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    Posted: 12 July 2017 at 9:23pm
Two tries taking this spot off the king!? Bullshit but I seen it trending
See LA with no tear ups, you got to fake shit and force it
And I ain't need to mention .....
"Its all about the whole lot of what NOT you bring, that needs defending"
When the Law of LA says it ain't working Corrupt, that means pretending
No plans to square up, you bums need a quick relief to ease the tension
Only thing I can say now, is fuck a cube off the sleeve intervention
That's wanking!
Stepping in to stir the broth
Still ain't nobody's ranking, so even he can't discern the top
From the salt shit
Who's in contention?
I reckon that's working vegetables and worthless stock!
Check it! The scum already rose to the surface first
Came to a perfect stop.....
Just like the battlefields you herbs are from
Me I only script words to bombs, watching some near begging for shots
Cuba dude went pitching for J Hom, while most don't remember his drops
Truth, whoever you choose
Gone be a Homicide that ain't contending a lot
You fucking heavenly flops
I've transcended the top and hardly ever been propped
Yall get together an plot, popularity over punches
Ain't that some damn charity for ya lunches
Caught slacking, short stacking all the challengers looking stunted
Comes to the crunch it's embarrassing you nothing munchkins





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You're the only guy who can complain about having to defend his title and make it seem like a brag. If you come out the back of this then nobody can dispute you're the top dog, right?

But hey, you might not even have that problem...I'd maybe focus on that first. Welcome to Bloodlines.
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Spume comes out before BL with a hammer. i like this. Flow was there, punches were there and the tempo is set. Spume aint playing around
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Ric flair shit my man
I gonna show anybody that thinks I'm second guessing myself that they totally don't know best

Don't see this as complaining please just feed the facts
I'm the man making the truth possible
If it's flaming its flaming in rhyme form

There's goes the man
Come back with real feed chief

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Preciate them looks though guys

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Well had something to say here eh friend,i think your point was made..lol,


Two tries taking this spot off the king!? Bullshit but I seen it trending
See LA with no tear ups, you got to fake shit and force it
And I ain't need to mention .....
"Its all about the whole lot of what NOT you bring, that needs defending"
When the Law of LA says it ain't working Corrupt, that means pretending
No plans to square up, you bums need a quick relief to ease the tension
Only thing I can say now, is fuck a cube off the sleeve intervention
That's wanking!
Stepping in to stir the broth
Still ain't nobody's ranking, so even he can't discern the top
From the salt shit
Who's in contention?

(wow put that statement on blast,this was a ripe read to be honest,it had an energy
to it via subtle burst of emotions,coupled with the fact your contents were relevant
just lifted this verse up and out at a reader,and with the wit entow just seemed to
give this piece not just a statement vibe,but also an address of issues from your
prospective,which i liked,(and that line about the sleeve intervention was clever &
funny,i just wish you left out the kind of expo though by including wanking,as i got
what you was conveying before I read that part,but with that typed I understand
why you included it to help some ppl see the play),nice segment here i'm liking this..)

I reckon that's working vegetables and worthless stock!
Check it! The scum already rose to the surface first
Came to a perfect stop.....
Just like the battlefields you herbs are from
Me I only script words to bombs, watching some near begging for shots
Cuba dude went pitching for J Hom, while most don't remember his drops
Truth, whoever you choose
Gone be a Homicide that ain't contending a lot
You fucking heavenly flops
I've transcended the top and hardly ever been propped
Yall get together an plot, popularity over punches
Ain't that some damn charity for ya lunches
Caught slacking, short stacking all the challengers looking stunted
Comes to the crunch it's embarrassing you nothing munchkins

(yep the opening bar of this hashed out section was clever,not only for the comparison
words used (vegetable n stock) ,and not only for your stealth alias play either,but as a
complete bar,very creative that because it shows the thought process behind it,and the
fact thought went into it,but all whilst being subtle and it didn't stop there,you carried it
through with the truthful stance about J Homicde play via Cuba's plug,this verse had a
controlled aggression vibe running all through it too,which in itself is a highlight,nicely
expressed that,a solid read from start to end plus a subtleness that some ppl may not
see on reading,you let them all know Champ why your the Champ..)

Peace..
"You need to learn how to make an exit,before you can make an entrance".
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