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    Posted: 22 September 2013 at 2:25pm
Topical... 30-50 lines. Topic: Surviving in the wild
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 September 2013 at 5:09pm
Check. I'll be dropping my verse later on since I cant do so right now due to real life.
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Most poets have demised upon the fields of war whereas I was conceived in the midst of a battle
Causing the demise of plenty, in order to pursue a painful life, slashing the throat of a cattle

Most scatter around in fear, upon a hiss of a snake's rattle
Whereas I react in a state of scrutiny, slaying the lively string before the collapse of its own shadow

A muscular man, I am not, but I provide one characteristic that reigns might: intelligence
Fueled by the same memory of my childhood: fright and negligence

Stalking a prey to pleasure a roar of the stomach
Eyeing the czar of the creature's pack, planning a genocide among its republic

Bashing towards the country of mammals with a machete, springing as I land a pierce towards a bear
The cubs view me with such fear, but I am hungry, why should I care

The maternal Ursidae attempts a scratch, I swiftly dodge, stab her with such anger and flare
A coyote attempts to assist me, but I slay him anyhow, since there is one action I despise more than lying: to share

Eyes are glowing lava red, a human attempts to shoot me down for such action, how does he dare
To interject in a course of a hunt I have caused?! I stop, and view him with such a sharp glare

Rush towards the vehicle, chew up the engine, extort it harshly towards the goon
That same idiot now seemingly aweing my presence with such fear, now deeming a buffoon

Achieving a mental epiphany of how he has lied to his family when he has told them "Im coming soon"
Now watching his life flash before his eyes, realizing there is no return from this doom

I hate to do this to the poor soul, but my stomach cries, I need to murder for survival
Ignore any commandment layed upon the church, Put the morality aside, and throw away the Bible

Rise up my loyal machete and stab him through his heart
As he collapses, I devour what is left instead of viewing this action as a scar

Collect two stones, gather a pile of wood, and ignite such a blaze
Towards the flare's beauty, I gaze

Viewing the everlasting growth and illustrate its trace
I stab a stick towards a skull, and cook a cub's face

Savoring the oh-so grandiose taste
My stomach, now quieting, upon the devouring of the cub, digesting with such grace

After devouring upon a mighty great meal, a good day's work is now complete
As I lay down my loyal machete, blanket myself with dirt and stone, as I fall asleep





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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 September 2013 at 5:05am
Uppin for Dougy
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 September 2013 at 5:51am
I saw it... I've been busy.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 September 2013 at 10:22pm
Uppin

Are you going to drop it or not? Its been 6 days since I posted my verse.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 September 2013 at 12:29am
I still have time. 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 September 2013 at 1:00am
Come on, man. If it is taking you this long to drop a verse, why did you make it 30+ lines to begin with? As long as you drop a verse within a couple of weeks (and people vote), I wont have a problem.
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