Battles under Review: Dalinquent Vs INK |
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INK.
Banned Joined: 24 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 951 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-0-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 6:01am |
You're a cheater and went over the limit so i am not abiding to the rules niether
and its been proven i am not collin
expo Handle - can used for a username or dribbling. he has a shitty record of 22 losses 29 wins lol..whack! Honor roll/On a roll WP [DAL-ASS/Dallas] Supreme scripts cheated like he did dropped more than 10 lines after i dropped 10 #fact Bitched about traffic recycling only after traffic tore his ass up ahaha ladies n gents this is how u USE SELF HYPE =) Drops 14 after i did 10. ur bars whack & ur an Obscene Bitch. pullin that bitch shit's the only time D's Ever Pulled off a Supreme Script! Worry about ur self. Stay in Ur own lane. Ur such a Fagget Fam. See D'Toured up as he's stuck crying over the discrepencies in Traffics Jam! I'm adored by sluts, they swallow my kids & shoulder my luggage.Only time u'll see a bitch carrying a D Bag, is cleansing herself after fucking! I'm Honor roll 4-5 star per drop. Ur worthless than a dollar bitch. & No chick will want a D for full rides like they're competing for a scholarship! At boxing? ur not outta this world or 2 smooth at slumping cats. Only way D see's stars and Orion's belt, is when he became their punching bag! As Ikontinue joustin him off his high horse. This haters finished. with so many chinks in his armor! u'd swear there's a whole family of azns in it! with shots Ur no Savage when ur handles status is below Average 22 L's? Quit it fam cuz we can See Dallas like a shitty season for the Mavericks! |
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Traffik
Groupie Joined: 10 January 2014 Location: Miami, Florida Status: Offline Points: 269 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-5-0 Form: LLWWLL |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 6:05am |
Overall- a lot of played abused concepts seems lioke your rusty .. or rushed your verse ... vs I'm adored by sluts, they swallow my kids & shoulder my luggage. Either way this battle is landslide for INK ... |
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and Boosie he a target,
so me?I got my 40 when I'm shittin on the toilet, I'm paranoid ... -- Boosie |
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dalinquent
Superior Member Joined: 04 June 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 4687 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-23-1 Form: WLLLWL |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 6:10am |
U jus read my whole verse saying you ain't no what it meant and voted anyway wow...
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dalinquent
Superior Member Joined: 04 June 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 4687 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-23-1 Form: WLLLWL |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 6:14am |
I know u not colin, the whole punch is based on the fact that you benefit in battle from people dissing Colin and not you, and how u tried to spin me by even mentioning colin in the set up post... I.E. trying to 'colin' |
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dalinquent
Superior Member Joined: 04 June 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 4687 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-23-1 Form: WLLLWL |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 6:34am |
This bitch mad that I'm clowning his ass, I don't kno why, Bitch you opened the door
Ink. Faker than the lyrics he tailored to look like he aint wrote em before |
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INK.
Banned Joined: 24 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 951 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-0-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 6:38am |
u can stop cheating thanks
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Rapper T
Suspended Joined: 25 November 2013 Location: NZ Status: Offline Points: 1423 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 22-27-0 Form: LLLWLW |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 7:28am |
dalinquent
Some of the syntax or flow of your verse felt like it stumbled like 'I know all of rests' and some lines felt longer than they needed to be like ironically your stretched line. I liked your first bar best but would have liked to see more original punches. Squid ink, ink in a bag, stretched ink didn't hit him hard as punches. Some rhymes were good but the bars/stretched rhyme was a flop. Your structure was here n there but some multis were ok and the jpegs didn't connect well to your rap, this was a battle not a topical, they hampered your flow, INK. I liked 3rd and 6th bars of the 7 bar verse best. Your multis and rhymes flowed through all 7 bars and your structure was better. The closer felt separated by way of lines concept and the 2nd bar but the rest were at least moderately linked. Calling fgt in your raps is weak unless he's actually gay, play a nameflip instead or something cos making stuff up lessens the authenticity. Flow was good and some funny punches. Better overall personals too MVGT INK. |
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Rude
Groupie Joined: 03 February 2014 Status: Offline Points: 243 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-2-0 Form: LWWL |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 12:25pm |
Ink. wish I was falling fa that... But I dont play around
I get what you were going for here, it just didn't hit hard for me, this is the type of bar you use on someone who has a religious name. Overall - I seen a couple nice jabs in there but the rest was decent/could use some work. vs I'm adored by sluts, they swallow my kids & shoulder my luggage. I'm Honor roll 4-5 star per drop. Ur worthless than a dollar bitch.
decent personal here taking a shot at past losses, can never go wrong here as long as it's creative. As Ikontinue joustin him off his high horse. This haters finished with so many chinks in his armor! u'd swear there's a whole family of azns in it! Aha nice @ the Chinks in the Armor/Asians with shots Ur no Savage when ur handles status is below Average I see where you were going here the Dallas line was creative albeit slightly forced I don't want to call this a landslide or a catsweep but for ^ reasons stated above, this did appear to be one sided mvgt - Ink |
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Flossaurus
Standard Member Joined: 04 November 2013 Location: WithYourMother Status: Offline Points: 1222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 22-9-0 Form: LWWWWW |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 12:37pm |
This
"Parkour" Vs. This "D bag, chinks" A lot of wording felt off on dals verse, sounded choppy. Had some great Ideas for punches but this verse seemed rushed, personals were there tho. Ink had some cool shit, the bars were either hit or miss here but shit that D bag line had me lmao. Funny how these ^^ niggas didn't even see ur Two bars that you added, but decent personal jabs there. Close battle guys But I'll have to give it to ink with a slight edge. |
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Allow me to retort, you cowards is just learnin the shit we been teachin
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Lucky D
Standard Member Joined: 17 November 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1528 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 17-21-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 12:37pm |
This a complete fuck up. Asked for 10 lines, than 12-20, drops 10, opponent drops more, reply with added lines. Deal should know better. Call out is where the rules are agreed to. Ink shouldn't have requested more, than complain about opponent dropping more.
All in all this should be a No Contest and start again with a new battle |
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 1:44pm |
^^^^^^^ Word Lucky battle is fucked.
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Rude
Groupie Joined: 03 February 2014 Status: Offline Points: 243 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-2-0 Form: LWWL |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 3:52pm |
I saw them, thought i quoted them too to add feed, my bad ink |
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INK.
Banned Joined: 24 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 951 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-0-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 4:18pm |
lol it doens't matter i dropped 10 HOURS before he dropped his he even acknowledged it he had more than 10, all he had do was drop a few lines. of course im a add 4 more lines to make 14 vs 14 fuck u mean. Scotty32 told me to do that last time when supreme did it. its over, he lost there is no contest here, 14 vs 14. 3-0 lucky d go back to obscurity
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INK.
Banned Joined: 24 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 951 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-0-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 4:19pm |
i meant to say dropped 10lines ,..HOURS before him**
check the posting times on the thread replies
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Exoduzt
Superior Member NaCl Joined: 08 April 2006 Location: Long Island Status: Offline Points: 5331 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 41-7-5 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 4:20pm |
what lucky said
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SupreemScriptz
Groupie Joined: 22 January 2014 Status: Offline Points: 56 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-3-0 Form: LLL |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 4:26pm |
this battle sucked...yo Dal you need to go back to the drawing board...and Ink you had a couple nice lines....but the rest was ehhh average....i'm not even going to do an official vote on this....Ink got this obviously ...... even stevie wonder can see that
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 05 February 2014 at 4:35pm |
Locked cose it's retarded
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