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    Posted: 25 February 2013 at 2:16pm
Topic: A natural disaster

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good luck TURTLE

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Thanks bud..
Good luck!!
                     
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I haven't forgot about this just trying to juggle my time inbetween work and home. I have started it though.. Just need to finish it up and Polish it to get it posted..
                     
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no doubt TURTLE I've been busy myself I should have mine up in the next day or so...

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I remember watching the news in Tuscaloosa and it was a hot day for April...
I thought some wires musta' loosened cus' somethin' knocked out the cable...
I hopped out my chair to pick it up as my knee got stopped by the table...
Than i heard a knock as I screamed  and my mini TV dropped on my bagel...
It was my friend Mike who's a cop and owns the pizza shop by the staples...
He insisted there's a twister and I said, "Mike man just stop with the fables"...
He said "I'm not gonna be able to help your stubborn ass once it gets in the county"...
"Now listen don't Doubt me" just bare witness to the thickness of the air that surrounds me!...
I stared at the cloudy backdrop behind mike who stood at my door step...
He said bring what you need so I grabbed the 4 Coor's left next to the boar's head...
I might as well have been on all fours as I floored it to his honda civic in an instant...
I looked thru the window and squinted, as he said squeeze in between Mindy an his infant...
So we piled in, we were up the road about a mile when, I looked down and saw his child grin...
Damn hes got some drool and a smile despite the strife we're in...
To him life is pie as i smiled back and wiped his chin...
So I cracked the window to toss out the hand wipe...
Speeding no stop signs or stop lights thats when I was like, " Damn Mike!"...
"You got ya wife not to mention two kids in the car"...
He said,"zip it ya dip shit" ya lucky ya witnessin' this shit from afar...
This is my car I can drop you off and you can have another drink at the bar
"But  turn around and tell me if you see somethin' that you think is bizzare"...
Now As Mike's hand was shiftin I had a chance to witness...
This rain that was attackin' like fighter plane ammunition...
and than in an instant the rain stopped everything was cool & nothing was heard...
We got to the local school turned the lights off and pulled up to the curb...
It was the calm before the storm and we were surrounded by these dark streets...
Mike turned around and shouted sharply, Hurry up and get the baby out the car seat...
So I got him out and wrapped him  up just using a towel...
that mike used for his travels, And rite then and there is when I heard Lucipher's howl...
We're running for the front doors with this monster behind us...
Guiness wouldnt have been able to keep up if it was trying to time us...
Than I tripped as I got hit as my buzz kicked in igniting my mind rush...
adrenaline wasnt enough as a tree branch split getting my spine crushed...
I dropped the baby but Mikes wife picked her up in a second...
They made it to safety as I got lifted up without question...
Now am I gonna make it to hell or make it to heaven?..
the answer is neither I made it 100 yards away on top of a seven eleven...




 








 











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sorry for the length TURTLE i know it's long...If ya want more time its all good man

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Jeez.. Haha ok imma hafta get a tad bit more time for this.

You're looking for an epic battle huh..
                     
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sorry TURTLE I just started writing and shit just came to me...take ya time TURTLE no rush...sorry bout that length lol

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It's all good.. No worries.
                     
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Update..

Still havnt forgot about this Ex..
Im on my way back to Kansas city from Galveston Island as im writing while the wifes driving. i should have my verse up soon!!
                     
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I also just realized a bit of simularity in the beginning of my verse compared to yours.. Except im taking a different approach to yours.. Youll see what i mean..
                     
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no doubt TURTLE...I posted my verse in open mic because I thought you forgot about this I wasnt trying to sway votes (it is a topical so i dont think thats possible) so I hope thats cool with you I just wanted some feedback...other than that I am excited to see ya verse....on another tip how did you make out with those crazy snowstorms out there?

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if not TURTLE i'll take a DQ it's all good man I didntt mean any harm by it

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I aint trippin on you postin it in the open mic section. I still plan to post.. Its just taking a bit longer than i wanted. The storms that came through a few weeks ago sucked balls.. But its all good haha.. You aint gotta take a DQ. Shit you got your verse up.. Im the one slackin, lol.. But na ill get it up.
                     
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Word good looks TURTLE no rush man when ever you  get the time

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Moved to NML until either of you post
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I already posted Kay

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My bad didn't see your verse, goes down as a no-show...shame to waste a dope verse
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