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    Posted: 22 May 2017 at 9:32pm


check out my track no time to waste, its not edited because I am just learning Cubase but I put the verse down to get famiiarized. Lmk what you think, any critisism is appreciated

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bad link, you didnt take out the http

just copy the url, paste it in here, and put [soundcloud] tags around it
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Originally posted by Nigma Nigma wrote:

bad link, you didnt take out the http

just copy the url, paste it in here, and put [soundcloud] tags around it

I fixed the link but I have no idea how to embed this shit lol, sorryLOL
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o.k. so for an honest review. . you have skills my man. Bars are good, flow is crisp when your in the pocket, your delivery is cool and your presence is nice. You have a good voice for audio and you have good energy. 

there is a few problems though, like i said, flow is good when your in the pocket, but you dont always stay inside the pocket. Theres a few areas where the timing is a bit off . . like you either snap into the bar measure a beat early, or you leave it too late before moving into the next line. Its not that this needs a large amount of adjustment, but just some obvious mis steps worth pointing out 

The biggest thing is though. . i actually listened to all 3 tracks on your sound cloud page and im wondering why all the vocals are panned to one side? Like, i can only hear the vocals in one speaker. Is that intentional? 
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Originally posted by rhetorical rhetorical wrote:

o.k. so for an honest review. . you have skills my man. Bars are good, flow is crisp when your in the pocket, your delivery is cool and your presence is nice. You have a good voice for audio and you have good energy. 

there is a few problems though, like i said, flow is good when your in the pocket, but you dont always stay inside the pocket. Theres a few areas where the timing is a bit off . . like you either snap into the bar measure a beat early, or you leave it too late before moving into the next line. Its not that this needs a large amount of adjustment, but just some obvious mis steps worth pointing out 

The biggest thing is though. . i actually listened to all 3 tracks on your sound cloud page and im wondering why all the vocals are panned to one side? Like, i can only hear the vocals in one speaker. Is that intentional? 


Nah bro I cannot explain to you why my vocals are only on one side it fucking drives me nuts. I wonder if it's because my beats don't have a left and right input and just had a single. As for the feed I certainly agree with you and appreciate it

Edit : I fixed it, when I mix down the final track it has to be mixed in mono since I'm only using the one mic.  I updated the file now should play in both headphones


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Originally posted by DressToKill DressToKill wrote:

 http://soundcloud.com/user-206308494/dtk-no-time-to-waste

check out my track no time to waste, its not edited because I am just learning Cubase but I put the verse down to get famiiarized. Lmk what you think, any critisism is appreciated

cheers

unfourtunately when i updated the new file i had to delete the original and kill the link in the first post!

Sorry about the technical dificulties, I included the good link in the quote above


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Now the new upload is fucked...this is fucking frustrating. Not sure why it killed my quality
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