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    Posted: 03 January 2020 at 9:07am
Hello... what’s up?? This is my first

Fake people fake cities
Fake the way you been teartin
I Been a true fake facing out fake opportunities t
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dope, you da best eva
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Lawrence took the words right out of my mouth.
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To be honest, it's too short to give detailed feedback, but what I will type is, that
I thought the repeated use of the word "fake" in different settings was cool, plus
it flowed well enough also, just wanted more to read really...peace.
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before you can dare make an entrance".
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