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    Posted: 25 October 2008 at 12:04pm
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DTK:

*Waynes daughter was in a car accident and died apparently?
*Aviators are a pair of sunglasses that he was wearing in the pic..also pilots wear em..pilots fly..should be self explanitory
*He used to write his text in green..green is the colour for envy
*Woods went to Italy and visited the tower
*A pistil is a part of a plant..also sounds like pistol..in his frees he writes about guns and shit
 *On another site his Alias is MagicMark
*30 lines is the line amount..
 
Marks Finished!,We Know Ya Soft..Ya Your Styles Gay
I Didnt Have To Watch Toy Story To Know Woody's Childs Play!
Ya Lyrical Status Is Freezing Temperatures..Waay Below Zero!
Il Have Woods Crashin And Burning..Like The Daughter Of His Hero!*
Damn Mark, You Couldnt Hand Me A L If You Gave Me Papers
And The Only Time Woods Is Associated With Fly Is Sportin Aviators!*
I Land Punches Every Bar..Hell Its Not Hard To See That Hes Hurt
The Only Time Mark Is Looking Tight Is In A Fucking T-Shirt!
Well Call This Bitch A Door..Cuz Well Everybody's Knockin Him
Ya Battle Scores Negative!How Do You Expect This Outcome To Be Positive!?
Dude Ive Served You Three Times!Thats Almost Career Ending!
He Aint Writin Like This Cuz Hes Irish..This Fuckers Green With Envy!*
He Claims His The Greatest,Seriously?Man Please..
You're Fucking Ranked 75th..JUST ABOVE RAMEEZ!
The Past Is Catchin Up!Its The Fourth Time That Im Absuin Ya Rookie
Mark A Tranny?YUP!Cuz It Aint Hard To Get 'Wood Confused With A Pussy'
Dude Dress Is Keepin XFade On Top..Perfecto Dont Even Need Ya
You Enjoy Italy Huh?Ironically Im Gonna Be Leavin Ya Leanin Like Pissa!*
We Aint Lyrically On The Same Level..You Need Luck Rhyming
Cuz Im The King Of This Jungle..You, You're Just Lion(Lyin)
You've Taken Shots On The Net..Its No Suprised You've Rimmed Out
Woods Is A Gangsta?He Couldnt 'Own A Pistil' If He Bought A Greenhouse!*
Ya Writtens Are A Sewer Pipeline..Call All Ur Flowin Is Shit
Il Show MagicMark Is A Fake..Like I Was Exposing His Tricks!*
Ya Styles Mainstream And Played..Ya Game Is Gone And Its Killed
Woods Couldnt Be 'Associated With A Hot 30'..If His Mom Was A Milf!*
This Irish Kids Never Seen A Buck..Ya Whole Life Is A Misery
So Woods Making Paper?Hrmm..NOT EVEN LITERALLY!
After His Title Loss..This Kids Been Desperately Looking For Fame
An The Only People That Are Ridin Pine Are Kids That Arent Put In The Game!





Woods:

Expos:
*He no showed Nep in the first round, but was allowed back in, and 2smooth no showed him in the semi final
*Smooth has told me he's givin' him plays (Dal a Star - in his quarter battle) and has helped him with wordin' - (Kay also has referred to this)... he also told me he's beaten him 3 times easily and couldnt be bothered puttin' up a verse.. lol, people saying he aint deserve his place here as smooth would have beaten him if he showed.
*posted a new photo of himself in the PYP thread, with short hair, he used to have long, curly hair
*Josh Brolin, lead actor in "no country for old men"/ Josh Hertnett plays a guy who gives up sex for "40 days and 40 nights"
*His girl cheated on him, rumour is he cried over it, but he took her back / she's called lindsay.
*In his recent battles he always has a football play, usually referring to the quarterback or defence.
* Big L - Was shot being mistaken for his brother, who was in trouble with gangs.
 

Murder...
 
Talking bout’ kay’s lines? Now that hearse is for two

Since Smooth’s told me.. he’s practically written verses for you…(Yup..)

We all thought you’d improved, with those “smooth” lines
cause you winnin’ battles now…but it didn’t take much to beat every newbs’ rhymes

You thinkin’ he scared? It’s a Joke for you to equal smooth

Truth is.. He told me after 3 times, he was just sick of beating you! (true…)
So he a slow foe, like his girl we know this hoe blows

And peep’s know you aint deserve this title... n’ that was before those no shows.. (haha)
I was thinkin’ you like Samson.. but that’s as wrong as it’s getting’
Cause he’s been weak since he lost his hair.. but shit, he wernt strong to begin wit’

See.. plays on ya name usually ass, but I got one to wreck ya face with

So… Im gonna leave “holes in dress”.. somethin’ like ya girl’s reputation..(oh fuck!)

My rippin shit’s ridiculous, so ya blood’s spilled fairly

Look.. This.. “No country for old men”.. so ‘josh’ getting’ killed early..

He knows I’ve come harder than him, so he be cryin’ then he fights

My shots put ‘Dress, white on the ground’.. like a bride’s weddin’ night!!

Yano all girls are the same.. that’s what I’ve witnessed, dude..
See I checked MTV.. and that Lindsay only likes bitches too… (murdered)

Decapitatin’ this loser.. so it’ll be a cannibals victory
Cause if “josh, loses his 'head'”.. then 40 other guys get it for free...(oh!..)

You may ‘act’ you better ‘josh’, but I stay rippin’ sluts..

And This aint ‘40 days and 40 nights’.. so you DEFINITELY getting’ fucked!..

You aint been givin’ luck.. so imma stay crashin’ his jaw
Dress getting’ a votes a joke.. like lil kim at the fashion awards.. (lol..)

So why you battlin’ for? You’ve lost ya way in this world

Me winnin’s as predictable as you havin’ a wack football play in ya verse!!

Scotty prayin’ for me to win’, he’s hopin’ and pleadin’..

Cause if people hear Dress won the tourney, then all the dope people leavin!!..

 
Ha...
I smash ya skull in, tear out ya heart.. stay rupturin’ vitals
No accident, but now “you dead cause of me, bro”.. so you jus’ like ya Idol!...




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Good battle Woods..lets get the votes rollin
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 November 2008 at 12:57pm
Man..... close and dope as shit

DRESS:
Marks Finished!,We Know Ya Soft..Ya Your Styles Gay
I Didnt Have To Watch Toy Story To Know Woody's Childs Play!
Ya Lyrical Status Is Freezing Temperatures..Waay Below Zero!
Il Have Woods Crashin And Burning..Like The Daughter Of His Hero!*
^opener was sick, but lovin the next line yo. cool shit

Damn Mark, You Couldnt Hand Me A L If You Gave Me Papers
And The Only Time Woods Is Associated With Fly Is Sportin Aviators!*
I Land Punches Every Bar..Hell Its Not Hard To See That Hes Hurt
The Only Time Mark Is Looking Tight Is In A Fucking T-Shirt!
^ solid punches, good personal but not so stick out

Well Call This Bitch A Door..Cuz Well Everybody's Knockin Him
Ya Battle Scores Negative!How Do You Expect This Outcome To Be Positive!?
^ gooood shit, i liked the play

Dude Ive Served You Three Times!Thats Almost Career Ending!
He Aint Writin Like This Cuz Hes Irish..This Fuckers Green With Envy!*
He Claims His The Greatest,Seriously?Man Please..
You're Fucking Ranked 75th..JUST ABOVE RAMEEZ!
^ envy play was solid, Ram play was Ill.

The Past Is Catchin Up!Its The Fourth Time That Im Absuin Ya Rookie
Mark A Tranny?YUP!Cuz It Aint Hard To Get 'Wood Confused With A Pussy'
Dude Dress Is Keepin XFade On Top..Perfecto Dont Even Need Ya
You Enjoy Italy Huh?Ironically Im Gonna Be Leavin Ya Leanin Like Pissa!*
^ loved the 1st play here, but wasnt feelin the pisa, it coulda been worded better or somethin. leanin doesnt sound very mean.

We Aint Lyrically On The Same Level..You Need Luck Rhyming
Cuz Im The King Of This Jungle..You, You're Just Lion(Lyin)
^ ight wayne...Confused

You've Taken Shots On The Net..Its No Suprised You've Rimmed Out
Woods Is A Gangsta?He Couldnt 'Own A Pistil' If He Bought A Greenhouse!*
^ ahaa...i get this play, some others might not. cool shit

Ya Writtens Are A Sewer Pipeline..Call All Ur Flowin Is Shit
Il Show MagicMark Is A Fake..Like I Was Exposing His Tricks!*
Ya Styles Mainstream And Played..Ya Game Is Gone And Its Killed
Woods Couldnt Be 'Associated With A Hot 30'..If His Mom Was A Milf!*
^ both solid plays, milf was killer ahaa

This Irish Kids Never Seen A Buck..Ya Whole Life Is A Misery
So Woods Making Paper?Hrmm..NOT EVEN LITERALLY!
^ solid, good play
After His Title Loss..This Kids Been Desperately Looking For Fame
An The Only People That Are Ridin Pine Are Kids That Arent Put In The Game!
^ coulda came a bit stronger on the opener.

but shit, this was pretty dope. punches were consistant and you did ya homework.
good shit man! with the exception of a few plays i think coulda been reworded just a tad bit to better the understanding.

Woods:
Talking bout’ kay’s lines? Now that hearse is for two

Since Smooth’s told me.. he’s practically written verses for you…(Yup..)

^ could of come harder with the opener, tho disciminating


We all thought you’d improved, with those “smooth” lines
cause you winnin’ battles now…but it didn’t take much to beat every newbs’ rhymes

^ wasnt feelin so much..


You thinkin’ he scared? It’s a Joke for you to equal smooth

Truth is.. He told me after 3 times, he was just sick of beating you! (true…)

So he a slow foe, like his girl we know this hoe blows

And peep’s know you aint deserve this title... n’ that was before those no shows.. (haha)

^ 1st play, not hard enough as i think  intended, 2nd average


I was thinkin’ you like Samson.. but that’s as wrong as it’s getting’
Cause he’s been weak since he lost his hair.. but shit, he wernt strong to begin wit’

See.. plays on ya name usually ass, but I got one to wreck ya face with

So… Im gonna leave “holes in dress”.. somethin’ like ya girl’s reputation..(oh fuck!)

1st was meh.... but shit holes in dress play was fire! OUCH


My rippin shit’s ridiculous, so ya blood’s spilled fairly

Look.. This.. “No country for old men”.. so ‘josh’ getting’ killed early..

He knows I’ve come harder than him, so he be cryin’ then he fights

My shots put ‘Dress, white on the ground’.. like a bride’s weddin’ night!!

^ nice refrence in the 1st play, solid, 2nd was dope.


Yano all girls are the same.. that’s what I’ve witnessed, dude..
See I checked MTV.. and that Lindsay only likes bitches too… (murdered)

Yeeeeeaaaaaaa


Decapitatin’ this loser.. so it’ll be a cannibals victory
Cause if “josh, loses his 'head'”.. then 40 other guys get it for free...(oh!..)

You may ‘act’ you better ‘josh’, but I stay rippin’ sluts..

And This aint ‘40 days and 40 nights’.. so you DEFINITELY getting’ fucked!..

^ dopest set yet. good shit!

You aint been givin’ luck.. so imma stay crashin’ his jaw
Dress getting’ a votes a joke.. like lil kim at the fashion awards.. (lol..)

So why you battlin’ for? You’ve lost ya way in this world

Me winnin’s as predictable as you havin’ a wack football play in ya verse!!

^ first was cool, not so stand out. 2nd would of hit HAARD if he would have used one. but cant give you a point for almosts.


Scotty prayin’ for me to win’, he’s hopin’ and pleadin’..

Cause if people hear Dress won the tourney, then all the dope people leavin!!..

 ^ Ahhahhaahaaa DOPE
Ha...
I smash ya skull in, tear out ya heart.. stay rupturin’ vitals
No accident, but now “you dead cause of me, bro”.. so you jus’ like ya Idol!...

^ouch...hard closer yo. very nice.

Dope no question
you shoulda switched the closer with the play above it, i like that one better.
Its an up and down verse, you had some plays that were just dope as fuck.
some of them punches were the most hard in this battle, which makes this a very hard desicion.....

MY VOTE GOES TO...
and its no easy decision, DTK.  mostly for being consistant with it. both verses hard and creative as it came to punches, but woods had some that just left a feeling of sting. a few more and you may have not gotton my vote. Good shit with it to both yall.


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Thanks for startin it off Swifty..1-0 me

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 November 2008 at 1:03pm
Lol...Nobody predicted this to be the final...at least the title's comin' to X Fade!

DTK...Some good punches, some let downs. Opener was mad played.Weezys daughter punch was dope. Next 4 bars were pretty average. The Rameez punch was pretty funny haha. Tranny bar was also dope. Weren't feelin the italy punch. The Lion bar was extremely random, pretty much filler.Pistil and magicmark bars were ok. Milf thing was dope lmao. Weren't feelin the next 2 bars. Overall I think this was a pretty strong verse. You had some average shit but some really strong punches too.
Woods...Opener was weak, next bar was ok, and the 3rd bar was also weak. To use plays concerning smooth in the first 3 bars was pretty lame IMO.No show thing was meh. Samson punch was dope tho lmao.Next 2 bars were weak. I CAN NOT believe you used that wedding dress punch. SMH. Next 2 bars were weak. LMFAO @ the lil kim picture haa. Next bar was weak since he didnt use a football punch. Last 2 bars were pretty good too.

Before I read this battle my money was on Woods tbh...but I was wrong. Woods seemed to struggle for ideas, and although he had a couple of dope punches (Samson & Lil Kim), he didnt come as strong as we know he can. The was 15 bars and to only have 2 dope bars (IMO) is pretty lame. DTK, not much better than Woods, but, it was better, with more witty punches and some strong ones too.

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2-0 uppin for the KO or the next vote
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 November 2008 at 3:31pm
I'ma do this bar-by-bar...purely 'cuz I know if I just tell it like it is, people will claim I'm hatin' and whatever else... here goes:

DTK:

Marks Finished!,We Know Ya Soft..Ya Your Styles Gay
I Didnt Have To Watch Toy Story To Know Woody's Childs Play!

Good punch... flow and rhymes lackin' tho

Ya Lyrical Status Is Freezing Temperatures..Waay Below Zero!
Il Have Woods Crashin And Burning..Like The Daughter Of His Hero!*

There was a good idea there but execution was poor, rhymes way too basic and flow poor

Damn Mark, You Couldnt Hand Me A L If You Gave Me Papers
And The Only Time Woods Is Associated With Fly Is Sportin Aviators!*

Another good idea, better rhyme, but the punchline was worded poorly again...needs to be smooth

I Land Punches Every Bar..Hell Its Not Hard To See That Hes Hurt
The Only Time Mark Is Looking Tight Is In A Fucking T-Shirt!

Good good... Again a lack of rhymes but I can tell you just don't use them much, so I'll stop mentioning that now... flow better and punch simple but effective

Well Call This Bitch A Door..Cuz Well Everybody's Knockin Him
Ya Battle Scores Negative!How Do You Expect This Outcome To Be Positive!?

Flow ehh but a nice punch...

Dude Ive Served You Three Times!Thats Almost Career Ending!
He Aint Writin Like This Cuz Hes Irish..This Fuckers Green With Envy!*

Good idea, but he doesn't type green anymore as you said in your explanations, so you should have figured out a more relevant way to flip it

He Claims His The Greatest,Seriously?Man Please..
You're Fucking Ranked 75th..JUST ABOVE RAMEEZ!

Just stating a fact...needs more to it... you don't make up for it with some gangsta delivery or rhyming either...it's just... "yeah, hey, you're only a rank above Rameez"...

The Past Is Catchin Up!Its The Fourth Time That Im Absuin Ya Rookie
Mark A Tranny?YUP!Cuz It Aint Hard To Get 'Wood Confused With A Pussy'

Nah...don't think the punch hits and the flow is offfffffffffffffff

Dude Dress Is Keepin XFade On Top..Perfecto Dont Even Need Ya
You Enjoy Italy Huh?Ironically Im Gonna Be Leavin Ya Leanin Like Pissa!*

More poor delivery...way too stretched, Pissa idea is decent but again could have been flipped much better

We Aint Lyrically On The Same Level..You Need Luck Rhyming
Cuz Im The King Of This Jungle..You, You're Just Lion(Lyin)

Bit played out, but you deliver it well enough

You've Taken Shots On The Net..Its No Suprised You've Rimmed Out
Woods Is A Gangsta?He Couldnt 'Own A Pistil' If He Bought A Greenhouse!*

Pistil idea is decent but this wasn't well worded at all...

Ya Writtens Are A Sewer Pipeline..Call All Ur Flowin Is Shit
Il Show MagicMark Is A Fake..Like I Was Exposing His Tricks!*

A genuine mutliple-word, multiple-syllable rhyme... good, gives the bar much more flow, punch was decent I guess

Ya Styles Mainstream And Played..Ya Game Is Gone And Its Killed
Woods Couldnt Be 'Associated With A Hot 30'..If His Mom Was A Milf!*

First of all, no one spits 'a 30'...ever, 32 maybe... the whole idea was badly executed

This Irish Kids Never Seen A Buck..Ya Whole Life Is A Misery
So Woods Making Paper?Hrmm..NOT EVEN LITERALLY!

Good idea... I dunno if people have flipped this sorta thing on him before... I know I didn't when I battled him, wish I had...hot shit

After His Title Loss..This Kids Been Desperately Looking For Fame
An The Only People That Are Ridin Pine Are Kids That Arent Put In The Game!

Not the best closer...again the rhyme aids the flow tho

Overall... severe lack of rhyming ability and good lyricism... ideas for punchlines were there but the lyricism to put it into a bar was severely lacking... A handful of good punches tho

Woods:

Talking bout’ kay’s lines? Now that hearse is for two
Since Smooth’s told me.. he’s practically written verses for you…(Yup..)

Haha, good flow, nice set-up and rhyme and the punch is a good'un

We all thought you’d improved, with those “smooth” lines
cause you winnin’ battles now…but it didn’t take much to beat every newbs’ rhymes

Nice continuation from the last punch with the set-up here, punchline is stretched but a decent punch

You thinkin’ he scared? It’s a Joke for you to equal smooth
Truth is.. He told me after 3 times, he was just sick of beating you! (true…)

Already did a Smooth one and this doesn't really stand well enough on its own as a punch to be honest... Would have made a better set-up and then punching hard with the fact he shouldn't even be here and only is 'cuz of no-shows...which you detail below...

So he a slow foe, like his girl we know this hoe blows
And peep’s know you aint deserve this title... n’ that was before those no shows.. (haha)

As I say...this almost seems like filler now, this punch and the one above should have been merged

I was thinkin’ you like Samson.. but that’s as wrong as it’s getting’
Cause he’s been weak since he lost his hair.. but shit, he wernt strong to begin wit’

Decent personal but it doesn't hit too hard

See.. plays on ya name usually ass, but I got one to wreck ya face with
So… Im gonna leave “holes in dress”.. somethin’ like ya girl’s reputation..(oh fuck!)

Hahahaha... a VERY good idea, but like dress the execution wasn't all there...rhyme forced

My rippin shit’s ridiculous, so ya blood’s spilled fairly
Look.. This.. “No country for old men”.. so ‘josh’ getting’ killed early..

Yup... I like it, smooth wordplay

He knows I’ve come harder than him, so he be cryin’ then he fights
My shots put ‘Dress, white on the ground’.. like a bride’s weddin’ night!!

Yeah...nice idea, better execution than the last nameplay

Yano all girls are the same.. that’s what I’ve witnessed, dude..
See I checked MTV.. and that Lindsay only likes bitches too… (murdered)

Yeah that is murder... that's all that need be said

Decapitatin’ this loser.. so it’ll be a cannibals victory
Cause if “josh, loses his 'head'”.. then 40 other guys get it for free...(oh!..)

Ehhh...rhyme I'm not sure and the punch ain't great either... other Josh line was good

You may ‘act’ you better ‘josh’, but I stay rippin’ sluts..
And This aint ‘40 days and 40 nights’.. so you DEFINITELY getting’ fucked!..

This is better...much better

You aint been givin’ luck.. so imma stay crashin’ his jaw
Dress getting’ a votes a joke.. like lil kim at the fashion awards.. (lol..)

Yeah, decent, crashin' his jaw is forced tho

So why you battlin’ for? You’ve lost ya way in this world
Me winnin’s as predictable as you havin’ a wack football play in ya verse!!

This would have murdered if he had one, but he didn't...swing and a miss

Scotty prayin’ for me to win’, he’s hopin’ and pleadin’..
Cause if people hear Dress won the tourney, then all the dope people leavin!!..

Fillerish but it's not that bad, has a bit of humour value

Ha...
I smash ya skull in, tear out ya heart.. stay rupturin’ vitals
No accident, but now “you dead cause of me, bro”.. so you jus’ like ya Idol!...

A good concept for a punch but it doesn't quite come together that well... You need to make it clearer with your words that the "me bro" bit is speech, as it is you just stoke quotation marks in the middle of the sentence and ehh... You can pull that sorta shit off on a track, but when it's just written it needs more concrete structure to it

Overall, better rhymes and better flow, made for better reading because of that... More good punches, fewer poor ones... I honestly don't know how Dress is two up... To me his verse was like a four or five, this is a solid six leaning towards a seven.

VOTE: Woods
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 November 2008 at 7:09pm
Appreciate the vote and the breakdown O..2-1 me I thought this derserved to go to at least also
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 November 2008 at 8:07pm
I just realised my critique of DTK's 30 line was off point because this battle is actually 30 lines... may I congratulate whoever set that on being a giant homo and apologise to DTK for cursin' out his line...that being said it still coulda been delivered a little better but that very fact changed the line from like a 3/10 to a 6 or so... so that'll be that
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 November 2008 at 7:05pm
Nice battle, dudes...

DTK... a very inconsistent battle verse...  There were too many filler set-ups with basic rhymes...  A lot of good punchline concepts were wasted with poor delivery... though personals were decent...  This was an average but competent battle verse which lacked killer punches and the lyricism usually seen in your Open Mic verses...

Woods... again... a very inconsistent battle verse...  The smooth plays would have been better spaced out...  A lot of personals were worded badly... especially in the first half...  Elsewhere... good wordplay combined with personals to form stronger punches... but with some filler set-ups...

Vote: MC Woods...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2008 at 2:20pm
both were cool but d2k came harder, take it or leave it


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2008 at 3:36pm
I think we'll leave it. Cheers. 






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2008 at 6:12pm
ima be real honest... i only came in here at first to read woods verse, after his hot verse against kay....
 
 
but i thought i may as well vote while im here...
 
 
dress
 
Well Call This Bitch A Door..Cuz Well Everybody's Knockin Him
Ya Battle Scores Negative!How Do You Expect This Outcome To Be Positive!?
 
hot punch i liked it
 
He Claims His The Greatest,Seriously?Man Please..
You're Fucking Ranked 75th..JUST ABOVE RAMEEZ!
 
i thought this was funny
 
Ya Styles Mainstream And Played..Ya Game Is Gone And Its Killed
Woods Couldnt Be 'Associated With A Hot 30'..If His Mom Was A Milf!*
 
ouch!
 
 
confused woods for a pussy, and green with envy line was nice aswell
 
 
 
woods
 
So he a slow foe, like his girl we know this hoe blows

And peep’s know you aint deserve this title... n’ that was before those no shows

nice lol
 
See I checked MTV.. and that Lindsay only likes bitches too
 
lol made me laugh
 
Dress getting’ a votes a joke.. like lil kim at the fashion awards..
 
this was cool as well
 
this was a close battle,both had filler such as wood's wedding dress line and dress'es toy story woody play however my vote goes to DRESS because..... woods first 6 lines were all about smooth, needed to mis it up a bit...and i thought dresses good punches were better/cleverer/harder hittin than wood's good punches
 
 
 
 
tight battle guys.
Ice they need time to translate it, That why U let kids down
So ya'll should go read my 08 shit, maybe U'll get it now
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2008 at 6:15pm
3-2 me thanks Icez..appreciate you takin the time to vote man
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 November 2008 at 7:21am
Dress - Not a bad verse but as senor said it was basically up and down you had some nice punches and than you had lines that come across as filler to me, maybe thats because of the length of the verse...Overall an ok verse lacked the killer edge though imo punches could of landed harder had they been worded differently

Woods - Also an up and down verse didn't like the fact the smooth punches were all together kinda took the edge of them when they could of landed harder being spaced out, wordplay seemed forced in certain area's but the personals were nice and majority of your other punches landed hard but could of done with better set ups..Overall an ok verse with a few real nice punchlines

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 November 2008 at 7:32am
thanks, all...

3-3... lets keep em' rollin'...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 November 2008 at 8:25am
3-3

more votes please...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 November 2008 at 6:57am
Come on.. its the Final...
 
it'll take 5 - 10 minutes to vote...

it will be appreciated....
 
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