Text Battle Archive: [Crew] Zinaii vs Blissful Barrage

Crew battle between Zinaii vs Blissful Barrage for Tha Syndicate and Vis Maior, respectively.

16 lines
2 week deadline
First 5 (3-0 KO)
No crew votes
No flipping/feeding
No show is instant DQ, no trip to NML
Blind Drops - All verses must be PM'd to me

Lets keep the battles clean and limit the bitchin to just the linked thread for the crew battle.


Edited by Scotty32 - 27 February 2014 at 11:58am

Blissful Barrage

You asked who were the top battlers and you’re one of the worst here

It’s true, in your own thread of who’s the best you get put in the third tier

You’re too thin and weak for your foes it’s hard for you to script in sync

You must not be too fond of needles because twice you couldn’t finish INK.

Registered multiple times your sign on’s tired what you write’s gone dryer

So it’s not win streaks it’s Jerusalem ablaze if we see Zi on fire

In Partners In Rhyme it was a quick exit in the first you got your posse slayed

Tag titles? You only had a chance getting them while reaching for bodysprays

The same lack of understanding you had in your FIFA game is what you exude in text

So it’s gonna take you awhile to kick anything strong through the net

When you returned you was out the loop and it’s the same with who casts votes

The only way you’re going to be up on LA is a UNLM newsflash post

Based on structure it’s a wrap for your fandom your bars you uncapped them at random

You’re gonna take the L Zi (Elzhi) like holding Detroit rappers for ransom

Punches? Zi couldn’t bare those and this fight isn’t very fair though

Notice how I rock Z (IROC Z) without referring to the old Chevy Camaros

MVGT bliss

Bliss had the better flow, executed wordplay better and harder hitting punches. Z, the bevis / butthead play was dope, tho the setup seemed a little forced, was still effective tho... I agree with the guy above, you had decent ideas that just weren't worked well enough to hit hard... Z didn't have a really weak verse, yet this battle was kind of 1 sided to me.

U slow to the first punch so b being
pre-emptive? Nah

Ur in vis Maior but no one knows cuz u
b. List barrage!

3/5 flow made it lack sumin other than that its a decent bar

I'll leave the kid with scars, vm
stamped body bags: splattered
bloodshed

Y'all the friendly crew so y wuld I Be
vis when I'd rather but heads?

4/5 liked this bar,cool crew diss

So how can I give respect to bLissy? He
ain't Ben tested his records iffy

Expain to me were u a backup for
wreck or trizzy?

4/5 liked this bar it flow well and ya punch was nice

U Aint effing with me...false sense of
self worth sayn ur scripts is sick
U niggas bite with strength of a pit...
Not tlkn vm as a whole when I say
ignorance is bliss

4.5/5 Lmfao, nice bar right here

Repent u bitch, u in trouble with syn
so zin'll defeat this lame
Ur punches? Are a reach and tame..
How u on another level when u
couldn't beat the game?

3/5 nice multi's as for the punch it was just okay

I speak with flames, put pressure on
vis..ur rhymes? Can not carry em

Cuz ur click quick to pick shadowy
noobs: like preferred mortal Kombat
characters

3.5/5 nice personal

Bliss versus zin is preposterous...Scotty
have my k.o. locked up quick

And give me street credit accordingly
when I drop a vis

3/5 Vis as in Visa? If so decent bar

U write awkward scripts, so all of your
raps seeming dated
After I put This fag in a grave quick
he'll disappear from vis and go back
on hiatus

3/5 decent,

28/40

You asked who were the top battlers
and you’re one of the worst here
It’s true, in your own thread of who’s
the best you get put in the third tier

4/5 cool opener

You’re too thin and weak for your foes
it’s hard for you to script in sync
You must not be too fond of needles
because twice you couldn’t finish INK.

4/5 liked this bar alot

Registered multiple times your sign
on’s tired what you write’s gone dryer
So it’s not win streaks it’s Jerusalem
ablaze if we see Zi on fire

5/5 dope bar lol flow was dope so as the punch

In Partners In Rhyme it was a quick
exit in the first you got your posse
slayed
Tag titles? You only had a chance
getting them while reaching for
bodysprays

4/5 nice punch orchastrated here, flow was okay

The same lack of understanding you
had in your FIFA game is what you
exude in text
So it’s gonna take you awhile to kick
anything strong through the net

4/5 i take it this is a solid personal, if so liked it alot nice

When you returned you was out the
loop and it’s the same with who casts
votes
The only way you’re going to be up
on LA is a UNLM newsflash post

3/5 decent

Based on structure it’s a wrap for your
fandom your bars you uncapped them
at random
You’re gonna take the L Zi (Elzhi) like
holding Detroit rappers for ransom

5/5 nice flow and the way you worded it was hella nice

Punches? Zi couldn’t bare those and
this fight isn’t very fair though
Notice how I rock Z (IROC Z) without
referring to the old Chevy Camaros

4/5 cool name play ,flow and punch

33/40 way to go

Mvgt Bliss