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    Posted: 14 November 2004 at 9:16pm

Welcome to the finals of Lyrical Assault's fourth tournament, Lyrical Warfare...

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  • First to 5; 5-0 is a KO...
  • Maximum 16 bars; no minimum...
  • Blind drops; PM complete verses to me...
  • Crew votes allowed...
  • No deadlines...
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  • Best of luck to both MCs...

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    King Jehu

    I slap bitches, so I'll leave you red faced when the smacks continue
    This ain't a dick, this is winning, so you just don't have it in you
    The only way my punches miss you is if they're on heat seek
    He holds weight like a gymnast, unless he flips, he can't beat me   
    Send this pussy to cat hell, come off the top easy like my hat fell
    You're like ODB... the renegades don't keep you cause you rap well

    Leave this chump crying, your best bet's to grab a bite like it's lunch time
    Stalin's Still under indictment, this time for stolen punchlines
    I'm winning the LW like 20's audio form on this site
    Like tornadoes through a gay parade, I'm storming this dyke
    Stalin admires me, he feels love, claims to be a real thug
    Wants to come meet me, but can't afford it so he deals drugs

    Nice lines? You lack samples, Mine will leave your back mangled
    Played punches... and your verses have more proof than Jack Daniels
    You ain't a heavyweight, but I'm dropping your ass like you lack handles
    Wack handful of weak flows, make stalin get his ass trampled
    I'll make this weak half-Guatemalan cry and bleed gallons
    and i don't have to lower myself to midget status to see stalin
    Your girl don't want you back cause you're a bore, lamest in bed
    She told me to choke you till I burst the main four veins in your head

    He's 'sore anus', I'm set to attack this kid, leaving this asshole comatose
    Be more famous in death, I'll have this bitch sleeping with Advil overdose

    You shoulda let perfecto face me now this is your final hell
    You'd only "Gain" a win now if you cleaned my title belt   *1
    After so many arrests, your asshole is no longer a thin hole
    You'd only have a hot drop if you let go of my verse out your window
    Speaking of drop... you'll lose quickly like fat bitches on atkins  *2
    This heat will make LA have to wipe you off the forum with napkins
    I'll beat you like first times in concerts when they mosh heavily
    Take this win then rub it in like masage therapy
    My verse will fuck you up like you're having rough sex with it
    Only gets votes now if you're pimpin your riders like Xzibit


    *1 Gain is a detergent
    *2 Atkins is a type of diet

    All the personals might not be spotted by ya, but whatever. The stuff in bold is a 18 syllable multi, let's see if you fuckas can spot that...

    Stalin

    dunno if I spelled Chlamydia right but u should know what it is
    contacts as in MSN contacts... shud get the rest

    Jehu gettin 'raped' so bad im leavin his 'ass restless'
    my verse'll 'show ya loss' like fuckin 'tax records'
    Jehu'll drop when he get 'rocked' like a 'fiend wit a crack pipe'
    U a pathetic fuck, tell me why u can only be king on a rap site
    i slay the hardest, spray my targets, everything u portray is garbage
    play ya part kid, only time u have a 'big pun' is listenin to ya 'favorite artist'
    im on a lyrical rampage, stoppin Jehu's 'shine' like 'lampshades'
    U a 'bitch', only thing 'softer' than ya lyrics is ya 'damn legs'
    ur idea of 'rockin a crowd' is a party of gay dudes, I'm slaughterin Jehu
    U even said I got some of the hardest punches, so I'm sorry I face u
    make his rhymes bleed, u couldnt strike on point wit lightning to pine trees
    the only time he'd, put a 'rush in' 2 death is runnin behind me
    ima be fast to waste him, Renegades dont need this fags replacement
    cuz in this tourny, Ill have Jehu 'pullin out' quicker than 'ejaculation'
    Jehu 'blows' for a livin, and I aint sayin he use a 'harmonica'
    cant believe im 'facin this fag' like his 'computer monitor'
    i get rough n mean plus it seems, u thinkin u King but ur queen
    he wanna be a rapper so Ill stick my dick in ur ear and physically fuck ur dreams
    im winnin the tourny but before I finish ya
    Ima 'burn' this mother fucker worse than 'chlamydia'
    commence to flee, or I present the beef, Im 'rippin my contacts' like I dont need a 'lens to see'
    u aint 'shootin', the only time ull come 'correct in bars', is 'filmin prison documentaries'
    u bite my style please confess then, cuz u 'comin up to get fucked' like erections
    fuckin fag, u 'runnin against bush' like Kerry in the last election
    u know U losin, why u so impatient, Im bringin the fire so ya dome is blazin
    he admitted my flows amaze him, im 'takin this while u knocked out' like late 'home invasions'
    u too soft to slain, so ill make ya crawl in pain, ur raw is lame
    only thing wacker than ya lyrics is how u got in the Hall Of Fame
    when im flippin the words'll be, makin ya 'wet the scene' up, cuz u fuckin 'drippin nervously'
    thinkin ya spits is hurtin me, im rippin this nerd wit ease, Jehu's weaker than bitches in surgery
    i hit an scar kids, rip apart scripts, put the 9 down ya throat so even ya shit is tarnished
    Orion got his dick so far up ur ass, I'd be lyin if I said u werent spittin hard, dick

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    King Jehu

    I slap bitches, so I'll leave you red faced when the smacks continue
    This ain't a dick, this is winning, so you just don't have it in you


    flow was on point, nice punch, delivered well.

    The only way my punches miss you is if they're on heat seek
    He holds weight like a gymnast, unless he flips, he can't beat me


    flow was tight, punch came pretty well, but i thought it coulda come harder if you'd have stuck with the concept from the first line insteada usin 2 concepts.    

    Send this pussy to cat hell, come off the top easy like my hat fell
    You're like ODB... the renegades don't keep you cause you rap well


    nice tight bar, cant find any flaws.

    Leave this chump crying, your best bet's to grab a bite like it's lunch time
    Stalin's Still under indictment, this time for stolen punchlines


    agan, tight bar, flow was good, punch was good.

    I'm winning the LW like 20's audio form on this site
    Like tornadoes through a gay parade, I'm storming this dyke


    didnt feel the flow or punch as much in this bar, seemed the punch was a lil' played.

    Stalin admires me, he feels love, claims to be a real thug
    Wants to come meet me, but can't afford it so he deals drugs


    picked it back up again, flow came back as did the punches.

    Nice lines? You lack samples, Mine will leave your back mangled
    Played punches... and your verses have more proof than Jack Daniels

    hot bar, really nice flow with the multies and the punch was clever.

    You ain't a heavyweight, but I'm dropping your ass like you lack handles
    Wack handful of weak flows, make stalin get his ass trampled


    tight as hell flow, jus wasnt feelin the punch as much

    I'll make this weak half-Guatemalan cry and bleed gallons
    and i don't have to lower myself to midget status to see stalin


    again the flow was on, but the punch in this one seemed to miss for me.

    Your girl don't want you back cause you're a bore, lamest in bed
    She told me to choke you till I burst the main four veins in your head


    haha picked it up again, nice.

    He's 'sore anus', I'm set to attack this kid, leaving this asshole comatose
    Be more famous in death, I'll have this bitch sleeping with Advil overdose

    again flow was perfect, punch hit decent.

    You shoulda let perfecto face me now this is your final hell
    You'd only "Gain" a win now if you cleaned my title belt


    nice wordplay , nice flow, good solid punch.

    After so many arrests, your asshole is no longer a thin hole
    You'd only have a hot drop if you let go of my verse out your window

    hmmm, flow was tight but i wasnt feelin this punch at all.

    Speaking of drop... you'll lose quickly like fat bitches on atkins 
    This heat will make LA have to wipe you off the forum with napkins

    flow was on, punch picked up a little but still not up there with some of ya bars in this drop.

    I'll beat you like first times in concerts when they mosh heavily
    Take this win then rub it in like masage therapy


    felt the flow dropped at the end of this bar slightly, punch was ok.

    My verse will fuck you up like you're having rough sex with it
    Only gets votes now if you're pimpin your riders like Xzibit


    good solid closer.

    Stalin

    Jehu gettin 'raped' so bad im leavin his 'ass restless'
    my verse'll 'show ya loss' like fuckin 'tax records'


    i didnt feel this flowed that well, punch was ok but coulda had more impact.

    Jehu'll drop when he get 'rocked' like a 'fiend wit a crack pipe'
    U a pathetic fuck, tell me why u can only be king on a rap site


    really picked it up, flow was tight nice hard punch, probably woulda been a better opener.

    i slay the hardest, spray my targets, everything u portray is garbage
    play ya part kid, only time u have a 'big pun' is listenin to ya 'favorite artist'


    great flow with the multies, good punch too.

    im on a lyrical rampage, stoppin Jehu's 'shine' like 'lampshades'
    U a 'bitch', only thing 'softer' than ya lyrics is ya 'damn legs'


    first line was fire, second was the ice to put it out, didnt feel that second line at all.

    ur idea of 'rockin a crowd' is a party of gay dudes, I'm slaughterin Jehu
    U even said I got some of the hardest punches, so I'm sorry I face u


    the gay thing has been played to death, flow was good but the punch was weak to me.

    make his rhymes bleed, u couldnt strike on point wit lightning to pine trees
    the only time he'd, put a 'rush in' 2 death is runnin behind me


    picked it up, nice wordplay, good flow, decent punch.

    ima be fast to waste him, Renegades dont need this fags replacement
    cuz in this tourny, Ill have Jehu 'pullin out' quicker than 'ejaculation'


    nice flow, punch was played.

    Jehu 'blows' for a livin, and I aint sayin he use a 'harmonica'
    cant believe im 'facin this fag' like his 'computer monitor'


    flow was tight, but seriously drop the 'gay' punches coz they are played out sooo much.

    i get rough n mean plus it seems, u thinkin u King but ur queen
    he wanna be a rapper so Ill stick my dick in ur ear and physically fuck ur dreams


    picked it up loads, really solid punch an as usual tight flow.

    im winnin the tourny but before I finish ya
    Ima 'burn' this mother fucker worse than 'chlamydia'


    good hard punch, nice flow.

    commence to flee, or I present the beef, Im 'rippin my contacts' like I dont need a 'lens to see'
    u aint 'shootin', the only time ull come 'correct in bars', is 'filmin prison documentaries'


    dope flow, nice punch, good wordplay.

    u bite my style please confess then, cuz u 'comin up to get fucked' like erections
    fuckin fag, u 'runnin against bush' like Kerry in the last election


    went back to 'fag' disses, but this one was actually far more original than most, decent bar.

    u know U losin, why u so impatient, Im bringin the fire so ya dome is blazin
    he admitted my flows amaze him, im 'takin this while u knocked out' like late 'home invasions'


    decent bar, good flow n punch.

    u too soft to slain, so ill make ya crawl in pain, ur raw is lame
    only thing wacker than ya lyrics is how u got in the Hall Of Fame


    really nice bar, good hard punch, delivered the concept well.

    when im flippin the words'll be, makin ya 'wet the scene' up, cuz u fuckin 'drippin nervously'
    thinkin ya spits is hurtin me, im rippin this nerd wit ease, Jehu's weaker than bitches in surgery


    insane flow, good hard punch, props.

    i hit an scar kids, rip apart scripts, put the 9 down ya throat so even ya shit is tarnished
    Orion got his dick so far up ur ass, I'd be lyin if I said u werent spittin hard, dick


    played punch, but it was delivered pretty well, not a bad closer.

    conclusion

    Jehu came far more consistent with his punches, both had dope flow and good wordplay, Stalin might even have taken this one if he didnt use so many 'gay' punches, for a tounrey final, you really gotta do somethin more than call someone gay, no matter how well you do it. Props to both but my vote is definately Jehu

    peace.


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    shit.. i get the first vote - unless some other fucker gets in first.. and i have to separate this..

    Jehu. Good verse - Nice use of multis, and your attemps at known and obscure personals were commendable - it flowed nicely.. and it hit relatively hard.

    Stalin.  Ive never really read much of your stuff - you seemed to have passed me by.. you went straight for the jugular.. which i appreciate - all the elements were there.

    In my head i'm rating this more or less even - so i have to go on the verse i "felt" more.

    Which (JUST - so dont sodding cry) was..

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    JEHU-nice multies BUT in some places i felt u sacruficed them fo content... sum hot wordplay sum simple stuff which still worked as well, personals i think u didnt have enough but the imagination was dope and the final 5bars ripped him apart!

    STALIN-ur flow is ILL if u can rap on audio that is MAJOR right thurr.. so his multies were hot along wid jehu's but i felt  his were mo' street so i felt his more, sum wordplay was impressive sum was average but i think u took that category too... the gay shit got annoyin but u had the fire power

    hmmm.. this is close but when it comes to this

    jehu-'leave this chump crying, your best bet's to grab a bite like it's lunch time
    Stalin's Still under indictment, this time for stolen punchlines
    I'm winning the LW like 20's audio form on this site
    Like tornadoes through a gay parade, I'm storming this dyke
    Stalin admires me, he feels love, claims to be a real thug
    Wants to come meet me, but can't afford it so he deals drugs'

    to this

    stalin-'Jehu gettin 'raped' so bad im leavin his 'ass restless'
    my verse'll 'show ya loss' like fuckin 'tax records'
    Jehu'll drop when he get 'rocked' like a 'fiend wit a crack pipe'
    U a pathetic fuck, tell me why u can only be king on a rap site
    i slay the hardest, spray my targets, everything u portray is garbage
    play ya part kid, only time u have a 'big pun' is listenin to ya 'favorite artist'


    STALIN made me LAUGH and JEHU didnt... simple

    vote:STALIN













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    nice drops...worth the wait...

    jehu - good flow, good wordplay, nice personals, good multis (sacrificed content in some places), solid punches, overall a more consistent drop.

    stalin - tight flow, good wordplay, good multis, a few punches were weak and/or played but most were very solid, overused 'gay' concept, a more dynamic drop (more weak (less good) bars but the strong points were very good).

    Very close...

    Vote: Stalin squeeks one out.

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    everybody who doesnt know .. should know by now... and if u dont.. ima teach u...

    PUNCHES... strait quality punches are what win battles... multies flow and even personals are pretty much statistical....

    a quality puncher along with a combination of wordplay and mixing in nice punches is what i look for...

    jehu... up to this point ive seen u more as an overall writer and average attacker.. never a real cut throat puncher with witty punches and wordplay.... like i said.. up to this point

    stalin... nice man.. nice ideas... personals.. punches were clean.... structure and flow isnt a thing to me really cuz its on the web.. so no loss of points for either of u....

    close battle.. as close as ive seen....

    V/ JEHU

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    a quality puncher along with a combination of wordplay and mixing in nice PERSONALS** is what i look for...
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    This is a good battle, both emcee's coming with some nice shit..

    Jehu, flow is nice, rhyme scheme is on point (as expected), as for punches..some nice personal punch's, lets see..

    You shoulda let perfecto face me now this is your final hell
    You'd only "Gain" a win now if you cleaned my title belt

    cool..

    wordplay was pretty weak in this script tho, a lot of played lines..such as these.

    The only way my punches miss you is if they're on heat seek
    He holds weight like a gymnast, unless he flips, he can't beat me

    Send this pussy to cat hell, come off the top easy like my hat fell

    and also some lines i just wasnt feeling at all.

    I'm winning the LW like 20's audio form on this site

    thats an aight concept but it could of been flipped better perhaps.

    overal it was a good verse, complimenting your strongest points and your not so strong ones. continuous multis helped a nice flow become seamless...as for concept working and wordplay/punches, it wasnt that great.

    Stalin..

    The first bars were pretty tight, surprised me to be honest, nice flow and multis as well, tho some lines streched(Ie The last one)..You also had some played wordplay, but you worked them better then your oponent and turned them into some nice punch and meta combos,

    he admitted my flows amaze him, im 'takin this while u knocked out' like late 'home invasions'

    play ya part kid, only time u have a 'big pun' is listenin to ya 'favorite artist'

    exc..

    your verse did fall off a lil in the middle, but picked up again at the end, im pressed by this drop. good shit..

    All in all...stalin takes this without 2 much problems for me, cool battle.one

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    wow... ^^^ alotta good ish happenin

    -- Jehu nice line "LW" and "comatose" line, punch every line, nice flow,
    some end rhymes were simple, i wuz lookin for more complex multies
    and structure which iz what i usually see...good wordplay like the
    "gymnast" line... but shit's tight..."choke the four veins in ur head" --
    haha that wuz witty/clever

    --Stalin multie's galore, funny ass punchez, nice metas... and some pretty
    nice rhymes, "Big Pun" line was killer... sumtimes flow a bit off, but
    constant punchez...

    Hot Battle... LW finals wuz good... no dr/no hate/ str8 vote....

    v/ Stalin... came solid and was impressed by the quality of the verse,
    through in and through out he came wit it. Jehu u did too, just felt Stalin
    brought his A+ Game and u brought da A-Game...

    syk-wit-it battle propz... that's whats up ... R.E.N.E.G.A.D.Es
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 December 2004 at 6:45pm

    Stalin wins 5-2 and wins Lyrical Warfare... Stalin will face -Orion- (that's me children) for the Lyrical Assault title shortly...

    Well done to both of you, Renegades for life... 1

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