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DressToKill
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Posted: 26 September 2017 at 1:59am |
https://soundcloud.com/user-206308494/dtk-god-sent Opinions always valued, switched the flow up quite a bit in this one.
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daydizzle89
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Lets get it,
Flow is dope. Your scheme worked well with this beat. The assonance is nice as fuck. One thing you have is that vocabulary game. Second verse, that opening few bars was dope as fuck. The pause between bars and the beat is void was really nice in the second verse. you kept composure and it was definitely a good track. you are progressing with each track. You are sounding more natural and that proper Canadian english thing sometimes hurts canadians. Im just saying, its like you are figuring out how to flow with it better. Anyways. Props because this was dope. |
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DressToKill
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Thanks Dizzy appreciate it
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spume corrupt
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Super productive at the moment and you just keep getting stronger fam
Most enjoyable one so far, really thought your bar game shined through here, the writing was dope Plus you definitely held up the flow well and showed out on some massive elevation with that delivery Loved the switch up on pace Keep on brother |
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DressToKill
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Thanks Spume my brother, much appreciated as always
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Crimson Juice
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Damn that beat was raw,and your rhyming was ripe too,you had my head nodding
for real,a girl sitting opposite me on the train is looking at me all strange now..lol, in some way that beat reminded me of Stoupe (JMT),simple but effective on the ear,and i agree with Dizzle the multi's/assonace was solid,you stayed on beat like a cop on overtime,plus your breath control was strong here which was impressive, the vocab came off as forceful with meaning too,and your pitch/tone stayed at a constant also,really enjoyed this track here friend,solid work that when through leaving feed,i'm going to play again because it has replay value,RIPE joint bro.. peace. |
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DressToKill
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Thanks my dude I appreciate that Crim
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