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SwordedStylez 
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 Posted: 16 June 2014 at 8:34pm |
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^^good looks on the feed, and yeah, I'm a bit of a horrorcore fiend from way back so I tend to drop at least 2 or 3 offensive or shocking lines in a verse like this where it's about making an impact. OK now for the feed.
Nig - Firstly, there's a reason your verse went first, that opener is straight fire, great rhymes, great flow, great delivery. lines 3-8 are ridiculous flow-wise, and I'm soo jealous I didn't write them. JFK line was immense, Grandpa Simpson with the humour. Just sick. Chain - You suck. Haha nah, this was all you. You told me when I came back that you "fell off" and that's nonsense. Effortless flow, that satan/scrotum line is one of my faves I've ever seen you write, I love that. You already know I consider you among the elite on this site, this further cements that opinion. Ill - I gotta admit to a little jealousy at your style. You absolutely scream "east coast underground" in your lyrics, and I hate you for that because I don't haha. You're like the best bit sof some of my fave rappers rolled into a new style, and it's really charismatic to read. damaging shit/cancerous spit couplet is pure butter, dope as fuck. Exo - yours was actually my fave of the bunch. I'm not sure if it's because we have a similar approach to alot of our rhymes (your tongue punch concept sounds like something I'd've come up wiht myself tbh) but I can rap your shit straight up, on beat, as I'm reading it. I can't believe you thought you let the side down to be honest, both you and Chain had me incredibly jealous at most of your verses. Kept it clever to purple skies is some of the best writing I've seen since I've been back, and I wish I'd wrote that section, real talk. Best collabo ever imho, noone's fucking with it. Anyone wanna prove me wrong, I await your drop. |
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 16 June 2014 at 8:53pm |
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^^^Word!
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Posted: 16 June 2014 at 9:52pm |
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"Nigma....First bar was fucking crazy, Im laughing hard, I got visions of the scene its a comedy but yet the message is not fucking about, that bar had everything and sets this off really well.........I liked most of this piece, solid as fuck rhymes for the most part.....Hand skills thru paper planes to faith reclaimed stood out for me......Dope set to open" "CH CH Chain chain....I can see a chain drop from ten meters after 10 doubles....An it still flows to perfection! How the fuck do you do that like that?............Got dam it......Really dope drop here, loved reading it" "Ill....Some really nice stuff here, Opening four was straight fire.....Rhyming in Jewish n Mecca bar was dope and I loved that umbilical cord set........Nice work" "What the fucked happen to EX?.....................Only jking....You'd get my fucking vote regardless fam. Dope as fuck flow here main almost on a level wth chains flow....Some of the internal and end rhyming was top end, keep it clever, heads get severed was a standout for me" "SS......Loved that violent aggression you bring to this.......Kicked'n beaten was a great choice of vocab in the early lines.......Nice transitions thru all of this, some of the content was a bit OTT I thought!.........Jesus section thru to the end was fire. Obliterate was another great word selection and use......Very skilled Overall" "Dope collab everybody came with quality shitt Scotty, can you get some crowns in here ............5 of em.................................Very entertaining lads"
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 16 June 2014 at 10:30pm |
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Nigma - took a more conventional style here and absolutely murdered it. Some lines seem stretched but they all were very well thought out and worded. You're on top of your game. CHAIN - So god damn smooth, your word choice is always the flyest I dont give a damn who says what. "looking for a cup to pour the coconut ciroc in" I cracked the largest smile at that line. Ill - This was dope. The things you chose to talk about were nice, I didnt know you had those type's of references. props, you held your own with some very talented writers. Ex - You did your thing here. I would have liked to see a more polished verse (im guessing it was a quick deadline?) but regardless, you hit your stride with full force towards the end "is smoke until it hurts ya eyes and you are trippin under purple skies... My rhymes will make the moon & earth collide & Raise the tide... And with a razor slice is how my flow develops... A deadly sicko & skitzo is how I'm known to fella's... We're grown gorillas while all your flows are so vanilla... I'm so chinchilla classy a knight in shining armor... despite the mic I'm armed with I still go and try to fight this karma...." SS - You already know bro. When I read your verses i get a vibe of supreme confidence every time. This was no exception. I also enjoyed the shock value of some of your bars. over-all this was a very strong piece. Congrats to all involved. But also a big fuck you for the non-invite.
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 16 June 2014 at 10:47pm |
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Lol word that's for the feed fellas... Smooth what up tho
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 16 June 2014 at 11:09pm |
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Yeah thanks for the feed, and Smooth, believe me when I say that if I'd read more of yo stuff at the time I started organising this shit you'd've been on there for real, I just simply hadn't seen as much of your work as I have now. Hit me up anytime with any topic and I'll happily oblige with a collaboration any time you want. Spume - hit the nail right between his cunting eyes mate, OTT is what I do, doesn't always make me the most popular of people, but fuck it, lol.
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 17 June 2014 at 12:01am |
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Just wanted to add that it's great you guys say I have an east coast vibe (jerz stand up!) but a lot of ppl hear my tracks and say I sound like ghost face with better lyrics lol
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 17 June 2014 at 12:14am |
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That works though, or did Staten Island relocate to the West Coast? hahaha
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 17 June 2014 at 12:15am |
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LOL....
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Posted: 17 June 2014 at 12:19am |
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good shit...i dont generally drop feed back on a OM, but this was Epic!
Nigma.....I Didnt know u had that type of style in you, was diggin you for the opener made me want to read the rest......u definitely captivated me with your humor and punchlines.... Chain.....As all of your pieces Ive read this was straight fire....killin those multies, flow off the charts, spaced out lyrics...the list goes on and on.....good follower to Nigma.... Ill....Vet through and through and it fuckin shows.....the way you worded this made me go "Jesus Christ I dont ever think of that".....way to bring the Heat...... Exo...Whatchu mean Weakest?....definitely hard to say weak....ur verse was straight DOPE no cut ya feel? flow was phenomenal, imo u had the best bar in the collabo..... SS.....skull fuckin and rape? my 2 fave things...lol...no but seriously way to bring the edgy-ness....definitely appreciate seeing some shock value in a Boost Piece......and the way this just rolls off the tongue soooooo smoothly...uda thought I wrote it....JK...Props go to U AND to you ALL............ I bow to your Sirs......Nice Fucking Drop....I want in on the next one...If there is one......6 kings?
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Posted: 17 June 2014 at 7:41am |
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The formatting was cool, I like the lines in between to kind of 'pass the mic', it tied everything together for me. Flow was great on all verses, as I was reading it I could hear how it would go on a track. Grade A shit from all 5 kings.
Congratulations on the kid ILL.
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 17 June 2014 at 11:30am |
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Good looks all, very happy with the response to this piece.
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Posted: 19 June 2014 at 1:51am |
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This might be the best and from me at least the most respected replies I have seen in a long time...Thanks so much for the breakdowns it really means a lot cus well hell this is why we do it...SS i really like the way you positioned the verses..
Nigma: In all honesty I personally felt this is one of your best verses I have seen from you...and thats saying a lot...Cus I always put you in my top three. It has to be the flow that is just on another level..that first bar with the hitch hikers was fucking hilarious I thought. "Get a grip, you masochists take cactus shits like happy children Baffled when the rapture hits and candle wicks turn black and chill Then graphic scriptures vanish and relapse inside the baddest villain Act a bitch like drama women, match my wits with half the killings Battle to demand respect when hand to fist you activists of pacifism Catch all that? You grasp and feel me? Rabble back and act your digits Smash this kid shit, slaps’ll give you fatter lips than Grandpa Simpson Hand skills seen as mass appealing, magic tricks..-------------DAMN...that grandpa simpson line and the flow with multiez is impeccable... be proud of this shit homie. Then you said the paper plane assasin line with JFK and my jaw dropped no joke....damn homie Age of snakes creating fame from blastin all ya bastards to reclaim my faith Like praying to a pastor in a way to wish for ashes, this my saving grace A massacre, the greatest face of Canada whose fate remains immaculate Fact: I will create a taste amazing as when mayonnaise on sandwiches---Homie you never let up with the flow and creativity....this verse is classic man...be proud of this one...made me jealous CHAIN: The way you can keep the same rhyme scheme going is fucking like no other. You really should take pride in that cus no one else can do that...I't's just ONE of the reasons you are put above everyone else. "I was flowing off the cuff in a moleskin with my doctrine Throwing up my guts and these odorous concoctions I wrote 'em down in Dutch while Odin wasn't watching Looking for a cup to pour the Coconut Ciroc in ...totalling the bars, so he told me I'd need Cochran I hollered at Pandora and told her "open up the box then" -----WOW with the flow and the word usage...that ciroc line was just so smooth and pure and then followed with the pandoras box line...SMH round of applause... Yeah, I know emceeing through a modem ain't what's poppin' In the age of deadin' one's procreative options I heard that folks agreeing with the homophobes is not 'in' Fuck it, I'm supposed to be on totem poles, I'm Top 10 Acapella goon spewing opium on hot springs----what?!?!?! that was dope as fuck the totem poles and top ten was crazy...and the hopspin to follow up was just raw and TRUTHFUL Ill scripts and SS I'lll get at yall tomorrow gotta get some sleep but i got you |
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 19 June 2014 at 6:54pm |
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bumpin Ex for feed lol
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Posted: 20 June 2014 at 1:40am |
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Illscripts...first off I love your name ill scriptz is fucking dope.
"My head is equal to the dead & lethal preferably the death of people The flesh pieces left in meat cubes, my breath is lethal that’ll make you rest in fetal What’s in my breast’ll beat you - measuring two lesser evils on a bed of needles"---Damn just noticed you me and SS have the same style of writing. The flow is fucking crazy and you really know how to draw the reader in...i loved the whats in my breast will beat you...that was dope Damaging shit like the planet in rifts – fists can smash granite to bits from one bang of the wrist Cancerous spit answered with wit, hardly a threat – pharmacy techs ain’t handling ScriptZ---the internals were really stand out to me..the pharmacy techs line was just crazy as fuck....damn dude for real your really making me a big fan of your writing. Since the umbilical cord I made syllables morph with invincible force Leave rhythms a corpse destroying delivery and flow from any visible source Deliberately blow the wick from the torch your pitiful scorch gets simple retorts These criminal lords want minimal wars when I spit on the boards iLLs the pinnacle orb you imbecile make life unlivable for any quizzical dorks (Punch’em out with more hooks then a fisherman’s wharf!)---WHOA dude this was incredible...especially that last line cus I am a fisherman in real life. the flow internals and vocab were just flawless. You should be proud of this verse. this was dope on another level. great job homie SS: I actually like how you brought the horrorcore aspect to this. It gave more character to the piece in general..not to mention you killed it... Killin people that I meet'n pinned with needles, kicked'n beaten I leave'em stripped'n eaten, tear the flesh from a cold victim Hear my breath'n my slow diction, fear of death, a bold vision I'm obsessed with wreckin text, it's a sickness and I've got it I'd like to skull fuck your mother, and jizz in her eye socket I like to take pills, get great thrills as I rape children Sick bliss at pained faces, get chills as my hate fills'em===the imagery and the darkness of these lines was incredible not to mention a flow that is stellar and I love how we rhyme in the same way...grat minds think a like I guess lol Jesus? I'll abuse the bitch, you'd think that he'd be used to it Obliterate his features with the splinters of the Crucifix---I loved this line damn... I have abused jesus in my rhymes as well and children and house pets....this was some raw shit tho. i also liked how you changed your scheme up a bit towards the end...I also love how old school cats call it boards i do the same...dope verse homie and I love how you positioned all of these. props to you homie overall..it was a pleasure working with yalll...we will do it again in the near future |
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 20 June 2014 at 1:45am |
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Good looks on the feed man, I also notice how similar you, me and Ill are in style. I guess we prolly have a lot of similar influences. (Good taste ;) )
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 20 June 2014 at 2:00am |
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No doubt thanks Ex
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Posted: 20 June 2014 at 4:26pm |
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Wow....
I cant believe I almost missed this collabo, I've been so damn busy recently that I havent really had time to check OM's. If I get time later I'd like to break this all down....but overall what I checked is dope as fuck. Each one shined with thier own personal writing style on display. I thought Exo spazzed on this shit and Nigma your talent of pulling words together and forming your own angles to concepts is flawless. Chain, you already know man I respect your gangsta haha, when you spit you always give the "this shit is to easy" feel. I swear its sick what you can do lyrically. SS, I know you are a dude from back in the day but not since I've been here...but you def have your own style and kinda pound your chest bar for bar here. I'm always down with styles like that, just gives that extra appeal to the words for me. And ILL you've been staying acitve and droppin heat in the OM's and I thought you fit right in with this collabo. I liked your closing bars too.
Sick collabo, although I think 2 Kings is better then 5. lol.....relax its jokes. haha
Well written piece here by all thats involved.
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 20 June 2014 at 4:31pm |
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Good looks on the feed.
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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Posted: 21 June 2014 at 12:03am |
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Wow @ the feedback.
SS you did it. Stay tuned, I gotta feed this shit too. |
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