Open Mic: Danger! Nitros Oxide Sound (2)

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    Posted: 09 October 2017 at 8:16pm
Smoke some draw already had four
gimmie that joy(oint) always want more
everyday after work play go score 
smoke till i collapse and laying ona floor

I smoke weed! ..used to eat pills and speed
now I just burn trees..  
Light em up! ..like its christmas time 
Now I'm High as a kite can be..

When Im on mic when I emcee 
dj mix and we get livey
hype the crowd and they cheer we
fire in the air and smoke on the brezze 

Danger! Nitro Oxide Sound
Set the roof on fire ..burn this fucker down! 
Major! Noise all around
turn-up the volume drive around town!

already ready could blow anytime now
This ones heavy and its going out loud
I was born ready and im still ready now
never lost so never had to be found

when I emcee, emcee bare quick
emcee make other emcee's quit
take time and write better lyrics
and remember practice makes perfect


chorus..

I am here to blaze-up the party
stand-by the bass bin smoke some tree
names dicey and I like the weed
sharing is caring now pass to me!

D to the I to the C to the Eeee
AKA sounD(Dnos)EMCEE
Dont want war blud dats not me
but if ya bring it I will end emcee!


Easily Dicey will out spit'em
been doing it since he was a lil'un
sharp as a knife accurate marksman
one bullet one kill I leave laughin..

Rhyming it aint hard an you can
easily get better in-time man
for the time being tho just listen
as I tell you my master plan

spit faster go harder and
get deeper and darker and
rip it up like im having a tantrum
and dont stop for anyone

stop dicking around and win
take what I want from life and grin
anyone test geta kick in the shin
I might be a joker but Im not joking

I smoked a bong for far to long
but then again that got me singing this song
there's alot in the world thats wrong 
but tonight feels alright so im singing along

wanna make money wanna make some wong
wanna go gym wanna and put weight on
wanna record a tune with that girl on
wanna go home wanna hit my bong(o drums innit...)


chorus (agen)..

I am here to blaze-up the party
stand-by the bass bin smoke some tree
names dicey and I like the weed
sharing is caring now pass to me!

D to the I to the C to the Eeee
AKA sounD(Dnos)EMCEE
Dont want war blud dats not me
but if ya bring it I will end emcee!


I am A double D I C T E D
to the B A double S L I N E
Im on fire G Bassline Energy
Rocking to the bassline is ecstasy

I am A double D I C T E D
to the B A double S L I N E
Im on fire G Bassline
Rocking to the bassline is ecstasy

Wanna see you J 2 tha U M P
the H to the A to the R D
to the C to the O to the R E
with a B ana E ana A T

ana wanna see you S T O M P
both your F double E T
to this G R I M E
B to the E to the A to the T

A to the B to the C 
D to the E to the F to the G 
H I J K L M N O P
Q R S T U V W X Y Z

1 2 3 on the M I C
Blazing it up like a bag of weed
Burning bare tunes on the 1's and 2's
Dj whatever and Dicey Emcee
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote iLL ScriptureZ Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 October 2017 at 8:26pm
I gotta be honest... this is not that good. Check out some artists on here to kind of learn from. You need a bit of everything. Keep trucking though. A lot of writers started where you are. 
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Sup brother D?
I see you on some comeback shizz, I know you blow thru a couple times a year and you been doing that a long time...
Plus I know you love to scribble...But seriously I gotta co sign on what the main man scripts is saying to you...
This is mediocre fam!
You all basic in this spot.......STILL BASIC, and you ain't got no excuses anymore....
We don't wanna see an old face on some basic STEEZE
Honestly it irks me that you would put this in our faces
There is next level shit to read and be inspired by up in here and it ain't hard to find...

Don't run away from this feedback
Rise to the challenge and show us that you do have what it takes
Elevate overnight and show us something dope motherfucker
Please

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Damn bro.. This is amazing: 


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Thanks for the feed guys, appreciated. 

You better check yourself Im bad for your health,
I Get dark Like a Ninja when I go Stealth,
My Names not Dan but I got a black belt, 
I Come like a hurricane You better watch out,

Better zip that up Better shut your mouth, 
of you.... I dont like the sound 
so shut your face and hold it down
and gimmie that microphone back now

yo.. this is straight from the heart,
you aint nothing but a major fart,
you aint creative you aint making art,
you think your good but I know ya nooOOTTT

I got Ice in my name but my name is HOT
you aint got what it takes your fake so stop
pressing buttons you dont want to go off
walk away live another day pray and give thanks to God


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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote spume corrupt Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 October 2017 at 11:10pm
First up that's cool you appreciate the feedback
Even better is the fact you went away and made improvements
This was def better my man, but I know you can take it up another level
Keep on homie

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