Topic ClosedBattles under Review: Dalinquent Vs INK

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 6:01am
You're a cheater and went over the limit so i am not abiding to the rules niether
and its been proven i am not collin


Originally posted by Dalinquent Dalinquent wrote:

FYI at least 90 % of my Ls came from top 20 battlers all time... I dont my head down having lost to the likes of Orion, Ikon, Point Blank, KayB, 2 Smooth, etc...


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he has a shitty record of 22 losses 29 wins lol..whack!
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Supreme scripts cheated like he did dropped more than 10 lines after i dropped 10 #fact
Bitched about traffic recycling only after traffic tore his ass up ahaha

ladies n gents this is how u USE SELF HYPE =)

Drops 14 after i did 10. ur bars whack & ur an Obscene Bitch.
pullin that bitch shit's the only time D's Ever Pulled off a Supreme Script!
Worry about ur self. Stay in Ur own lane. Ur such a Fagget Fam.
See D'Toured up as he's stuck crying over the discrepencies in Traffics Jam!
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 adored by sluts, they swallow my kids & shoulder my luggage.
Only time u'll see a bitch carrying a D Bag, is cleansing herself after fucking!
I'm Honor roll 4-5 star per drop. Ur worthless than a dollar bitch.
& No chick will want a D for full rides like they're competing for a scholarship!
At boxing? ur not outta this world or 2 smooth at slumping cats.
Only way D see's stars and Orion's belt, is when he became their punching bag!
As Ikontinue joustin him off his high horse. This haters finished.
with so many chinks in his armor! u'd swear there's a whole family of azns in it!
with shots Ur no Savage when ur handles status is below Average
22 L's? Quit it fam cuz we can See Dallas like a shitty season for the Mavericks!






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 6:05am


Before I even start with this dude, Ink upset cause I called him a noob...
He so 'fraid of flips, to slay the bitch I might jus parkour debut...
^I get it, parkour flips kind of obvious..
I'm bout to stomp you to death, Ya perfect record? I kno all of rests
On the fake personals you feed opponents, Well you jus Colin'd a vet
^"I kno all of rests"... wtf does that mean?? Collin'd a vet? call in da vet?
Ink. wish I was falling fa that... But I dont play around
I'll drop this bitch so fast L.A., You'll think the ratings down
^nothing really here .. pretty standard LA flip nothing fresh or toward his opponent..
Him beat me? His G's "e," He rap like "6 IN YA CHEST"
But I'll put Ink out this bitch, Site'll be like a pregnant Squid in distress
^the fuck was the point of the set up g's e/jeezy crip I get it .. squid ink shits played
Originally I was to finish him next, He asked fa extra bars
Guess he's adding metaphors cause we kno Ink shit is stretched
^not flipped in any way to affect your opponent with contact
I'm better than you, Bitch... Leave it at that...
How I son this kid when I 'write,' I feel like I should of left ink in a sack
^explain wtf this bar means .. shit doesn't connect for me at all
Ya battle rap shit in need of attack, The shit you write's a blunder
I make em ignore Ink Bars, Like they bible thumpers
^this could have been a nice concept here but not flipped well



Overall- a lot of played abused concepts seems lioke your rusty .. or rushed your verse ...


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I'm adored by sluts, they swallow my kids & shoulder my luggage.
Only time u'll see a bitch carrying a D Bag, is cleansing herself after fucking!
^I get it carrying d's kids .. could have done more w this
I'm Honor roll 4-5 star per drop. Ur worthless than a dollar bitch.
& No chick will want a D for full rides like they're competing for a scholarship!
^ehh nothing really here..
At boxing? ur not outta this world or 2 smooth at slumping cats.
Only way D see's stars and Orion's belt, is when he became their punching bag!
^lol this shit got a nice chuckle out of me right here .. not bad
 good personal punchAs Ikontinue joustin him off his high horse. This haters finished
with so many chinks in his armor! u'd swear there's a whole family of azns in it!
^I like this bar nice wordplay and connected dopely
with shots Ur no Savage when ur handles status is below Average
22 L's? Quit it fam cuz we See Dallas like a shitty season for the Mavericks!
^this could have been something serious right here .. but feel like you gave up on it ..



Either way this battle is landslide for INK ...



and Boosie he a target,
so me?I got my 40 when I'm shittin on the toilet,
I'm paranoid ... -- Boosie
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 6:10am
U jus read my whole verse saying you ain't no what it meant and voted anyway wow...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 6:14am
Originally posted by ink. ink. wrote:

You're a cheater and went over the limit so i am not abiding to the rules nietherand its been proven i am not collin


I know u not colin, the whole punch is based on the fact that you benefit in battle from people dissing Colin and not you, and how u tried to spin me by even mentioning colin in the set up post... I.E. trying to 'colin'
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 6:34am
This bitch mad that I'm clowning his ass, I don't kno why, Bitch you opened the door
Ink. Faker than the lyrics he tailored to look like he aint wrote em before
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 6:38am
Originally posted by dalinquent dalinquent wrote:

This bitch mad that I'm clowning his ass, I don't kno why, Bitch you opened the door
Ink. Faker than the lyrics he tailored to look like he aint wrote em before


u can stop cheating thanks
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 7:28am
dalinquent

Some of the syntax or flow of your verse felt like it stumbled like 'I know all of rests' and some lines felt longer than they needed to be like ironically your stretched line. I liked your first bar best but would have liked to see more original punches. Squid ink, ink in a bag, stretched ink didn't hit him hard as punches. Some rhymes were good but the bars/stretched rhyme was a flop. Your structure was here n there but some multis were ok and the jpegs didn't connect well to your rap, this was a battle not a topical, they hampered your flow,

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I liked 3rd and 6th bars of the 7 bar verse best. Your multis and rhymes flowed through all 7 bars and your structure was better. The closer felt separated by way of lines concept and the 2nd bar but the rest were at least moderately linked. Calling fgt in your raps is weak unless he's actually gay, play a nameflip instead or something cos making stuff up lessens the authenticity. Flow was good and some funny punches. Better overall personals too

MVGT INK.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 12:25pm


Before I even start with this dude, Ink upset cause I called him a noob...
He so 'fraid of flips, to slay the bitch I might jus parkour debut...

Nice, I like the Parkour/Flips reference


I'm bout to stomp you to death, Ya perfect record? I kno all of rests
On the fake personals you feed opponents, Well you jus Colin'd a vet


I get what you're saying here, but the whole first line was like a big wasted multi

coulda been used for anything else but it didn't really make a Statement. Even the Colin wp is a bit forced and could've been worded better to have a bigger impact.

Ink. wish I was falling fa that... But I dont play around
I'll drop this bitch so fast L.A.,  http://radaronline.com/exclusives/2011/08/kat-von-d-reality-show-la-ink-canceled-tlc/%20 - You'll think the ratings down

I really wouldn't have wasted a bar making a site name reference unless of course it connected to a punch directed at your opponent.


Him beat me? His G's "e," He rap like "6 IN YA CHEST"
But I'll put Ink out this bitch, Site'll be like a pregnant Squid in distress


Setup line was meh, but I can look over that because the actual punch is nice Ink/Squid, that was one of the first flips I thought of when I seen Ink's name.


Originally I was to finish him next, He asked fa extra bars
Guess he's adding metaphors cause we kno Ink shit is stretched

Considering I read all the pointless back n forth posts before the verses got put up, and you're the one who posted more bars, and on top of that you're both using the short  bar format, this bar is moot.


I'm better than you, Bitch... Leave it at that...
How I son this kid when I 'write,' I feel like I should of left ink in a sack

I see what you were going for here, it was a decent attempt, I think it could have made a bigger impact being worded slightly different. Some punches just don't work unless they are worded perfectly.


Ya battle rap shit in need of attack, The shit you write's a blunder
I make em ignore  http://www.dnainfo.com/chicago/20140131/uptown/tattoo-factory-owner-ing-drink-ink-bar-next-door-his-shop - Ink Bars, Like they bible thumpers

I get what you were going for here, it just didn't hit hard for me, this is the type of bar you use on someone who has a religious name.


Overall - I seen a couple nice jabs in there but the rest was decent/could use some work.


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I'm adored by sluts, they swallow my kids & shoulder my luggage.
Only time u'll see a bitch carrying a D Bag, is cleansing herself after fucking!

after having read the Self Hype discussion, this is what I look for when trying to give credit to Self Hype. Ink's use of the first line to connect to the punch here makes the self hype in the first line completely credible (as far as the battle goes) Nice double entende.

I'm Honor roll 4-5 star per drop. Ur worthless than a dollar bitch.
& No chick will want a D for full rides like they're competing for a scholarship!

Ha what's funny about this is I was driving behind a car that said something about Honor Roll on a bumper sticker in my head I came up with the same wordplay and was thinking of something that would connect it. I like the nameflip it was solid.


At boxing? ur not outta this world or 2 smooth at slumping cats.
Only way D see's stars and Orion's belt, is when he became their punching bag!

decent personal here taking a shot at past losses, can never go wrong here as long as it's creative.

As Ikontinue joustin him off his high horse. This haters finished

with so many chinks in his armor! u'd swear there's a whole family of azns in it!

Aha nice @  the Chinks in the Armor/Asians

with shots Ur no Savage when ur handles status is below Average
22 L's? Quit it fam cuz we See Dallas like a shitty season for the Mavericks!

I see where you were going here the Dallas line was creative albeit slightly forced





I don't want to call this a landslide or a catsweep but for ^ reasons stated above, this did appear to be one sided


mvgt - Ink


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 12:37pm
This
"Parkour"

Vs. This
"D bag, chinks"


A lot of wording felt off on dals verse, sounded choppy. Had some great
Ideas for punches but this verse seemed rushed, personals were there tho.
Ink had some cool shit, the bars were either hit or miss here but shit that
D bag line had me lmao. Funny how these ^^ niggas didn't even see ur
Two bars that you added, but decent personal jabs there. Close battle guys
But I'll have to give it to ink with a slight edge.
Allow me to retort, you cowards is just learnin the shit we been teachin
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 12:37pm
This a complete fuck up. Asked for 10 lines, than 12-20, drops 10, opponent drops more, reply with added lines. Deal should know better. Call out is where the rules are agreed to. Ink shouldn't have requested more, than complain about opponent dropping more.

All in all this should be a No Contest and start again with a new battle
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 1:44pm
^^^^^^^ Word Lucky battle is fucked.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 3:52pm
Originally posted by Flossaurus Flossaurus wrote:

Funny how these ^^ niggas didn't even see ur
Two bars that you added.



I saw them, thought i quoted them too to add feed, my bad ink
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 4:18pm
Originally posted by Lucky D Lucky D wrote:

This a complete fuck up. Asked for 10 lines, than 12-20, drops 10, opponent drops more, reply with added lines. Deal should know better. Call out is where the rules are agreed to. Ink shouldn't have requested more, than complain about opponent dropping more.

All in all this should be a No Contest and start again with a new battle


lol it doens't matter i dropped 10 HOURS before he dropped his he even acknowledged it he had more than 10, all he had do was drop a few lines.  of course im a add 4 more lines to make 14 vs 14 fuck u mean. Scotty32 told me to do that last time when supreme did it. its over, he lost there is no contest here, 14 vs 14.  3-0 lucky d go back to obscurity
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 4:19pm
i meant to say dropped 10lines ,..HOURS before him** 


check the posting times on the thread replies
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 4:20pm
what lucky said

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 4:26pm
this battle sucked...yo Dal you need to go back to the drawing board...and Ink you had a couple nice lines....but the rest was ehhh average....i'm not even going to do an official vote on this....Ink got this obviously ...... even stevie wonder can see that
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 February 2014 at 4:35pm
Locked cose it's retarded
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