Open Mic: DRUNKEN MASTER FLOW ft. iLL

SELF
Bruh just stop it you ain't poppin and I bet you never will be
You gunnin for a thrill G? Well bitch you betta kill me!
Fa rillz B I'm guilty of writing violent text, got Lex Lugar flow
I'm exciting wit the flex! You got 90 seconds left ...
To Loki retreat like a Viking on a quest
Or I'm lighting up your chest wit Hela ammo from an exploding tech!
Yes I know that was a stretch ...Okay I'll focus and reset
Now I'm going over heads like a Boeing private jet
I should prolly slow it down instead I'm going to eject
As I parachute below and watch you blow up in the wreck
Cos I totally reject both diplomacy and threats
From you anecdotal jokes who write poetry that's less
Intellectually progressive than potatoes having sex
I'm like Plato playing chess cos I'm several steps ahead
Got them dracos for the FEDS ... turn Django kickin ass
Wit those cannons in my hands, I can kill a man so fast
He can't even stand a chance; Yo I wrote this with respect
For the culture, not a check! Bro I do it for the love
So there's nothing to regret! Take a moment and reflect
Fuck them devils cos I'm blessed and I'll never sell my soul
For a Lambo or begets cos I'd rather be in debt
With the plug or IRS than have sum microwave success
At a major record label that is owned by punk execs
Tryna put you in a dress and turn you pussy wit no breasts
Til you look like Uzi Vert when you was DMX!
Man these niggas wearing skirts! Birkin Bags and purple murse
What the fuck is wrong wit Rap? It can't even get no worse!
Too much Percocet and Syrup got these junkies slurring words
"Man this shit is for the birds", so these turkeys gettin served
Like a burger after work; here's a drunken master verse ...
I mean a fuckin massacre in the name of Wutang ...
I'll put you bastards in the dirt!

iLL
The sermons been activated, leave vermins decapitated
Been determined I've captivated any wordsmiths rappin' tasteless..
A graphic demonstration, verses graphed, words can act amazin'
Burner blast workin' fast with thermic activators
Bring it to term, this crafts my baby I'll turn & smash the greatest
These jerks purpose lack creatives, the touch of iLL
Has a person back to basics addicted to the feelin' like virgin masterbators
Me? This is a version backed with cadence in turn I drafted Satan
To give you shell on top of shell like hermit crab relations
Learning that the placement of Scriptz is legend etched in stone
Like sketches expressed in Rome suggestin' I end the throne
Sever domes when I read the notes from veterans blessin' flows
No heart beat each second tick is my embedded metronome
Handmade booths get destroyed my presence creates decrepit homes
Death is known, the tone is set when enterin' my Tekken mode
Ya heads'll roll like Tibetan scrolls & Buddhist arts
Ya'll venom holds the same treason eatin' Brutus heart
Or Judas, stupid broads pushin' up in a Lulu bra
Showin' love when the music false usin' all of cupids darts
Starvin' for attention armed with intentions of Netwons law
A shootin' star? Nah.. Just a human who can make fluid hard
Rabie filled mouth chewin' bars that'll leave a future scarred
You a beast? I'm an animal too I don't mean that foolish arc

^Lmao

Only Dizz. Appreciate that creative feed my dude. IRTF shortly.

Lol... thanks everyone for the feed...

 Self:   When I first saw you come to this site and read ya shit I admit I didn't give you the benefit of the doubt.   but that was on me.  I thought the way you presented your rhymes was basic... but holy fucking hell was I wrong and got schooled real quick.   I wish I could do what you do.  The scheme you use to push your wordplay is fucking crazy.  There is nothing standout that jumps off the page in the beginning.  But then you re read it.  and read it in a different tone.  then realize...Well I;m the asshole.      Now I'm going over heads like a Boeing private jet
I should prolly slow it down instead I'm going to eject 
As I parachute below and watch you blow up in the wreck"----This is my type of shit rite here...flow was killer smooth and dope shit all around...lmao @ the potatoes having sex. you followed it up with Plato playing chess.  Smooth shit right there.  I liked that.  

Whoa let's get into this..


SELF
Bruh just stop it you ain't poppin and I bet you never will be
You gunnin for a thrill G? Well bitch you betta kill me!
Fa rillz B I'm guilty of writing violent text, got Lex Lugar flow
I'm exciting wit the flex! You got 90 seconds left ...
To Loki retreat like a Viking on a quest
Or I'm lighting up your chest wit Hela ammo from an exploding tech!
Yes I know that was a stretch ...Okay I'll focus and reset
Now I'm going over heads like a Boeing private jet
I should prolly slow it down instead I'm going to eject
As I parachute below and watch you blow up in the wreck

(i like the similes in this section here,and your rhyme scheme was solid too,inners
and end rhymes which you excuteded real well,it read very natural and unforced,
and the reference to the father and daughter and Lex Luger was nicely played as
well,the contents were vibrant and had the feel of a warning shot be sounded,and
talking of sound,the vowels within were crisp and cohesive which shows range and
scope in vocab for me,if you don't have an extensive vocab the pool of choice words
will dry up quicker than a puddle in a scorched desert,plus it had some sprite entow
and the feel of a hype piece also,solid start..)

Cos I totally reject both diplomacy and threats
From you anecdotal jokes who write poetry that's less
Intellectually progressive than potatoes having sex
I'm like Plato playing chess cos I'm several steps ahead
Got them dracos for the FEDS ... turn Django kickin ass
Wit those cannons in my hands, I can kill a man so fast
He can't even stand a chance; Yo I wrote this with respect
For the culture, not a check! Bro I do it for the love
So there's nothing to regret! Take a moment and reflect
Fuck them devils cos I'm blessed and I'll never sell my soul
For a Lambo or begets cos I'd rather be in debt

(damn i had to break it there as your rhyme scheme was like a car on overdrive and
with no brakes,there some really nice in your face material here,which was backed up
by some clever and subtle wording/metaphors,this segment had a strong tone/vibe
running through it,it read like you really had something to say,as it read pacey almost
like quick fire rhyming,it had a direct feel that felt aimed as well as controlled,again
another ripe segment,which i'm enjoying..)

With the plug or IRS than have sum microwave success
At a major record label that is owned by punk execs
Tryna put you in a dress and turn you pussy wit no breasts
Til you look like Uzi Vert when you was DMX!
Man these niggas wearing skirts! Birkin Bags and purple murse
What the fuck is wrong wit Rap? It can't even get no worse!
Too much Percocet and Syrup got these junkies slurring words
"Man this shit is for the birds", so these turkeys gettin served
Like a burger after work; here's a drunken master verse ...
I mean a fuckin massacre in the name of Wutang ...
I'll put you bastards in the dirt!

(yeah this segment highlights what's wrong with Hip Hop at this time,so called artist
trying to sell a gimmick before music,which is why i listen to the underground rather
than the mainstream,but then the subterranean artist are trying to do the same shit it
seems at times,again this was Slick with the similes and wording and it read cruel &
meaningful also,you give the industry a backhand for acting like a bitch,this has been
a real pleasurable read from begin to the end,ripe work Amigo,real ripe..)

iLL
The sermons been activated, leave vermins decapitated
Been determined I've captivated any wordsmiths rappin' tasteless..
A graphic demonstration, verses graphed, words can act amazin'
Burner blast workin' fast with thermic activators
Bring it to term, this crafts my baby I'll turn & smash the greatest
These jerks purpose lack creatives, the touch of iLL

(wow bro you show your skill with the multi syllables which read effortlessly,you dude
certainly have a knack of doing this without forcing them too,they blended in real nicely
and subtle also,and because of this some ppl when leaving feed will miss them or not
notice,and using the same word but in different context, was really quite creative here
(Activate),plus it feels like a natural progression from SELF'S via this course,the solid
mechanics also boosted this segment too,your wording was crisp and clean which
just gave this section an extra level for me,solid an lively is what i'm reading here,and
like i said recently with feedback,i would love to read you and SELF in a collab as the
transition would be ripe,and to give myself a boost,i was right with that comment also,
..lol,ripe start..)

Has a person back to basics addicted to the feelin' like virgin masterbators
Me? This is a version backed with cadence in turn I drafted Satan
To give you shell on top of shell like hermit crab relations
Learning that the placement of Scriptz is legend etched in stone
Like sketches expressed in Rome suggestin' I end the throne
Sever domes when I read the notes from veterans blessin' flows
No heart beat each second tick is my embedded metronome
Handmade booths get destroyed my presence creates decrepit homes
Death is known, the tone is set when enterin' my Tekken mode
Ya heads'll roll like Tibetan scrolls & Buddhist arts

(lol..that crab simile was insanely fresh as too was the vigin/mastabator,highly creative
i feel as well as believe,again the wow factor is evident in this segment too,it seemed
to come off as a warning to those who think of stepping to your direction,to be honest
there is nothing i don't like in your verse as of yet,your word choices/vocab was just
ripe and forceful but also fluid,the undertone in this segment was just meanicing and
broody,but deliberate..plain and simple, dope..)

Ya'll venom holds the same treason eatin' Brutus heart
Or Judas, stupid broads pushin' up in a Lulu bra
Showin' love when the music false usin' all of cupids darts
Starvin' for attention armed with intentions of Netwons law
A shootin' star? Nah.. Just a human who can make fluid hard
Rabie filled mouth chewin' bars that'll leave a future scarred
You a beast? I'm an animal too I don't mean that foolish arc

(this segment has a poetic vibe entow,coupled with the aggressive nature of your
contents that just lifted it up an out at a reader,good work,your metaphors had a
stealthy but intent vibe popping off along side also,it has a certain element of history
attatched,via innovators and myth which added more substance to the overall
verse,again as with SELF a highly pleasing read..)


Well guys you both nailed this collab with your offerings here,truly a solid read from
both,content/subject matter/creativity all present and popping,a collab i was happy
with before i even read a single word,as your aliases are like a stamp of or a seal of
quality for those that know them,thanks for the real enjoyable read guys..peace.

Wow

Thanks for all the reads, feed, and breakdowns family. It's highly appreciated. I'm glad you guys (and gal) was feeling this joint. It was a fun piece to write. Also, I am in fact the spirit animal of Neek. That is all. Thank for the love. Peace.

self - ur like the scorpion character from 5 deadly venoms. he's known for his kicks in rhythmic succession. this verse was lyrically outstanding. it teases u with a couple of feigning kicks then once ur hypnotize by the pattern it hits u with a round house. Ya'll venom holds the same treason eatin' Brutus heart
Or Judas, stupid broads pushin' up in a Lulu bra "

Potatoes having sex self lol you started out in a weird way the vikings references didn't look nice till I read further and caught it this was stupid the flow was butter and the angles you brought to the table was pure mathematics g

Addicted to the feeling like virgin masturbators ill sup difficult scheme there bit you pulled it off and the way you set your transitions in such a tight verse was crafty the hermit crab line was dumb as tuck

Yooo yol crazy

Word. I truly appreciate you guys taking the time to read and feed this joint. Much love and respect.