Open Mic: Final Round: Ya'll Not Fuckin' Wit Me

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    Posted: 24 July 2017 at 2:21pm
...you're honestly a nice dude
But I'm a N.W.A. & you gettin' put on ice Cube
Ya body in this bag is turnin' a slight blue
LP a bystander, I'm Highlander ready to slice Cube
This a Mayweather fight Cube, not dancin' but teachin'..
My opponent that all punches thrown are reaches 
If you're on the throne, this impeachment 
The mods too for condonin' this treason
Of slight of hand perception & bogus misleadin'
I'm the grossest with schemes & hopelessly fiendin'
For some dope shit from you, but the coke has been weakened
This is a joke, you ain't remotely a genius
Even though these hoes have spoke their allegiance 
I'm scopin' then squeezin' on this slow fuck to the end
Cuz a mod searched for the thread, must be a magician he said
Cuz what was once gone seemed to show up again 
Call it fabrication but you were the one hidin' the truth
Like when Paul Pierce got "hurt" against LA energizin' the troops
In this case it backfired to prove 
That you're like Colin Farrel, to surive, you'll lie in the booth 
Had you shook, now you baked give Ricky Bobby my word
Every bar is a HIIT to trim the fat off ya body of work
The verses you drop against me are oddly absurd 
Guess I was expectin' more than I prolly deserve 
Real people know honesty hurts, its a bitch to whoever
Decided to unhide that thread to claim you never hid it, whatever
I couldn't give a fuck less since now Ex & Nigs dissin' 
This pissin' contest turned to two dickheads to measure 
Lesson learned here, loyalty isn't as thick as the pressure
But I'll still left the site hangin' stiffer then Chester!
Some may say I sound bitter, how you figure? It's pleasure
To send the same shots with a different Beretta 
Never play the victim cuz my victims don't get up
Lord, your audio made you sound like a cunt & a fag 
Wanna scrap? You're Gordon Hayward, you ain't wantin' that Jazz
His lungs'll collapse from the punches in threads solely 
& put L in the sky like he smoke for my dead homies
Pour out some left OE & watch it soak in the ground 
Tryna be OG but sound like Homie the Clown
Hand me a L, P? L please! Only if I hear his LP
Swell P, Bomb P, word to Sean P, You'll be in heaven with Sean P!
Your 3 star tracks, are just that, average I hear
Mediocrity is somethin' I have surpassed in some years
Yeah my audios are old but you know elevation is key 
You still got 5 years before you start levitatin' to me
Shoot me down, fuck a gun, you better get a bazooka 
Cuz the shit I'm comin' with got the open end of a tuba
Mentionin' my name but the only person who fed it was Cuba
Ya'll lookin' bi-curious, just have sex with the puta!
This was fun & games, I'm done with lames you not fuckin' wit me
Anyone comin' for the top spot not fuckin' wit me 
You're gonna have to send more then a few shots to start fuckin' wit me
'Bout to start fuckin' Rude since respect is not fuckin' wit me
Ya'll finished or ya'll done? I ain't gon' say it nomo
Yall... not... fuckin'... wit... me


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& put L in the sky like he smoke for my dead homies
Pour out some left OE & watch it soak in the ground 
Tryna be OG but sound like Homie the Clown
Hand me a L, P? L please! Only if I hear his LP
Swell P, Bomb P, word to Sean P, You'll be in heaven with Sean P!
Your 3 star tracks, are just that, average I hear
Mediocrity is somethin' I have surpassed in some years
Yeah my audios are old but you know elevation is key 
You still got 5 years before you start levitatin' to me
Shoot me down, fuck a gun, you better get a bazooka 
Cuz the shit I'm comin' with got the open end of a tuba
Mentionin' my name but the only person who fed it was Cuba
Ya'll lookin' bi-curious, just have sex with the puta!


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Some Venom in the words eh iLL,yeah this was direct in punches/disses,I didn't like
the repeating of the same towards the end and in the middle though,but at least you
stressed them enough to make them work still,you seemed to have some grit in the
stomach for this one,i liked it,this is turning out (for the neutral) like table tennis,back
and forth trying to score points so to speak,good job keep flexing and remember to
duck when seeing incoming..peace.
"You need to learn how to make an exit,before you can make an entrance".
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...you're honestly a nice dude
But I'm a N.W.A. & you gettin' put on ice Cube
Ya body in this bag is turnin' a slight blue
LP a bystander, I'm Highlander ready to slice Cube

Call it fabrication but you were the one hidin' the truth
Like when Paul Pierce got "hurt" against LA energizin' the troops

Quote Some may say I sound bitter, how you figure? It's pleasure
To send the same shots with a different Beretta

His lungs'll collapse from the punches in threads solely
& put L in the sky like he smoke for my dead homies
Pour out some left OE & watch it soak in the ground
Tryna be OG but sound like Homie the Clown
Hand me a L, P? L please! Only if I hear his LP
Swell P, Bomb P, word to Sean P, You'll be in heaven with Sean P!
Your 3 star tracks, are just that, average I hear
Mediocrity is somethin' I have surpassed in some years
Yeah my audios are old but you know elevation is key
You still got 5 years before you start levitatin' to me
Shoot me down, fuck a gun, you better get a bazooka
Cuz the shit I'm comin' with got the open end of a tuba
Mentionin' my name but the only person who fed it was Cuba
Ya'll lookin' bi-curious, just have sex with the puta!



Somebody call a medic, there's victims everywhere.

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote spume corrupt Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 August 2017 at 6:56pm
Just been re reading the recent back and forth stuff
This one really stands out man
You fuckin killed it dead here
Very entertaining on every level this, was nothing short of brilliant penmanship

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Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiet

Paul Piece and Phone Booth references back to back

It's strong...it's very strong

Particularly the start and the middle... I got nothing against the way you ended it in terms of the repetition, I just think towards the end in general it didn't have as much firepower

Damn tho
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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