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Scotty32
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Topic: Final Battle: Perfecto [vs] King Jehu Posted: 09 June 2004 at 4:42am |
20lines min - 50lines max First to 5 / 3 KO No Biting No Recycling No Dickryde Votes Crew Votes Allowed Votes MUST be explained ALL Dodgy votes WILL get deleted! No bitching after verses have been droped keep it in the bitchin thread, or see me!
all verses must be in by: Sunday 16th of June 2004 at 12:00 Midnight (GMT/British) second spitter has till Monday 17th of June 2004 at 12:00 Midnight (GMT/British) This only appies to battles where the first spitter posts to near to the end and not giving his opponent enough time
(To find out the time set your time 5hours head of the site time in your profile)
Senor Perfecto spits first, then King Jehu - since thats the order they came out the hat
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King Jehu
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Posted: 09 June 2004 at 12:48pm |
::chex in:: 50 lines? ok... it's on
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Carnage
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Posted: 09 June 2004 at 5:30pm |
yo scotty, not spammin or anythin but the 16th aint a sunday man
~Peace~
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Scotty32
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Posted: 10 June 2004 at 4:36am |
but if you'd looked its a week
becose i dont wanna drag this one, i started it on a wendesday - normally i start it on a sunday or monday
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Senor Perfecto
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1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK
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Posted: 16 June 2004 at 7:12pm |
I wait with anticipation for the spit from King Jehu, Will he try to make conversation or will he sing to you? I've read your battle verses and laughed at every swing you threw, Your only hope of salvation is if you bring your crew, My flow's more addictive than opium... hotter than Chicken Vindaloo, You and girl are Ethiopians sharing a little chicken-wing for two, Orion's asshole is so wide that I could probably fling you through, And when he regurgitates some shit again you'll be the King of Spew, If you attacked with battleships you still couldn't sink canoes, I've got new tracks everyday... you screw up your interludes, You're brooding cos my dark verses put you into moods, But I'm accruing Wins as if it's out of fashion or I'm into feuds, You made it to the Final but now you'll begin to lose, And your losing streak will stretch till Christmas and give you Winter blues, The only way you'd be famous is to lace up Jerry Springer's shoes, I'll be making headlines while you're presenting the News, I'm better than Jin... I'm Lord of the Chinks to you, I'll call this nigga what I want cos for me nothing's taboo, You excreted your text so that's why it stinks of pooh, And every time you wipe your arse it's like the toilet prints your views, King Jehu's an alcoholic... call him the Prince of Booze, In the poll you say you're teetotal but I know you've binged a few*, Plus you've clinched a few Wins possibly with punches pinched from Newbs, But if you move another inch then I'll be forced to lynch a Coon, It's a cinch to do... easier than you miming a tune, The world revolves around me... I'm the Sun outshining the Moon, You're butt-ugly like Uri Geller but too puny to bend a spoon, You're stressed by my text so next you're meant to swoon, I'm spitting monsoons and it's not even the end of June, If the Tourney took place sooner then I would have killed you in the womb, You can try to reply against my rhymes with 50 lines but then you're screwed, Your lengthy spit will still be shit cos I hit with strength renewed, No surprise to see you joined a crew with all those men you wooed, They can ride your dick all they like but in the end you'll lose, Then you'll be secluded from your crew but don't worry... Orion will send you news, Unlike lightning... I'll strike you twice in the same spot to extend your bruise, You depend on crew votes but I'll make amends for anything you do, You pretend to fend against me then befriend my middle finger too...
*http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=2 661&PN=1
Adios...
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King Jehu
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Posted: 16 June 2004 at 10:18pm |
Nice multis... I actually expected 50 lines. I heard from a little birdie that your spit was hot yesterday, so I started writing mine. Here it be...
I serve vets who claim to be perfecto with word/texts I've cut 9th up into third-TeCs and hurt necks Dirt specks? I'm dirtier than midgets in nerd sex First bet: of all your losses, this is the worst yet Battling me hoping it goes well? the day you beat me, they froze hell Thing you so swell with your multis? you do swell, cause this ho smells and I will bury now cause you're starting to rot, bitch And I'll make sure you lose your spot in the top six so when I eat MC's I'm going for you with chop sticks cause you haven't got hits that match these hot spits Is it a shot dick? nah, I heard he's got jock itch Scratching till he bleeds like he's on his "dot"... sick Win? I think not, chick, like votes just got switched cause my hot shit will make you not spit, you ain't got shit ok verse, but you'd have to rob to gain credit, I'll give you migrane headaches I own metal gear to hurt you so this is my game, (get it?) let me rhyme and his seņor with punches and many crimes galore battle me any time and I'll beat you with twenty lines or more We hungry for wins lately kid, hit hard, it's been crazy shit we both strong spit long shit but that was the wrong spit to face me with
(More multis than you can jam down someone's throat)
This will be my tourney victory, my ability has you feeling me Like no one else, no mimi-me, no humility, no probability of me showing you sympathy with these metaphors and similies If I get KO'ed, I'm killing three and leave you without mobility I'm royalty, show loyalty, and you'll be LA nobility but in Xfade or in Illa's team, you'll be heading to the guillotine Japanese, Chinese, Korean, European or from the Philipines I'll kill all untill I see what it'll be when one's as Ill as me keep a level of tranquility, don't struggle, it's futility cause you'll be showing your stupidity when testing my validity You wanna be a perfect king? try to mimic me specifically sodomized with multis? yeah, I'm taking that virginity... Can't believe I didn't see this conspiracy till recently Multiple accounts and biters, dick riders vote repeatedly come get a piece of me... I win easily, Ok, so I'm NOT battling "Jin" You a "ruff rider" when with A-Clipz, straddling him Perfecto was away, the beast was dormant in it's lair returns like storms in desert airs... forming everywhere to try to rule, but I'll make him feel the torment and despair When this "animal" Jehu attacks, it's way more than you can "bear"
str8 wurpley
I'm "phat" cause I'm full of "big puns..." this is your "Big L" I'll show you "holy shit" and spit fire, to test if you'd dig 'hell' I love chinese food... deciding from the menu with coin toss Marinate you with chinese 'water' torture: in soy sauce! You've no verility, fertility, no versatility to procreate and give birth to a rap in sober state that's heavy or even overweight "chemist" and "rap PHD," perfecto now has "third degree" burns I'm teaching you a verbal lesson that you'll certainly learn You don't fuck "with the King" you're only a queen when in drag Watch my wordplay, multis and punches tripple-teaming this fag It's over...
may the best verse win...
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)v(ost Infamous
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Posted: 17 June 2004 at 3:51am |
Senor Perfecto Koo verse. Better than the majority that I've seen on here but I aint even seen some of ya work but somehow it seems like you didnt put the effort in places where u could have because I seen mad potential in ya verses but some of em just werent complex enough in the rhyme shceme to give me that 'inspiring' type suprised feeling you should get in a tourney battle. Nice shit and I thought the punches were decent in many places even if u did fall off ya flow every once in a while although not much.
Multis- 7 Wordplay- 6.5 Disses- 8 Flow- 8
Overall Score - 29.5/40 -------------------------------------------------- King Jehu I thought you came off strong with ya flow and didnt fall off much however I still think that you could have done better than presented here in the battle area. Some of ya stuff you talked about ya'self a lil too much but other than that i was feelin the whole verse except for like I said.. the parts where u spoke about yourself rather than your opponent. Wordplay was off to me.. pretty simple.. not very complex but decent enough for the opponent's verse. Alright battle in my eyes however... like I said.. ALOT better than the majority of things I see here.
Multis- 8.5 Wordplay- 7 Disses- 8.5 Flow- 9
Overall Score- 33/40 -------------------------------------------------- Overall I thought both battlers should have come stronger but the battle was decent and enjoyable to read. Nice shit gentlemen and I hope to see more from the both of you in the very near future however my vote goes to....
Vote = King Jehu
Reason: Simply for a more complex and well thought out battle verse or so it seems. Stronger in the needed areas of a battle overall as a whole even though Perfecto did come off with a few original things, Jehu took the advantage as second spitter and simply over ruled his verse with his flow, multis and disses along with a few thrown in things about himself which I think made his verse a lil weaker but still enough.
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BiggStankDogg
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Posted: 17 June 2004 at 10:25am |
FLOW: EVEN PUNCHES: King Jehu MULTIS: King Jehu IMAGINATION: Seņor Perfecto WORDPLAY: EVEN STRUCTURE: Seņor Perfecto ENJOYMENT: King Jehu (Close)
Dope. Ass. Shit. I was feelin' it. I enjoyed both your rhymes and the rhymes just kept comin'. Big props to Seņor Perfecto for endin' all his lines the way he did - it could have all benn shuffled around, and every line would rhyme and fit, just about. Jehu, man - nice job seizin' the second spit advamtage. I liked how you separated your shit into sections devoted to a specific category. It's been done before, but I like the taunting nature of it, and you made it come off well. Good battle, both. Respect.
Winner: King Jehu
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OPTICK
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Posted: 17 June 2004 at 3:28pm |
punches:jehu flow:perfecto multis:tie wordplay:jehu structure:perfecto enjoyment:jehu humour:tie
battle comments ok close battle both very good spits perfecto u dip sometimes to lower standards wen u battle but in this 1 u came hard but unfortionalty for u jehu spat a harder hitting verse with sickness written all over it close but jehu scraps the win here good verse's by both winner jehu
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Scotty32
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Posted: 17 June 2004 at 5:36pm |
King Jehu is the winner
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