Text Battle Archive: Crim vs DjFlame Topical Battle

A few drinks & a chat in a tavern now led us to this chasm,
Whilst descending we feel spasms on reaching the cavern,
Which has an air of deceit that causes our pores to secrete,
There's no heat but we drip more than 18 widows who weep,
Paid to retrieve a chest from the cave for this blind old man,
Who believes this quest will save him by aiding his lifespan,
Entering we notice the bioluscent insects on threads of silk,
So conducive its effect woven all over the ceiling like a quilt,
Pressing forwards without any need for torches we continue,
Guessing which route now feeds our fear in this soft blue hue,
Eventually we come to a chamber that has an aura of danger,
& the walls face is glossed by ice which resembles a glacier,
A trunk sits there in solitude looking like its been marooned,
Feelin' a sollum mood that begins to cloak us like a costume,
Through its cracks shards of light start a battle with the night,
As the lid snaps back hard the sight causes us panic n fright,
A luminous whisp spirals up 'n' booms "MORE SOULS ATLAST ",
We stood & gasped "ye mortals shall pay penance for thy past",
The quest was travel to get you here,oh & the ice kept you afloat",
The Astral states "the old man was Charon the chest is he's boat" ,

Dude ive now closed this thread because as a mod the battle can't linger more
than 2 weeks,i won't be adjusting your battle record because tests are more
important for you at the moment..peace.