Audio Battle Archive: [Crewsades] Skep vs Bakardi (3-0) |
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Skep
Standard Member Joined: 08 July 2014 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 498 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-0 Form: LW |
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Posted: 27 August 2016 at 10:18pm |
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3 Minutes, without a beat.
Due date, 2 weeks from this post. House rules. Consider this my check |
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Skep
Standard Member Joined: 08 July 2014 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 498 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-0 Form: LW |
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https://soundcloud.com/skep204/la-crewsades-vs-barkardi-syndicate Skeptyk ILL, crewsades mother fucker, Empire bitch Let's get this shit, fuck this faggot I'm confused on why you dudes are flexing shit??? 'Hot head turn a body cold' when I lose my temperment You'll lose it's evident, cuz you ain't fit to move with specialists You might as well 'confess it 'Syn/Sin' like the newer testament
Why you acting hard? you're fucking teams not even decent This is Empire bitch, you need to watch what ya speakin I mean... Zin smokin sheet rocks till he's tweakin That's why this filler is to fill in the void he chopped into pieces Cuz' Zin thinks he dope? Fuck this penis pipe, this little fetus might Thinks he can ether mine, but I have a genius sight I got it 'locked up,' your freedoms mine, 'maxed out' like a visa swipe Your antic show where your weakness lies sorta like how a demon might And Barkardi? Pffft. I can point out five different things he struggles with Like he grabs the mic with a carpel tunnel grip and starts to mumble shit I couldn't understand, like god damn, does your fucking muzzle fit? That alone proves he 'can't stand with me' like a broken jungle gym Were not all mammals, see I'm a cannibal who harvest guts From a carcuss, cuz I'm a gladiator like the beast of Carthage was This mother fuckers carpet dust, I'm tornado with a carnage gust Here to put the 'pressure to this trash' sorta like a garbage truck He claims the king of audio, bitch, I'll leave your organs seepin Bile and puss, no trust and love like a bunch orphans dreamin And the only time your 'deadly 'Syn/Sin'.... Morgan Freeman 'Seven bitches' get dusted fast just like a movie screenin I mean B, when ya rap you sorta sound like Snoopy breathin Through a tube, while your groove is like goofy speakin That's why Imma hit 'Barkardi with the bars' like it's roofie season I got an immortal steez, you see this is how I tutor lames Your user name suggests you flow similar to a sewer drain It's super gay, how you throw punches with a neutered frame You got me landing more 'counter strikes' than the mother fuckin shooter game And your track palm trees was garbage, don't you know how to utilize rhymes? I'm two levels ahead of this faggot with an exercised mind This oversized guy probably has no back bone, no fortified spine So with ease I'm 'stopping Syndicate' like stings on organized crime This is light work, fuck Syndicate, Imma leave their buddy severed Into little pieces, leaving a scene of gore and my bloody pleasure There is literally nothing better than raping these ugly heifers So I'm ending their crews 'Reign/rain' like it was sunny weather Now let me show you how to rock the harshest schemes Ya'll about as scary as a womens soccer team I'll never knock a dream, but I'll part a spleen And leave Barkardi 'pumpin more blood' than a fuckin heart machine Stop ya screams with a throat jab, no daps when I punish this queer Your crews next, I bring the true def of punishment here You'll need to 'look inside yourself,' but the pun is the mirror So I'll push his 'skull inside his chest' like punisher gear Splash Bitch Edited by Skep - 09 September 2016 at 4:40am |
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Bakardi
Groupie Joined: 13 July 2016 Status: Offline Points: 307 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-4-0 Form: LLLL |
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no need to give you guys an entire backstory, all I have is bars for you https://soundcloud.com/bakardimusic/crewsades-bakardi-vs-skep |
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D.Von Doom
Standard Member Joined: 18 June 2014 Status: Offline Points: 1534 Audio Rank: #1 Stats: 15-4-0 Form: WWWWWL |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Nice drops from both of you but the difference is clear. Skep to me you took a horror core/disrespect route to fight bakardi with some nice plays and actual effort in spitting your heart out. On the other hand there was a small abundance of personals your drop. Most of them week sin/syn lines. Could have attacked alot more about him. Bakardi your approach was on some cassidy feel every bar shit but...the momentum wasn't nearly enough. By the time you finished punching skep he already hit you 3 times with lines with that were better written. Also the self hype lines went way too far...it's a battle you are supposed to killing him. Talking about what you would do to his girl is a empty personal because we don't even know if he has one. You have to attack using common knowledge about your opponent from the past and present to get more sting in your punches. Still was a good drop tho MVGT Skep for better performance and better lyrics. Both of you need better personals and plans of attack though. |
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I can only fall off in space...
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Endeavor
Senior Moderator Wiggle wiggle said the bun that jiggle Joined: 03 April 2009 Location: Your kitchen Status: Offline Points: 10000102 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-4-0 Form: WWLWLW |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Alright... Skep: Your delivery is off the hook and I was digging some punches and the wordplay attached to them. I, appreciated the shots taken at the various crew members as it adds to the verse however the majority of the first section was filled with it. Regardless of that I still feel you came in and gave that work. Bakardi: Funny that D.von mentioned Cassidy cuz that's what I was thinking of after the first bar. I could really paraphrase everything he said because I think the same. Skep just came swinging and I felt you was taking blows before countering. Even though the flow type isn't for me, you had some dope lines in there. MVGT: Skep. This was the George Foreman vs Ali fight only in this case Foreman won. Skep came with a barrage of punches (even though some were not directed at Bakardi) and kept the momentum going. Either way, both of ya'll did good tho.
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#Bananas
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Cartesian
Newbie Joined: 16 September 2016 Location: NY Status: Offline Points: 12 |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Bakardi: Clearly have skill, but I noticed some contradictory lines that were almost oxymoronic as well as some personal disses that seemed empty and boilerplate. You mentioned that you were living in an outtake, are ill and then say you're fresh and clean. To me thats saying your life isn't in the movie reel, its an extra on a DVD, which is contradictory to the point you're trying to make. Saying you're the outbreak doesn't mesh with an image of freshness, but rather like you're a disease, and that avenue may have been more effective (instead of a compliment to yourself thats seemingly random, you could've followed the outbreak metaphor to explain how your lyrics are like poison, or a pathogen, etc.). These are opinions, I realize. A lot of decent verses, ironically the only connection I made to the law of averages line, but there were a few stand out phrases for sure. skep: verbally alone your momentum and flow wins from an aesthetic perspective. Imagery in some verses was effective, and the mumble/muzzle/jungle gym portion had me laughing which is dope. The morgan freeman line made me laugh out loud, and overall every line was more rich, effective and developed, so its a clear win. Personal opinion, I think you have a shitload of potential but personally when you come out with a line that basically just calls a dude a faggot it automatically dampens the effect of the lyrical testament. I get it, and it vibes with your aggression, so really just something to consider. Like I said you clearly take the win on this one, but well done to both participants. This is my first post/vote, so I could be off base but it seems like both parties could improve the effectiveness of their rhetoric by easing off of the personal shots as they are basically space fillers. You both had effective areas, in this case skep consistently delivered unique and effective lines whereas bakardi was hit or miss. Personally I think you'd both benefit from developing the imagery and message and back off the empty disses. Edited by Cartesian - 16 September 2016 at 12:09pm |
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12327 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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Nice vote Cart, 3-0 KO to Skep
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