, Breaking Point till he turns to the members of Maior To Cry To Leave Blades Up Inside You, watch Art toss Blank Around like Annihilations From Ryu! (Blanka Round) 6/10 for this, a sound reference, but I felt that it was a bit stretched and wordy. See Blank Tryin But Floppin, stop invitin' me to your crew I ain't joinin' so ya Might As Well Drop It! You'll Die From A Stoppage, needed 2 more leaders cos you lack Power Point like a broken Microsoft Office. 7/10 for this, very nice personal, along with a solid punch. Art Spittin Mental, for your Words to be Straight you need to write Bars With A Stencil Sparrin Eventful, only time they consider Point with Art is when they Sharpen Their Pencil. 7/10 for this, multis crackin', and whilst its a played concept, your name freshened it. I'm That Better, punk askin for extensions cos of exams? Nah its cos you know i Rap Fresher Art the Cash Getter, cos I be Droppin Points worse than Moyes' Reign at Manchester! 7/10 for this, I admit that I laughed, flow on point too. Art bring Mad Scripture, Point your so washed up not even your Crew Mate wants to Tag Wit Ya Make you Sad Mister? And when they shout Vis You All Suck! They're not referrin' to TV's with Bad Picture. (Visual) 6/10 for this, thought the overall punch was too much a stretch, but the clownin set up boosted it. I bring Rare Stanzas, so like your name just Point me to the next round as i Tear Past Ya Sick like i Shared Cancer, cos by the end, Art all over Blank like i started with a Bare Canvas. 6/10 for this, decent closer, good nameplays again, smooth off the tongue with multis. 46/70. As you can see, a fucking tight contest. Loved reading this battle, both came with it, so there's no hate, only a shame that one needs to be knocked out. MVGT- Arthur. |
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 20 January 2014 at 1:37pm |
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4-2 Arthur
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 20 January 2014 at 5:41pm |
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Through further discussion, and fairness among other decisions made.
Flames vote in this battle will also be discounted. 4-1 Arthur
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 21 January 2014 at 10:33pm |
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4-1 Arthur
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-Que-
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Joined: 22 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 2745 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 13-4-1 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 23 January 2014 at 1:12am |
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PB I'm so far above you son, coming at Blank's a bad decision Cos my 'bars' you'll be "struggling to reach Art" like baffled statisticians Ehh....I dunno...iffy I'll smash this bastards writtens - he bout to face a Tsar with greater bars So his winning streak will be 'Point-less' like half his explanations are I like this one....didnt have much sting but I liked the cleverness. What took the sting away was I had to rehash it till I got the full concept. Claims he's hard but we'll never see this fag on P's level The only time I've seen a 'Deadly Art attack' was on the Halloween special Not a fan of clickin links.....still doesnt have the strength even with the link exposed So why battle a devil as if you were ever prepared? I'll stop this 'gunner in his tracks' like scenes from Tienenman square ok You're struggling for form so I don't need to drop my best to stop you It's like you're passing wind after dinner the way Beans got the better of you! LOL!! And this kid wants titles so he's tryna join my teams contingent Cos this pussys got 'no Hope Solo' like the U.S when their keepers injured ehh...borderline Yea people thought this'd be tight but dumping this chump is easy He studied my tutorials to 'take a Point', but still won't fucking beat me I liked this one...good personal! Art Squashin These Foes, P a leader? Please, this bitch Praised Me for Droppin His Bro Art Stoppin This Show, cos you couldn't be Hot Point if you was Washin' My Clothes. ok ok....clever opener Takin My Time Dude, Breaking Point till he turns to the members of Maior To Cry To Leave Blades Up Inside You, watch Art toss Blank Around like Annihilations From Ryu! (Blanka Round) ehhh....reaching in this one See Blank Tryin But Floppin, stop invitin' me to your crew I ain't joinin' so ya Might As Well Drop It! You'll Die From A Stoppage, needed 2 more leaders cos you lack Power Point like a broken Microsoft Office. this could have been shortened to have far more impact. I like long bar style but it has to have more that one punch. This was okish....clever but okayish. OH and LOL @ The personal shot Art Spittin Mental, for your Words to be Straight you need to write Bars With A Stencil Sparrin Eventful, only time they consider Point with Art is when they Sharpen Their Pencil. yup...I like this one...not deadly but as with others it was consistant I'm That Better, punk askin for extensions cos of exams? Nah its cos you know i Rap Fresher Art the Cash Getter, cos I be Droppin Points worse than Moyes' Reign at Manchester! LOL....I'm not from where yall from so This sailed over me. Art bring Mad Scripture, Point your so washed up not even your Crew Mate wants to Tag Wit Ya Make you Sad Mister? And when they shout Vis You All Suck! They're not referrin' to TV's with Bad Picture. (Visual) Very clever!! I bring Rare Stanzas, so like your name just Point me to the next round as i Tear Past Ya Sick like i Shared Cancer, cos by the end, Art all over Blank like i started with a Bare Canvas. Between okay and cool....nothin deadly just more consistency. Overall....I feel PB you are far far more capable than what you displayed. you usually pretty deadly but in this battle , I just felt that you wasn't in to it. You should have been the one to dominate cuz thats the type of drops you usually bring. Art Kinda sloppy compared to some of your battle verses. You were just busy jamming in uneccessary phrases. Some filler is okay cuz it brings build up, but you went off extra excited like you just had to ramble. Sometimes less is more. But on that note....great job with those ideas....they were pretty good..I enjoyed how you put them together. V-Art |
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The Law
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Posted: 23 January 2014 at 1:55am |
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5-1 Art
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