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J504
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 3:54pm |
-Que-
Standard Member Joined: 22 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 2745 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 13-4-1 Form: WWWWLW |
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Whole thing was fuckin ferocious!! I'll bring more detail in a bit.
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Kosmosis
Superior Member Joined: 12 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 3264 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-15-1 Form: WWLLNL |
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sick multi continuation.
Blanket ya boys, cut the Linus act <-----nice.
i sense a hidden message.
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Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13.
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CHAIN
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lol @ sign lines, i thought this was cool, nice round
.... i'm going back in to my corner |
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Manc
Superior Member Joined: 02 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 7032 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 82-4-2 Form: WWWWNW |
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Oh shit!!!
This was ridiculous!! It's impossible for most writers to come up with that many multis, and still make sense. This shows a whole other side of you that I don't think we've seen until now. The style was creative - the flow was there - the multis were stupid lol - and it was all a good read. |
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-Que-
Standard Member Joined: 22 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 2745 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 13-4-1 Form: WWWWLW |
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First Off! This shit showed nothing but raw talent and immense elevation J5! I was blown away my brotha.
Mindless trash disguised in rhymes and raps Accolades displayed from the minds entrapped Let me clear my throat with this Dimmetap (Ahem!) Flow with no substance? that's a sign it's wack ^^Shit!! The dimmetap was off the chain and I like how everything else fell into pocket. Clockin' a grip, I grab my timin' back Inclined ta let my lines shine on diamond tracks keepin' with the wordplay, rewind it back ya style's Juvenile while it's mine thats Cash Blanket ya boys, cut the Linus act Can't back it up, plus you minus ass ^^^lol....that shit was pure feul on fire! Crew Reps: ain't no sense deny'n facts... We always numba 1 when we signing acts If you kept it real, we be findin' that You really wanna ask me where the line is at We stay where guns play and we chimin' back Yall stray from gunplay, co-sign with that LOL...cool! Pussy crew dipped, so if ya sign em back Ask 'em how the QB got his linemen sacked Ask 'em why they actin' like vagina act Vanished on the spot like where the hymens at ROTF!! NICE!! Ask 'em what to say, you need your Simon back further proves you got no clue to how men act further proves I know your moves like Almanac Ha! Good one! now tell your outlaw friends that the lawmans back (and that's that) Blinded dap acquired for timeless crap "WILL RHYME FOR RESPECT" that's your sign in caps LMAO! Who's the villain? I write my lines in black With my name on your brain like I signed your cap Wordplay is off the charts You think you hittin' me by just rhymin' back? Spit venom at you pawns like a Diamond-back Runnin' out of breath'll make ya whinin' lapse.. but If ya think he's ill why don't ya sign him fast? Hot, Boys! yea, that temp is risin' fast! Why you call in sick and not the guys in back? LOL!!! Sure this is redundant, but I'm dyin' ta ask: Why must we be reminded that this guy's a chap? Pests to zap, givin' flys a blast duckin' down for rodents they can bind in traps Showin'no control with their benign attack Fahhhh-Sho!!! drunken off tha laughter 'till my stein is tapped Wreckin' on a track if ya test My finest lap ya don't want me on 11 cause I'll make ya Spinal Tap With a final draft I blast your spine in half <---vicious!! Breakin' MC Ribs, Snap! like the swine is back<--again...wordplay is volcanic! Divine I flash - an as I blind your ass give your spine a gash while I align your back I major in pain, you're just a minor rash Easy to play your mind like it's Diner Dash Marvelous my niggah!! J5 is relentless! |
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