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D-NoS
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Posted: 09 October 2017 at 8:16pm |
Smoke some draw already had four gimmie that joy(oint) always want more everyday after work play go score smoke till i collapse and laying ona floor I smoke weed! ..used to eat pills and speed now I just burn trees.. Light em up! ..like its christmas time Now I'm High as a kite can be.. When Im on mic when I emcee dj mix and we get livey hype the crowd and they cheer we fire in the air and smoke on the brezze Danger! Nitro Oxide Sound Set the roof on fire ..burn this fucker down! Major! Noise all around turn-up the volume drive around town! already ready could blow anytime now This ones heavy and its going out loud I was born ready and im still ready now never lost so never had to be found when I emcee, emcee bare quick emcee make other emcee's quit take time and write better lyrics and remember practice makes perfect chorus.. I am here to blaze-up the party stand-by the bass bin smoke some tree names dicey and I like the weed sharing is caring now pass to me! D to the I to the C to the Eeee AKA sounD(Dnos)EMCEE Dont want war blud dats not me but if ya bring it I will end emcee! Easily Dicey will out spit'em been doing it since he was a lil'un sharp as a knife accurate marksman one bullet one kill I leave laughin.. Rhyming it aint hard an you can easily get better in-time man for the time being tho just listen as I tell you my master plan spit faster go harder and get deeper and darker and rip it up like im having a tantrum and dont stop for anyone stop dicking around and win take what I want from life and grin anyone test geta kick in the shin I might be a joker but Im not joking I smoked a bong for far to long but then again that got me singing this song there's alot in the world thats wrong but tonight feels alright so im singing along wanna make money wanna make some wong wanna go gym wanna and put weight on wanna record a tune with that girl on wanna go home wanna hit my bong(o drums innit...) chorus (agen).. I am here to blaze-up the party stand-by the bass bin smoke some tree names dicey and I like the weed sharing is caring now pass to me! D to the I to the C to the Eeee AKA sounD(Dnos)EMCEE Dont want war blud dats not me but if ya bring it I will end emcee! I am A double D I C T E D to the B A double S L I N E Im on fire G Bassline Energy Rocking to the bassline is ecstasy I am A double D I C T E D to the B A double S L I N E Im on fire G Bassline Rocking to the bassline is ecstasy Wanna see you J 2 tha U M P the H to the A to the R D to the C to the O to the R E with a B ana E ana A T ana wanna see you S T O M P both your F double E T to this G R I M E B to the E to the A to the T A to the B to the C D to the E to the F to the G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z 1 2 3 on the M I C Blazing it up like a bag of weed Burning bare tunes on the 1's and 2's Dj whatever and Dicey Emcee |
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iLL ScriptureZ
Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
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I gotta be honest... this is not that good. Check out some artists on here to kind of learn from. You need a bit of everything. Keep trucking though. A lot of writers started where you are.
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spume corrupt
Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3162 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL |
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Sup brother D?
I see you on some comeback shizz, I know you blow thru a couple times a year and you been doing that a long time... Plus I know you love to scribble...But seriously I gotta co sign on what the main man scripts is saying to you... This is mediocre fam! You all basic in this spot.......STILL BASIC, and you ain't got no excuses anymore.... We don't wanna see an old face on some basic STEEZE Honestly it irks me that you would put this in our faces There is next level shit to read and be inspired by up in here and it ain't hard to find... Don't run away from this feedback Rise to the challenge and show us that you do have what it takes Elevate overnight and show us something dope motherfucker Please |
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The Law
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Damn bro.. This is amazing:
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D-NoS
Groupie Joined: 10 October 2014 Location: UK-Wales Status: Offline Points: 207 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-6-0 Form: LLLLLL |
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Thanks for the feed guys, appreciated. You better check yourself Im bad for your health, I Get dark Like a Ninja when I go Stealth, My Names not Dan but I got a black belt, I Come like a hurricane You better watch out, Better zip that up Better shut your mouth, of you.... I dont like the sound so shut your face and hold it down and gimmie that microphone back now yo.. this is straight from the heart, you aint nothing but a major fart, you aint creative you aint making art, you think your good but I know ya nooOOTTT I got Ice in my name but my name is HOT you aint got what it takes your fake so stop pressing buttons you dont want to go off walk away live another day pray and give thanks to God Edited by D-NoS - 10 October 2017 at 10:56pm |
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spume corrupt
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First up that's cool you appreciate the feedback
Even better is the fact you went away and made improvements This was def better my man, but I know you can take it up another level Keep on homie |
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