Open Mic: Control Unit (feat. Nomedic)

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Your soul doesn't march to its own music, no stupid
It Don't groove to its own tune, don't lose it 
There is something else that owns your control unit
you go through it
go through it 
no stupid
don't lose it. 

[Nomedic]

Altering the mind helps with converting a soul
I work with a probe cause I have earth to control
A vulnerable mind with no purpose to show
I invented micro chips to Insert in their domes
I could Refurbish a clone you're the target I've claimed
Discarding ya heart by darkening parts of the brain
 A bar chart that monitors my marketing gain
Indicating individuals who've started to change
They rejected their God to be regarded as apes
The devil is real and nobody in this garden is safe
Its hard to be sane surrounded by somatic surveillance
I'm scarring your faith and will has met its curtailment 
These acts of persuasion are subscribed by demons
They're meant to curb greatness put aside you're reason
The eye doesn't sleep and I run shit up in here
My tongue limits a prayer the publics unaware

[CHAIN]

I had it with the system, playing this Gepetto game 
Losing all my focus, chasing these stiletto saints
On the reg, distracted, dazzled by confetti rain
Mad external factors got me in Andretti’s lane. 
Fast, green with envy, riding with the gecko face
Something’s got me goofing, looting for these retro J’s. 
Blinding me with trinkets while hiding all the bricks
I buy into the shit by raging over Lego shapes. 
Tried to build a crib while maidens in their negligees…
Strutted through my acres to lure me into Section 8. 
I’m just a little pig who bickers over petty change
Big bad wolves wan’ hurt me with the breaths they take. 
Snatched mad parmesan, want me gone like yesterday  
Led ashtray, I’m lost, I’m far beyond the edge of faith. 
Seemingly possessed, feeling all the devil’s weight…
Leaning on my chest, peeling off the web of hate. 
Detonating, driven by this force, and it escalates…
Quickly ‘cause it regulates my present fate, yeah.

Your soul doesn't march to its own music, no stupid
It Don't groove to its own tune, don't lose it 
There is something else that owns your control unit
you go through it
go through it 
no stupid
don't lose it. 

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CHAIN Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote CHAIN Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Control Unit (feat. Nomedic) Posted: 30 March 2015 at 11:03pm
	Your soul doesn't march to its own music, no stupid It Don't groove to its own tune, don't lose it There is something else that owns your control unit you go through it go through it no stupid don't lose it. [Nomedic] Altering the mind helps with converting a soul I work with a probe cause I have earth to control A vulnerable mind with no purpose to show I invented micro chips to Insert in their domes I could Refurbish a clone you're the target I've claimed Discarding ya heart by darkening parts of the brain A bar chart that monitors my marketing gain Indicating individuals who've started to change They rejected their God to be regarded as apes The devil is real and nobody in this garden is safe Its hard to be sane surrounded by somatic surveillance I'm scarring your faith and will has met its curtailment These acts of persuasion are subscribed by demons They're meant to curb greatness put aside you're reason The eye doesn't sleep and I run shit up in here My tongue limits a prayer the publics unaware [CHAIN] I had it with the system, playing this Gepetto game Losing all my focus, chasing these stiletto saints On the reg, distracted, dazzled by confetti rain Mad external factors got me in Andretti’s lane. Fast, green with envy, riding with the gecko face Something’s got me goofing, looting for these retro J’s. Blinding me with trinkets while hiding all the bricks I buy into the shit by raging over Lego shapes. Tried to build a crib while maidens in their negligees… Strutted through my acres to lure me into Section 8. I’m just a little pig who bickers over petty change Big bad wolves wan’ hurt me with the breaths they take. Snatched mad parmesan, want me gone like yesterday Led ashtray, I’m lost, I’m far beyond the edge of faith. Seemingly possessed, feeling all the devil’s weight… Leaning on my chest, peeling off the web of hate. Detonating, driven by this force, and it escalates… Quickly ‘cause it regulates my present fate, yeah. Your soul doesn't march to its own music, no stupid It Don't groove to its own tune, don't lose it There is something else that owns your control unit you go through it go through it no stupid don't lose it.
	+Sick-Witted+

SwordedStylez Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 16 August 2007 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 4921 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-0-1 Form: WWWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote SwordedStylez Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 30 March 2015 at 11:08pm
	Yeah this was good Nomedic you were pretty butter flow wise, there was one line that the stresses fell in the wrong places. You were actually quite "chain like" here in terms of your content style, it works but i think it's a little derivative. I can see a few writer's on LA in your work, i think you'e got the skills now to start getting more unique as a writer style wise. Nice work nonetheless. Chain, did I read this verse already? I think I did, either that or you've been doing this so long they all sound the same...nah I'm playing. lego shapes/negligees, was a highlight, edge of faith thtrough the end was top-form "you." You should spit it, i'll produce ;)
	Music Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's)

Jay Homicide Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 11 November 2009 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 1329 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-3-0 Form: WWLWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Jay Homicide Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 30 March 2015 at 11:52pm
	This was good, agree with what SS said about Nomedic being a bit Chain like in his verse, but tbh I think that's just what a lot of people try to do when working with him. Both verses were a good read, Chain you were on one again, calm down fam my iPhone can't handle the heat.

A-one AR Royalty Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Banned Joined: 19 February 2015 Status: Offline Points: 123	Post Options Post Reply Quote A-one AR Royalty Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 31 March 2015 at 4:07am
	This was highly entertaining. I enjoyed both verses. But personally Nomedic bars were built a little better in my eyes. Kinda short. But if this was a little longer it would turn into a great track. Keep up the great work killers. AR

Rutter knows best Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Senior Moderator Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4529 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Rutter knows best Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 31 March 2015 at 2:32pm
	Yeh like jay saud the styles in this were very similiar, but i liked that the two pieces looked like they should be next to each other and with the similiar flow u could compare the content nice and easy. First of medz, nice to see to try the shorter lines again. You did a good job and flow was really smooth. Your technique in this was really nice. Usual nice content and word choice. Enjoyed . Propz Chain - The flow once again was so smooth and i like how u cant predict where the fuck the sentence is going. Creativity within your language was strong here as usual, and one again just carried the rhymes scheme on like it was nothing. propz This was a nice collab and the writing styles looked nice together. Look forward to seeeing another from u two.
	#bananas