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Beborn7
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Posted: 19 February 2020 at 10:57am |
My brother from another snitched on me I was fresh out a bit homie how the fuck you tricked on me I woulda held the blick for 'em grab the problem solver to fix homie I admit being a real nigga gets lonely But I'm live my truth even if I'm homeless or in a prison suit I was born to get a bitches loot you know what this pimping do Leaf had me like smokey in the pigeon coop Cock back the blick and shoot life changes made me a different dude Since brina died I ain't been the same since Smoking wet had my brain drenched you can't hang with me I'll leave you lames lynched Willie lynch jim crom same shit pimp hoe Stay low get doe y'all know how this shit go My pops 69 still sniff blows I look like just like him got his big nose Vice lord crazy but most of my nigs foes I got dead homies I missed bros Shit bro damn we all we got Since brina gone and we never could call on pops I'm sorry bro I was going thru my madness Super depressed on my sad shit bi-polar as fuck I can flip mad quick I don't miss nothing cause I never had shit Designer fashions draped in the finest fabrics I'm trying to eat what you got inside yo cabinet I will fire ratchets and quickly exprire a rat bitch Diamond tester challenge you liars ain't that rich I don't vibe to wack shit don't smoke don't drink but I pop pills I was sick of niggas so much I got ill Fuck cooling out foe I will not chill been crazy since clabon got killed I used to rob steal and if shit go bad I'm going to back to that Prison been there done that I ain't going back to that So its black mask black hat black gloves everything black on black Black ones black strap if he resist I'ma clap his ass Lusting on the fattest ass with my old Manish ass I've walked on water and stand on glass mama didn't raise me right Early 80s baby hype addicted to it cuz og blazed the pipe Been hungry as fuck not knowing where I'm lay tonight Hat to the left all the wrong I did I ain't trying to make it right Hook or crook if I get booked I hope the judge make it light Around young heavies now I'm just old and bitter I have upped the pole on niggas stole on niggas and stole on bitches I'm coronavirus and full blown aids I tell you there's no one iller.... It's realer! Edited by Neek - 19 February 2020 at 11:16am |
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I'm gay and bent over.
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Neek
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but do you blick in your chair in the air playing modern warfare? because fuzzy wuzzy was a bear... fuzzy wuzzy had no hair... but he blicked in the air. also...fixed your color bracket. merry xmas and welcome to LA.
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#Bananas
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Beborn7
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Thanks bro
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Mitch.Wagwaan
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So fuzzy wuzzy wasnt fuzzy, was he?
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Crimson Juice
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OK, the good thing here is that it rhymed, as a suggestion try expanding
on your rhyming words with more syllables content within, as this drop came off as flat on reading, it was also spatial (scatty), it didn't seem to have any depth as such, and although the title was called family ain't shit but a title, it was more about you than family via blood and friend- ships, still it had content that i could relate too still, all in all a decent 1st drop...peace. |
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