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    Posted: 30 August 2016 at 2:31am
Topic - Reincarnation after dying into someone or something else

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Edited by Endeavor - 16 September 2016 at 7:59pm

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 September 2016 at 3:17pm
PHOENIX RISING


Egypt - 2499 B.C.

After years of being born into servitude, Thamphthis, a young practitioner of the occult arts

summons the Bennu to assist him in assuming the throne to be Egypt's new Pharaoh.

 

You dare to summon me?? Nascent as can be, young agent of deceit?

so patient and naive, yet trenchant in technique...your vagrance has intrigued

Oh! the tasks you can achieve! ask of what you need? (**) Your placement is decreed.

before you assume the throne know, the vacancy is teased until payment is received..

 

(**) - Thamphthis - "I wish to be Pharaoh of all of Egypt."

Thamphthis did not need Bennu's warning and usurped the throne anyway..

 

Fool! my magic is ancient and unique, you dare to test me in lieu of changes that you seek?

but your punishment ..will be latent and reprieved, for now, enjoy the nation at your feet

soon you'll be blatantly deceased, the pages of history, your name escapes from every sheet

your throne before an heir, left vacant to be seized, and only strangers will compete..


the moral is, to summon and cross me...is a mortal sin, you could die

as the sun touches my obelisk, I transform  from Bennu to Ra

 

 

 

Almost 2000 years later... Greece - circa 500 B.C.

 

I was reborn in the western lands with plumage of gold

Still aligned with the Sun Gods, of new and of old.

The cycle of life and death is such a nuisance, I know.

But my power is in my history, which humans control.

Time is of no essence, so I choose to behold,

The prince of Macedonia when his movement unfolds

I watched my temples start to crumble as truancy slowed

So I let Pompeii burn to ash and never loosened the mould.

 

China – 220 A.D.

 

I arose in the far east, during the Dynasty of Han

A culture built on valor of which finally, I’m fond

Now a symbol for prosperity and peace? The irony is gone

I’m to herald eras of tranquil virtue before I quietly move on?

If I’m righteously a swan, this land’s decidedly my pawn

Thus, the War of the Three Kingdoms spitefully I spawned.

 

 

New York, U.S. – 1973

 

Now I’m just a comic, a cosmic force of energy feeding from a star

I watched the world beneath me crumble, while seething from afar

What’s the meaning of this art? What does reading it impart?

I am barely just a dream of things yet appeasing to the heart

I guess time was in fact essential, I was cheated from the start

Since I’m only what I’m believed to be, it’s easy to depart…


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 September 2016 at 3:29pm
Levy. You're late. I'm giving you 24 hours starting today because I don't want to see Rude' verse go to waste.

4 hours and 45 minutes to go.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2016 at 7:56pm
Well, I accidently gave him 2 extra days after the extension yet there's still no verse. I'm sorry, Rude. But it's a no-show. Please consider to drop your verse in the OM section. You deserve some feed for this.
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