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Dougysnuggy
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Topic: Dougy vs crusade Posted: 22 September 2013 at 2:25pm |
Topical... 30-50 lines. Topic: Surviving in the wild
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Crusade
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Posted: 22 September 2013 at 5:09pm |
Check. I'll be dropping my verse later on since I cant do so right now due to real life.
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Crusade
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Posted: 24 September 2013 at 5:08am |
Most poets have demised upon the fields of war whereas I was conceived in the midst of a battle Causing the demise of plenty, in order to pursue a painful life, slashing the throat of a cattle
Most scatter around in fear, upon a hiss of a snake's rattle Whereas I react in a state of scrutiny, slaying the lively string before the collapse of its own shadow
A muscular man, I am not, but I provide one characteristic that reigns might: intelligence Fueled by the same memory of my childhood: fright and negligence
Stalking a prey to pleasure a roar of the stomach Eyeing the czar of the creature's pack, planning a genocide among its republic
Bashing towards the country of mammals with a machete, springing as I land a pierce towards a bear The cubs view me with such fear, but I am hungry, why should I care
The maternal Ursidae attempts a scratch, I swiftly dodge, stab her with such anger and flare A coyote attempts to assist me, but I slay him anyhow, since there is one action I despise more than lying: to share
Eyes are glowing lava red, a human attempts to shoot me down for such action, how does he dare To interject in a course of a hunt I have caused?! I stop, and view him with such a sharp glare
Rush towards the vehicle, chew up the engine, extort it harshly towards the goon That same idiot now seemingly aweing my presence with such fear, now deeming a buffoon
Achieving a mental epiphany of how he has lied to his family when he has told them "Im coming soon" Now watching his life flash before his eyes, realizing there is no return from this doom
I hate to do this to the poor soul, but my stomach cries, I need to murder for survival Ignore any commandment layed upon the church, Put the morality aside, and throw away the Bible
Rise up my loyal machete and stab him through his heart As he collapses, I devour what is left instead of viewing this action as a scar
Collect two stones, gather a pile of wood, and ignite such a blaze Towards the flare's beauty, I gaze
Viewing the everlasting growth and illustrate its trace I stab a stick towards a skull, and cook a cub's face
Savoring the oh-so grandiose taste My stomach, now quieting, upon the devouring of the cub, digesting with such grace
After devouring upon a mighty great meal, a good day's work is now complete As I lay down my loyal machete, blanket myself with dirt and stone, as I fall asleep
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Crusade
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Posted: 26 September 2013 at 5:05am |
Uppin for Dougy
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Dougysnuggy
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Posted: 26 September 2013 at 5:51am |
I saw it... I've been busy.
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Crusade
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Posted: 29 September 2013 at 10:22pm |
Uppin
Are you going to drop it or not? Its been 6 days since I posted my verse.
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Dougysnuggy
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Posted: 30 September 2013 at 12:29am |
I still have time.
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Crusade
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Posted: 30 September 2013 at 1:00am |
Come on, man. If it is taking you this long to drop a verse, why did you make it 30+ lines to begin with? As long as you drop a verse within a couple of weeks (and people vote), I wont have a problem.
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hanGing
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Posted: 17 October 2013 at 11:28pm |
NML.
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"Sicker Than Thou"
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hanGing
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Posted: 23 October 2013 at 9:23pm |
N Given.
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"Sicker Than Thou"
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