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    Posted: 21 July 2017 at 10:10am

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Cest la vie mon ami whispered by the god of war
Ya'll soft, I'm hard - more hood jargon goes too far
So its civilized speech underneath a golden star
Savages led by Joan of Arc versus a prisoner holding bars
Now that's a metaphor but you're not that smart
A bunch of raiders lost at Ark, duck the blow your coffins marked
I run the show with my heart racing, I'm mad stark raving
A topical is what you think I'm only capable of making
Its a stain on my mural, word placement I'm replacing
So my vengeance be amazing cuz his legacy ya'll disgracing
This juggernaut'll crush you, bum rush touch you
Your fans and yo pompoms got you in trouble
Now you caught in a bubble that'll pop when I shuffle
The hand of God or a muscle, bitch I'm a thug you a muggle
Your bar consistency is to be laughed at, that's all facts
Comes close to "attraction scars" but honestly... I'm passed that
So I.... Sit back and observe these verses
Triggered by the one that's written in cursive
Like he's certainly nervous but serving his purpose
I commend your bravery as you're swerving the circus
Cuz drama on LA is like a movie, everyone lost they mind
I'm just sitting here chilling, Netflix and Popcorn time

Easy...



CHAIN

Hardly do I socialize, heart is like a cold July
Charged up but calm 'cause my bars are like a volt supply.
Water is the flow and it's arson once I vocalize...
My thoughts, like a horde, of Spartans who'd revolt or die.
Armageddon multiplied by dinosaur extinction
Higher forms of wisdom harking back to older times.
Time! 'cause they're scared to carbon date my holy shrine
Heard they found traces of my RNA in Odin's mind ...(what?)

Karl Kani Pullover fly, trill talk codified
Who but The Fonz would rhyme that with 'Poland, Prague' ? ...
Nah...
Nouns strung together like a bag of bolo ties
Doper than the coke arriving all the way from Bogotá
Wise..
Avoiding bad energy, its karma is a slow demise
It will creep up on you like a gas that's not odorized
Boom...
Shit is like lava versus rows of rye...bye
It's a french kiss good night...I'm saying 'au revoir'
 
To trolling guys emboldened by the O.K sign...
Pepe The Frog memes and Hentai Pokèmon
Everyday gradually settling for lower highs
...deeper than El Chapo's Sinaloan ties
Notify Nobel Prize committees, I'm the O.M's Nas
Who but the Fonz would rhyme that with 'Notre Dame' ?
Bonus round for wanna-be Balboas
That wanna box Flloyd but couldn't drop the Broner guy...sigh
Me, I could flow to atonal moans and cries
Without rape references and weird homo vibes
Not a bonafied faux polarizing talking point spitter
I'm chilling, passing Sick Witted's ghost the lah  
...Nigga...
Stationed in Afghanistan, he wrote his lines
Tropes described the flavor...he'd post replies
Fought the real battles while your vote belied...
The hopes of the folks who really know Jihad

Close your eyes, picture him holding loaded 9's
He was what you claim to be without a broken spine
So would you please hop off his ponderosa pine
Don't dick ride...

Been an architect since the art of rap was so N.Y
...easy, we talkin' bout practice...no A.I

 
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EDEASY

Quote Cest la vie mon ami whispered by the god of war
Ya'll soft, I'm hard - more hood jargon goes too far


The French is a nice touch. The "pause" moment is kind of funny.

Quote So its civilized speech underneath a golden star
Savages led by Joan of Arc versus a prisoner holding bars
Now that's a metaphor but you're not that smart
A bunch of raiders lost at Ark, duck the blow your coffins marked
I run the show with my heart racing, I'm mad stark raving
A topical is what you think I'm only capable of making
Its a stain on my mural, word placement I'm replacing
So my vengeance be amazing cuz his legacy ya'll disgracing
This juggernaut'll crush you, bum rush touch you
Your fans and yo pompoms got you in trouble


"Slow down Gandi ya killin em"! You talkin that talk that I like to hear, E. it's not often you get on your grizzly and start pulling that mean shit out of ya bag. But today, well today, I guess you had time to drop a bomb. Dope content, sick placement, smart and aggressive writing. You got my attention.

Quote Now you caught in a bubble that'll pop when I shuffle
The hand of God or a muscle, bitch I'm a thug you a muggle
Your bar consistency is to be laughed at, that's all facts
Comes close to "attraction scars" but honestly... I'm passed that
So I.... Sit back and observe these verses
Triggered by the one that's written in cursive
Like he's certainly nervous but serving his purpose
I commend your bravery as you're swerving the circus
Cuz drama on LA is like a movie, everyone lost they mind
I'm just sitting here chilling, Netflix and Popcorn time

Easy...


And at the moment the movie is getting good. This was a dope verse my boy. It had a little bit of everything for every one. But what was most impressive about it was the self-invented lingo that you employed. The way you word and phrase things adds life and personality to each line. Good to see you dropping again. We gotta collab ... one of these days, Prophet. The Watcher's still watching. lol.



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Quote Hardly do I socialize, heart is like a cold July


Dope!


Quote Charged up but calm 'cause my bars are like a volt supply.
Water is the flow and it's arson once I vocalize...
My thoughts, like a horde, of Spartans who'd revolt or die.
Armageddon multiplied by dinosaur extinction
Higher forms of wisdom harking back to older times.
Time! 'cause they're scared to carbon date my holy shrine
Heard they found traces of my RNA in Odin's mind ...(what?)


Lmao...that shit was tuff as fuck dude. Definitely my type of bars. You got your signature flow mixed in with wild concepts of mythological proportion. All of which delivered as a hard hitting punch. Those last two lines are insane.

Quote Karl Kani Pullover fly, trill talk codified
Who but The Fonz would rhyme that with 'Poland, Prague' ? ...
Nah...
Nouns strung together like a bag of bolo ties
Doper than the coke arriving all the way from Bogotá
Wise..
Avoiding bad energy, its karma is a slow demise
It will creep up on you like a gas that's not odorized
Boom...
Shit is like lava versus rows of rye...bye
It's a french kiss good night...I'm saying 'au revoir'


I see you dudes got the French Connection going on. I dig that. Adds more culture to 'The Culture', feel me? Anyway, I like the 90's fashion & classic TV nostalgia, cocain references, and the overall cleverness of the lines quoted.
 
Quote To trolling guys emboldened by the O.K sign...
Pepe The Frog memes and Hentai Pokèmon
Everyday gradually settling for lower highs
...deeper than El Chapo's Sinaloan ties
Notify Nobel Prize committees, I'm the O.M's Nas
Who but the Fonz would rhyme that with 'Notre Dame' ?
Bonus round for wanna-be Balboas
That wanna box Flloyd but couldn't drop the Broner guy...sigh
Me, I could flow to atonal moans and cries
Without rape references and weird homo vibes
Not a bonafied faux polarizing talking point spitter
I'm chilling, passing Sick Witted's ghost the lah  
...Nigga...
Stationed in Afghanistan, he wrote his lines
Tropes described the flavor...he'd post replies
Fought the real battles while your vote belied...
The hopes of the folks who really know Jihad

Close your eyes, picture him holding loaded 9's
He was what you claim to be without a broken spine
So would you please hop off his ponderosa pine
Don't dick ride...

Been an architect since the art of rap was so N.Y
...easy, we talkin' bout practice...no A.I.


Lol Ahhh shit. That last line was heat. I got a similar one.

"I'm the Answer to your wackness ... jammin rappers in the basket
I.vs.sons without no "practice", leave 'em dumped inside a trash bin"


Obviously that's just a warm up but you get the point.

Anyway, your whole verse was dope. You got that mean East Coast lingo with the intelligence of an Underground emcee and crazy mechanics to really take your verses (including this one) to the next level. Dope shit! Salute.






Edited by SELF ACTIVATE - 21 July 2017 at 9:39pm
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This is dope all round, lot of venom from the two of you, and you both complimented each other well. On the real it's good to see Chain clap back, he's been my boy for time and I can count the number of times he's dropped bars on someone on a amputees hand. Did it in your own style too, that shits dope.

Salute the both of you, salute the big homie Sick too.
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Lmao @ attraction scars. You troll. I liked your verse bro but I couldn't tell if it was generic or getting at someone specific, maybe I missed something, sure I'll get a Skype/WhatsApp complaining LOL (oh sorry I mean explaining)

Chain, real nice drop man...the arson line I was like, that's just vile, just everything about it. Expert boss level. Your references throughout are amazing, like you go from talking Dinosaurs to Odin to El Chapo to Mayweather to that whole segment about Sick which was just real great writing. 

Do this again sometime
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Thanks my brethren.
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