Spit for Rank: check it out bad karma's got a story...

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   im 3stylin this shit so be gentle yeah lol.....

right do you eva say, why's this happen to me?
why'd i almost die, wen i was smackin the street?
wen ma back n ma feet, started snappin ta beets (bits)
& now im stuck in this seat, like a fukin leek (vegetable)
i cant jump ta tha beat, or make love ta ma beach (bitch fo those that r dum)
i cant dunk or hump or drug maself im fucked cant believe this sheet (shit)

see one second i were fine, went out with out a care
next second i were almost dyin, now cant get outa this chair
widout sum help n crutches, i wanna shout n yell fuck this!
i'm luckless, cant get much rest and i feel like a fukin spud yes
i have stared death in the face n smirked, this is his revenge
feelin bare now im left in pain n hurt, its a bitch that'll be me end......  

rite like i sed its a freestyle took me a lil bit ta sort a fu things but i think it turned out orite flow falls in parts but fukit, so yeah.......grade me 

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bad karma Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 17 June 2008 Location: \0/ ENGLAND \0/ Status: Offline Points: 186 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-6-0 Form: WWLWLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote bad karma Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: check it out bad karma's got a story... Posted: 17 June 2008 at 5:30pm
	im 3stylin this shit so be gentle yeah lol..... right do you eva say, why's this happen to me? why'd i almost die, wen i was smackin the street? wen ma back n ma feet, started snappin ta beets (bits) & now im stuck in this seat, like a fukin leek (vegetable) i cant jump ta tha beat, or make love ta ma beach (bitch fo those that r dum) i cant dunk or hump or drug maself im fucked cant believe this sheet (shit) see one second i were fine, went out with out a care next second i were almost dyin, now cant get outa this chair widout sum help n crutches, i wanna shout n yell fuck this! i'm luckless, cant get much rest and i feel like a fukin spud yes i have stared death in the face n smirked, this is his revenge feelin bare now im left in pain n hurt, its a bitch that'll be me end...... rite like i sed its a freestyle took me a lil bit ta sort a fu things but i think it turned out orite flow falls in parts but fukit, so yeah.......grade me
	stuck here wit a damaged back, how tha fuck i manage that? its savage that woz a hit n run, this shit aint fun almost chipped me bum :(

Fatal Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Fatal Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 June 2008 at 7:51pm
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G-Pfeif Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 19 June 2004 Location: Maryland Status: Offline Points: 2541 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-0 Form: WWWLLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote G-Pfeif Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 18 June 2008 at 5:31pm
	i say this is Nov... simple rhyme scheme.... no real punches or wordplay... the leek line was dumb and made no sense... multis werent really too present... needs work, or you need to post somethin that you took some time on
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