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The Rap Daemon
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Posted: 06 March 2018 at 10:18am |
TUBE code refusing to work so fuck it
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rbcbagXJmDI&lc=z23ye53wizvshfq1wacdp434becn3n4h4stgrbfmkodw03c010c When you have all these lyrical accolades (Yeah) It comes with a dope price tenner for a gram each day (What) Gotta cook some dope shit and let the mind marinade (Dope shit) The attention can be bad so I always have to carry weight (Damn) Knife under my pillow for anyone to catch the fade (Shiv) Can't let my head get too big 'coz I'll end up getting stabbed today (Sharp) Gotta have a toxic plan I'll tell ya how it happens mate (Uh) Always being tailed hard like a fucking rattlesnake (Get off) Last week, on a cold Sunday freaking night (Cold) I was freezing but didn't want the heat to rise (No) I mean, I went to see my dealer right? (No name) The cops pulled up and I had to ditch the green in sight (Shit) I'm like, just hurry up and legalise (Do it) You see the people need my shit and I just need to free the mind (Free it) You're big on freedom so stop bugging my peace And perhaps I can bring a piece 'bout not using my piece To shoot the fucking police! It's freaking a joke (Bam) You're cracking down on drugs but not the reason we smoke! (But not the reason we smoke) Depression and anxiety and the peeps who provoke it (Bitch) Would you rather me do weed or weed these freaks in a blow? (Bitch!) Yeah, I want to be fricking dope (Now) Wanna rap and not be dropped into these twisted holes (Twisted) Where I'm running but not on tracks but away from the pigs (Oinkers) I do gangsta rap but don't wanna force it into toll (Nope) For real life, I'm not fake just trynna live at home (Yeah) I've done away with the crime I just want the biggest throne (King shit) Be a King, not a number on the wanted list n so When I Cypher I want it on the mic not like the Da Vinci code (Name it!) Fucking idiots I stay high to keep stopping (What) Me from getting low, yet you keep knocking (Drop it) It's like you want me dropping I shouldn't have to pay to stay alive and remain sane with Death as a free option (Fuck) I don't bring the hot punches anymore I don't hold This crown on my head 'coz it's not made of gold What's a King when he rules something that is so broke? So I just ice the track up and hope the train goes Straight off of it, why'd you think Black Soul Doesn't use demonic flow to wipe out the mold? 'Coz they thrive in the darkness so I just let it go And spit the unforgiving truth like in World So Cold 'Coz I'm on my last stand and I'll take what I own You can take what you want we will let it unfold Rap is not for hope, do you think TuPac Thought Changes would take pace nah he wanted to show An ideal world 'coz this one had froze On the road to Death any junctions are a hoax! 'Coz any where you turn, we all meet our ends Too bad, that mine here is driving me round the bends. (Da Vinci!) |
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This was hard. You dropped Freaking in there so many times I had to laugh. But Its a hard bro. Your English accent is wack AF you should try and annunciate better. The beat and editing were great and added to the value of what you were saying.
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Crimson Juice
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OK i'll start with the beat first,the tinkle intro on a triangle was nicely done,then
the bass line kicks in which sounded rich and had depth,the plus for me was it didn't smother the delicate sound of the triangle in the process,so some serious props to you there for achieving that,it was overall an ear pleasing pleasure really, now as far as lyrical content,i have no problem there either,they cohesively had a vibe like you had something real to get across and express,the things holding this track back are confidence and delivery,you seem to sound a little nervous,in parts you were zoning and sounding confident,and others parts you sounded shaky,in a fashion when you hit the stride you reminded me of Devlin,yeah in parts you were a little out of sinc and tripped over your words some,but truthfully I like it,good job well worth the listen..peace. |
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