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    Posted: 21 October 2018 at 8:07pm
skimmed this... pretty dope stop will come back and give better feed. Props man youve come a long way
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Yo flamer I'm pretty impressed with this, you've gotten so much better from since you first started coming around. There was substance wit and flow in this. Big props.

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Imagery so vividly intrinsic you might miss it..
Though you never even had the chance to witness it
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Neek Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 October 2018 at 1:39am
Originally posted by Flame!!!! Flame!!!! wrote:


Reptillian demon, he pretends he believes it
Villainous even, greatest weakness is feelings


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Originally posted by Flame On!!!! Flame On!!!! wrote:


Least bit appealing, yard long talons
Hard to tell the rawr from howling his songs from ballads
Scars and scratches, junk yard dogs at em

All mind screw matter, hope to win the game
Sees so much heat that he can blow it in your face
Name goes Fuego, quotes can get deranged
Only get location from Smoke from spitting flames


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Originally posted by Flame!!!! Flame!!!! wrote:


Sock it to prove things, dominant, too strange
Predator collector that's the top of the food chain
Watch it or move take peace in hysterics then
Try to fly clean now your wings look like Icarus
Rhyme the right schemes like a beast y'all are fearing if
He's grimy and clean cuz he'll eat you pussies. Period
Defeat you from experience, no one's challenged him in decades
If you think you were the first you would have to get your head straight
Snap at all the dead weight, evicted off this island
Simply ain't surviving like your snacking on some lead paint
No traffic in his head space, primordial instinct
He's the guy that takes all of the oars outta shits creek
And stores them in his sink, gargantuan Goliath
Cant damage a damn giant




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honestly. this was dope. flow was raw. verbiage was onpoint. super dope flex piece.
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yo the flow was crazy. man this is like Self Activate steeze right here and that is def a compliment. 

His weapons are oral, verbal combustion
Personal touch is the words that you fuck with

ha iono why but i fucks with that line heavy!! lets collaborate, pawtna. 


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Just fucking WOW
Brother I would not say this if I didn’t mean it
β€œThat was next level writing on show” You aced this right out
The cleverly placed rhyming you employed throughout and the air of unfuckwithable momentum you created with your material were great benchmarks for you to cross over into, and you done it with style no less
This should wake and shake some people up ....Most elevated member 2018 award being owned here
I’m on my phone bro so I’m not breaking down bars just giving you the deserved props

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