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    Posted: 25 July 2017 at 10:57pm
you mentioned, being neglected..for the title shot….


well, I was the only one who suggested you.
not a diss, just to give some perspective to…
that was a move, that we shoulda seen exo do…
but, he gave you his whole ass to give that beso, dude

cubes said ryan and HE could become nominee's
or exchange their clout to pronounce a proper king
ryan backed kyle, I found the shit mind bog-a-ling
Exo just bitched about endeeze. you? nah. not a thing.

that just seems.. how it be's, I guess...
couple that with that fabricated and weak defense
about deleted threads….and you got some Jesus friends
Judas reinvent, "as your brother" im speaking as…
c'mon Self, you too intelligent to be siding with
a mothafucka that ducked for cover
til the "Duzt Settled" to find his pen...
all over the place and not holdin weight, thats hydrogen
but why commence…

cause "facts only" is how I have been
since time began.

mods crooked? that cant be the take
crimmy a snake? sammy a snake? nigma a snake?
this food for thought Self, go head, getcha a plate
its just hard for me to consider that this is the play…

ah I get it!! it was all covered up…by rut….

miss me with that disloyal speak
cause I seen.. R.K.B open lids and dig in noodles
like Chef Boyardee
for that bitchboy Beans…
he still carries a crew tag thats too trash..
so where the fuck this truth at?!?!

the whole shit is just so egregious, I cant fathom..
WHERE THE FUCK WAS THE OUTCRY…
PREVIOUS TO MY BANNING?!?!?!?!

like they let it go.. just as some fucking coup de gras
"LETS THE FACTS SPEAK", thats just foolish talk..
SPOILER ALERT, Cubes partner? he was choosin Law
so how did he benefit duckin an acceptance?
that shits looney thoughts.

Self, you love boxing like I do. lets acknowledge this.
posturing and picking a different opponent is politics
put the shoe on my foot, and itd cause a rift
bottomline, let me give you ALL the jist

Cubes my brother.. but I enter that bloodline event
and he said im battling someone other than Trizz..
no homo…no incest
but id tell that man that he could SUCK MY DICK.

keep in mind.. belts were abandoned with ease
just so the "bell didnt ring" they fell to their knee's
Cubes didnt even diss iLL, and he was sweltering beef
one of these things..is NOT like the other, it seems.

salute for reppin' the team..



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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Crimson Juice Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 July 2017 at 11:32pm
Man i loved that title,that alone pulled me in here,(well your alias did too,but that's
besides the point),this is a rare verse in the sense that it came off like a question &
answer scenario,like the reader had participation value,it felt as if whoever reads it
automatically has been given a choice to decide what's what,all whilst having a very
controlled tone in my head via this in essence respectful diss,clever stuff,emotions
were also present here again subtle and controlled,i enjoyed this for its essence
which was spirit and cause,thanks dude for being who you are,real nice read here
indeed..peace.
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Neek dope shit here man. You're style is real mellow but impactful. I love that shit. As far as Cubes line about me, it read as if I ain't shit. If I misread, so be it. As for your work I dig the delivery the best. Real nice stuff
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You wrote this so calmly, was like you stubbed your toe on mushrooms and picked up the pen. I really just wish we could all get along but this was a nice smooooth read. On that reggae beef. You write this wearing a puffy Marley Jamaican toque? Do you even know what that is?

Anyways, some stand out lines. I swear on my mamas grave that chef boyardee line made me guffaw IRL. Dead serious. Also laughed really hard at you blaming RKB for everything. 

Actual selfie of Neek:


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Dieeeeeemmmm geeennna neek this was fire really smooth and it had alot of personal style and diem burn mutha fuck as burn punches out the game lol props. Think your rhyme scheme could have been kept a little tighter towards the end but stll sick drop.i
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@Crim, LA is a shell without you my friend, so thank you for being you.

@iLL, how you took it is truthfully all that matters, but for myself, I felt it was in the same vein of we excel at different things..by we I dont mean you or I.. I mean cubes and exo. but clearly you handle yourself well in topicals and throwing insults.

@Self, my brother.. I hope that gif aint you removing me from the memory banks, I know those chinese parts need an upgrade and sammy better hurry up on that too.

@Nigma, I figured calm was the best approach, I didnt want to disturb your zen like slumber.. I saw what happens when the beast awakes.. also.. we BOTH know Nigma is the goat and he is bahhhhh'd to the bone.


@AK, welcome back!! and thanks for peeping. I definitely appreciate it and I had a few more angles I was gonna add but said fuck it and posted it. so I know whatcha mean about the tail end.
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It's all my fault....

This was very humorous though. I liked the" what the fuck you talking about" to it because reading some of the pieces that's exactly what I been thinking. you always have an unorthodox style that comes together nicely this was no different. Clowning on deck.
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Why me Though? :(
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So chill for a diss. Its like you are talking to children to make sure they are listening properly. Nice touch.I definitely liked the approach here. As for mechanics, no need to get into that. you know what you do. Came off like Toy Soldiers. Laying out your take on the situation and how you have to re-iterate that you are not a mod. LOL. The calling people by their first name was a nice touch also. Overall - One chill ass diss. I wouldn't even call it a diss. just a introspective piece on a certain situation. Kudos.
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@Rut, please stop deleting threads.

@Endeeze, I dunno. Uzbeki luck I guess.


@Dizz, definitely nailed my intent. I woulda never thought toy soldiers, but that fits.


one of the things I missed, was that for all the "crooked mods" campaigning, folks are neglecting a very real truth. each crew has a mod representative pretty much.



Renegades: Stalin
Fatal: Cuba
Elision: Nigma & Sammy
Kratos: Endeeze
Alter: Crimson
Empire: Rutter

if I missed any, my bad.. but thats one elaborate ass theory. some illuminati type shit lol.. with no benefit. I left the mods because they arent crooked and follow the rules to a T. so I had to speak on this as the black sheep of the family.
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