Open Mic: Faced my Demons

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    Posted: 10 September 2013 at 11:23pm
so called "victim" screamin
thinkin its all good, must be dreamin
tryna be as manipulative as the media
but your as nasty as gonorrhea
your just a ghoulish whore in Gomorrah
look no one gives a fuck about your actions
its fucked when you wanna kill Syrians
your just a pathetic, brainwashed, American
frequently getting fucked by uncle sam
look your whole life is the same cycle
I kicked your ass cuz your a psycho
don't project your insecurities on other people
I must be a pimp the way I slapped this hoe
bitch, im an animal, skin walkin, Navajo
my bitch got great ass though, Cherokee
im only married to the jane that's mary
call me peter parker, dressed in black, Eddie Brock
your about as weak as o-block
honestly I hate the way you talk to me
as long as you live like this we aint homies
constantly tryna get in my business
when all I wanna do is fuck bitches
ask me how im doing
makes me wanna get to killin
but, I realized that your the demon
white pale satan, fuck a exorcism
lets have a execution
dr. guillotine cutting your body clean
now that im at peace I feel prestine
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Terrible tbh. First of all,your contenrt was all over the place.2nd,you can barely rhyme,please read up on multis. It seems you havent even tried to elevate. No punchlines wp or anything. Step up your game bro this was kindergardenvshit. Expand your vocab and try to make sense when you say things.
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