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    Posted: 01 February 2011 at 3:54pm
 
 
 
 
 
 


Yeah
Destiny's beckon...
favors those who accept it

Respect it...
There's no way to check it...
No rewinding or reversal of fates
No plan of escape... 
No methods for survival
it's already set into motion
now this is your bible
all you can do is read
and...


believe


Mindless trash disguised in rhymes and raps
Accolades displayed from the minds entrapped
Let me clear my throat with this Dimmetap (Ahem!)
Flow with no substance? that's a sign it's wack
Clockin' a grip, I grab my timin' back
Inclined ta let my lines shine on diamond tracks
keepin' with the wordplay, rewind it back
ya style's Juvenile while it's mine thats Cash  
Blanket ya boys, cut the Linus act
Can't back it up, plus you minus ass 
Crew Reps:  ain't no sense deny'n facts...
We always numba 1 when we signing acts
If you kept it real, we be findin' that
You really wanna ask me where the line is at
We stay where guns play and we chimin' back
Yall stray from gunplay, co-sign with that
Pussy crew dipped, so if ya sign em back
Ask 'em how the QB got his linemen sacked   
Ask 'em why they actin' like vagina act 
Vanished on the spot like where the hymens at
Ask 'em what to say, you need your Simon back
further proves you got no clue to how men act
further proves I know your moves like Almanac
now tell your outlaw friends that the lawmans back
(and that's that)


Blinded dap acquired for timeless crap
"WILL RHYME FOR RESPECT" that's your sign in caps
Who's the villain? I write my lines in black 
With my name on your brain like I signed your cap
You think you hittin' me by just rhymin' back?
Spit venom at you pawns like a Diamond-back
Runnin' out of breath'll make ya whinin' lapse..
but If ya think he's ill why don't ya sign him fast?
Hot, Boys! yea, that temp is risin' fast!
Why you call in sick and not the guys in back?
Sure this is redundant, but I'm dyin' ta ask:
Why must we be reminded that this guy's a chap?
Pests to zap, givin' flys a blast
duckin' down for rodents they can bind in traps
Showin'no control with their benign attack
drunken off tha laughter 'till my stein is tapped
Wreckin' on a track if ya test My finest lap 
ya don't want me on 11 cause I'll make ya Spinal Tap
With a final draft I blast your spine in half 
Breakin' MC Ribs, Snap! like the swine is back
Divine I flash - an as I blind your ass
give your spine a gash while I align your back
I major in pain, you're just a minor rash
Easy to play your mind like it's Diner Dash
(and that's that)

 

 

 

 


 


 

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Whole thing was fuckin ferocious!! I'll bring more detail in a bit.

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sick multi continuation. 
Blanket ya boys, cut the Linus act   <-----nice.
 
i sense a hidden message.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote CHAIN Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 February 2011 at 6:48pm
lol @ sign lines, i thought this was cool, nice round
.... i'm going back in to my corner
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Oh shit!!! LOL

This was ridiculous!! It's impossible for most writers to come up with that many multis, and still make sense.
This shows a whole other side of you that I don't think we've seen until now. The style was creative - the flow was there - the multis were stupid lol - and it was all a good read. Clap


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First Off! This shit showed nothing but raw talent and immense elevation J5! I was blown away my brotha.

Mindless trash disguised in rhymes and raps
Accolades displayed from the minds entrapped
Let me clear my throat with this Dimmetap (Ahem!)
Flow with no substance? that's a sign it's wack
^^Shit!! The dimmetap was off the chain and I like how everything else fell into pocket.
Clockin' a grip, I grab my timin' back
Inclined ta let my lines shine on diamond tracks
keepin' with the wordplay, rewind it back
ya style's Juvenile while it's mine thats Cash  
Blanket ya boys, cut the Linus act
Can't back it up, plus you minus ass 
^^^lol....that shit was pure feul on fire!
Crew Reps:  ain't no sense deny'n facts...
We always numba 1 when we signing acts
If you kept it real, we be findin' that
You really wanna ask me where the line is at
We stay where guns play and we chimin' back
Yall stray from gunplay, co-sign with that
LOL...cool!
Pussy crew dipped, so if ya sign em back
Ask 'em how the QB got his linemen sacked   
Ask 'em why they actin' like vagina act 
Vanished on the spot like where the hymens at
ROTF!! NICE!!
Ask 'em what to say, you need your Simon back
further proves you got no clue to how men act
further proves I know your moves like Almanac
Ha! Good one!
now tell your outlaw friends that the lawmans back
(and that's that)
Blinded dap acquired for timeless crap
"WILL RHYME FOR RESPECT" that's your sign in caps
LMAO!
Who's the villain? I write my lines in black 
With my name on your brain like I signed your cap
Wordplay is off the charts
You think you hittin' me by just rhymin' back?
Spit venom at you pawns like a Diamond-back
Runnin' out of breath'll make ya whinin' lapse..
but If ya think he's ill why don't ya sign him fast?
Hot, Boys! yea, that temp is risin' fast!
Why you call in sick and not the guys in back?
LOL!!!
Sure this is redundant, but I'm dyin' ta ask:
Why must we be reminded that this guy's a chap?
Pests to zap, givin' flys a blast
duckin' down for rodents they can bind in traps
Showin'no control with their benign attack
Fahhhh-Sho!!!
drunken off tha laughter 'till my stein is tapped
Wreckin' on a track if ya test My finest lap 
ya don't want me on 11 cause I'll make ya Spinal Tap
With a final draft I blast your spine in half <---vicious!!
Breakin' MC Ribs, Snap! like the swine is back<--again...wordplay is volcanic!
Divine I flash - an as I blind your ass
give your spine a gash while I align your back
I major in pain, you're just a minor rash
Easy to play your mind like it's Diner Dash
Thumbs Up Marvelous my niggah!! J5 is relentless!
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