Text Battle Archive: [Crew] The Guy vs fuckoff

The Guy

The Guy: Opener: an o.k opener the end rhyme of the set up seemed a bit forced "deaden" doesn't read smoothly.
Bar 2: nice personal but the wording again seemed off IMO it was worded awkwardly
Bar 3: This was a nice bar well worked to the previous and it was nice and smooth
Bar 4: an ok bar I'm sure this has been used before but doesn't take away from the punch just I feel it could have been worded better though
Bar 5: nice bar good personal and nicely worded
Bar 6: the end rhyme was a stretch "urinal... personals" doesn't rhyme for me.
Bar 7: decent but the punch was lacking impact imo could have been worded better
Closer: Not a great closer the "brits have bad teeth" is majorly played ( also not true ) but the punch I feel was lacking. Kinda felt like you ran out of ideas.

FO: Opener: nice opener had humour and decent punch
Bar 2: not a fan of his one wording felt off and punch was great
Bar 3: this was better nice wordplay and the punch was decent
Bar 4: so far bar of the battle great punch even better personal and the ref to Lucky. Just great
Bar 5: another nice bar ref to brenn bein picked over Guy for crew leader good personal
Bar 6: not brilliant had potential but the wording killed the punch and it didn't ryme imo
Bar 7: nice good personal nice punch and great multis
Closer: ok closer no hey maker but a decent hit.

Overall an o.k battle I feel both could have come alot harder especially Guy from what I saw in he battle royale but for better consistency and harder punches FO edged it for me

MVGT FUCKOFF

The guy
Opener- nice concept, felt this was a decent punch

Bar 2 - this was sick, funny shit nice personal punch

Bar 3- nah man

Bar 4- like the name play here but nothin to hard

Bar 5- wow! Loved this good shit.

Bar 6- ok... Nothing special

Bar 7- this was cool felt you could have made it harder

Closer - lol this was funny decent closer



Fucker

Opener - yup this was a solid hit. Clownin him

Bar 2- idk about this...

Bar 3- didn't rhyme here

Bar 4- bam! Nice personals here. Big connect

Bar 5-ha! Good personal here man this was nice
Hard hit

Bar 6- felt this was the best personal punch of the battle

Bar 7- lol this was funny, again another nice personal punch

Closer- nice personal again ok punch nothing knocking him out


Overall- I felt this was really close. I felt of had some harder personal punches but two of his bars didn't rhyme. I saw the ideas but without rhyming the don't connect. Guy was consistent with punches had some decent personals
I would vote a tie because fo had the best bar but his two and three bars killed it

Vote guy


Good battle here fellas.

Guy - really an up and down verse, like you had some nice standouts like your dead beat bar and your pencil personal, but you had some throw always as well. In a crew battle you can't have bars like "when it comes to fuck off that's all you need to do", it really makes it look like you didn't take the time to polish your verse and just threw that shit in there. On the bright side I thought your verses flow was a lot smoother, and you tied your set ups together pretty well. My fav being that dead beat bar, shit was cut throat. You just need every bar to be close to or on that level you know?

FO - you focused so much on "fuck" plays that the verse almost seemed more defensive then offensive. I thought that you were constantly throwing jabs and didn't bring the wording to have those kill shots that you need. I did like that you brought a lot of personal content, it shows that you studied guy. Though I don't think that you used it as effectively as you could of in terms of wording. For example your second bar is a dud because of the end rhyme was forced and the flow was off but you did attack in the set up and end rhyme so it makes it like a double jab rather than one big haymaker. I do commend you on your personal angle, but you've got to use your ideas better. Law and point do this really well so you have some close resources..

Vote/ Guy, I thought he had the bigger bars rather than constant smaller shots

Fuck you aint lethal, he’s irrelevant and his talent is deaden
Ironically he internalizes pencils but can’t use the lead as a weapon

4/5
Decent opener Bro, personal and punch utilized very well

If he saw a gun, this dude would probably shit in his draws
Cause this faggot is always seen for having a tight grip on The Law

4/5 Lmfao, funny as shit

And that grip is so tight, that it’s insanely beastin It's got professional arm wrestlers paying for his training secrets

4/5 nice

He’s a weakling, drop him and his crew cause pussy is all we see in you
When it comes to fuckoff…thats the only thing you really need to do

3/5 didnt feel you went ham wit dis bar

Instead of being a Dad, FO would rather battle to be influential
This bitch such a dead beat he could pass for a j dilla instrumental

Lmfao pretty nice 4/5

If you’re feeling pissed…it’s because you’re the Syndicate's urinal
You’re not known for bars, only for your ability to find someone's personals

3.5/5 nice personal,

Stop instigating shit or else you’ll be easily dropped and humbled When it comes to VM…he cling to balls like running backs trying not to fumble

3.5/5 this line was ayt

You won't rebuttal, as I shuffle and cut through you fuckers
If this brit's closing any gaps...its only cause his teeth overlap and cuddle each other

3/5 it aint a solid diss, felt like a miss abit

29/40

you syn faggots dick ride hard... me? im strictly muff, i like sluts... so iv never really been 'in-to guy bars'.... they 'behind fuck' (ew)

Cool opener 4/5

times up, your whole 'party'll b waving an dead', like your crews new banner '
fuck owns guy'. your missus'll bitch slap you, for just typin 'fuck' into google wanker

3/5 wasnt feelin it that much,

ya whole force'll slip.. your prey, this ain' a fair fight - ya crews marked
i shoot bars n this 'bird'll split'... but it still wouldn' be a 'game of two halfs'..

3/5 nice bar, Halves and marked do rhyme depends on your accent

dude ya tarnished, by the hellish truth of ya bitch leader biting dudes
its harsh, your only syn was envy, WHEN VIS NEVER INVITED YOU..

4/5 dope personal

you used to have potential.. but 'never got dope'. so 'L went past you' mate
'fuck over guy's standard practice for syn.. s'why brenn got promoted - AND YOU AINT!

3/5 nice bar but felt it was slightly stretched

audio's never nice as fuck, your crews lying.. those snakes are wrong guy'll get a boot for syn, cause those forbidden fruits?.. tasted off

4/5 nice wordplay here

thats shame. 'period.. you suck. an kill't that hook', like a 'scotch whore tha's bleedin..' Critically acclaimed.. for what? sounding like a younger.. sleepier.. morgan freeman..

Lmfao nice 4.5/5

i was like make it stop!..god.. maybe its too much time chained to the Xbox??
cause your writing styles become like ya gamer tag... every play you flex is DROSS

3/5 opener was ayt

28,5/ 40

Mvgt Guy hella close battle

thanks a play, i cant remember seeing any of your drops ill look out for em.

The guy wins 5-2